[KCBlack]

My friend doesn't have an account here, but made a vid and would like some constructive criticism on it.

http://video.google.com/videoplay?
docid=7596975370787982760

(Just add "docid=...." to the end of "...videoplay?". It wouldn't work with the full link XP)

[RingerINC]

Originally Posted by KCBlack

My friend doesn't have an account here, but made a vid and would like some constructive criticism on it.

Man that was annoying

Edit: and he's pretty wack, like his techniques pretty rough and everything seems a bit forced. If he slows down and gets stuff properly before trying to go at a million miles an hour then he should be on track.

[KCBlack]

I got everything you're saying, but why was it 'annoying'?

[chitownbboy]

I think he's referring to what he had to go through just to watch the video as annoying...

Your friend seems too rushed, he should start breathing.

[B-boy Jp]

yes tell him to listen to the beat. It is there for a reason ya know. And tell him he sucks lol, kidding. But yeah tell him to feel the beat and slow down a lil.

[Pink Fury]

1. Get a song with a beat, or get a camera that can actually record it
2. Get the ass higher when you're doing footwork.
3. Don't look like you're running during toprock.

[SliP]

Lol, his toprock is all over the place, his toprock should flow...and about his footwork, I'd recommend him to do it with his palms up, but he doesn't have to if he doesn't want to...

[AKz]

His toprock didn't flow with the music. He wasn't necessairly rocking the beat. Remember Bboying isn't all about speed, looks like hes rushing through the song. Try to listen and just enjoy it.

[B-boy Jp]

I looked at the video again... and seriously if he isnt going to feel the beat he is never going to improve at all tell him.

[djbreal]

not on beat
sloppy looking
toprock was like a bit crazy. he was moving around like a chinchilla when you scare it

[Kirbzzila]

how does your friend think he did????

[KCBlack]

Originally Posted by Kirbzzila

how does your friend think he did????

He thinks he did better than me. I showed him all the comments, and now he hates bboy.org... XP I told him that accepting criticism is part of anything you start. Then he got mad when I showed him some of the comments on my video...

[BbOyJeOpArDy]

ahahaha tell him it's alright, we're just people on the internet tryna help

but um, on his footwork his legs are sticking out too much, most of the time when you six-step you should be decently compact not going all over the place