[M4A1]

This is the first battle that I've participated in, and I'm the second guy.
There were no rules; just dance :P

Can you guys give me some critique?



(yes I started 5 years ago, don't make fun of me.)

[StylistiC-SMiLeY]

Have you been breaking consistently for 5 years?

[AmateurNgo]

I watched it for the first seven and everyone was laughing and stuff. Your footwork is okay, but you should practice more and develop more style to it.

[M4A1]

Originally Posted by StylistiC-SMiLeY Have you been breaking consistently for 5 years?

Do I have to embarrass that? *embarrassed*

Originally Posted by AmateurNgo I watched it for the first seven and everyone was laughing and stuff. Your footwork is okay, but you should practice more and develop more style to it.

Yeah; it's my 2nd or so month of actually seriously breaking. thanks for the feedback

[Freydom]

You got a lot of work cut out man.. what you have to do is..
work on your foundation. Even during your toprock I saw you lost rhythm and had that pause for a little bit. You have to practice a lot harder from now on, like a full set. Going from toprock to footwork, footwork to freeze, or even footwork to power in your case.

Practice your transitions to these steps, and practice rocking more to the music, and just practice your footwork. Practice everything. Work on our foundation the most, like your musicality and foundational steps.

Keep working hard mann.

[M4A1]

Originally Posted by Freydom You got a lot of work cut out man.. what you have to do is.. work on your foundation. Even during your toprock I saw you lost rhythm and had that pause for a little bit. You have to practice a lot harder from now on, like a full set. Going from toprock to footwork, footwork to freeze, or even footwork to power in your case. Practice your transitions to these steps, and practice rocking more to the music, and just practice your footwork. Practice everything. Work on our foundation the most, like your musicality and foundational steps. Keep working hard mann.

^this.

I'm one of those idiots who decided to learn powermoves first, explains why I suck so much and have no foundation lol