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This Is One Fierce Set -
11-05-2009, 11:53 PM
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~Bboy Chronos~
Until you value yourself, you will not value your time. Until you value your time, you will not do anything with it. -M.Scott Peck In reality, killing time is only the name for another of the multifarious ways by which Time kills us. ~Osbert Sitwell |
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11-06-2009, 12:09 AM
you're rushing alot on your moves, slow down in some places.
since you're rushing so much, you're also sloppy in some places. was an aight set lol if thats you, pretty good for someone who only started for a couple months but yes, im sure you know you have some things in that set you can improve |
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11-06-2009, 12:19 AM
Oh, I remember you from awhile back.
I can honestly say that you improved quite drastically from before. Some places were quite awkward though, probably due to the speed. Try slowing down a little to maintain the form and smoothness of things. Listen to the music. I noticed you were trying to match the BPM of the song, which was good, shows that you were open-minded. But I was slightly disappointed when you didn't hit that beat near the end. Keep dancing. |
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I'm with Infest: Fear me too.
Korea's sexy queen is my wife. Bish. Unban Syrenz @_@ |
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11-06-2009, 12:50 AM
Its a pretty nice set all together i agree with venilla and k3v1n that you should slow down a little bit, and with your toprock your indian step was really off beat so just find that beat and stick with it, and also it would been really sick if you wouldve finished your set doing a freeze on the break. All together that wasnt bad and it wasnt great so just be a little more confident and with your style and slow down and that will make that set pretty dang deliciuos yo.
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BBoy Blackjack reppin Livermore-LHS & Bankhead Breakin
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11-06-2009, 12:58 AM
shoulda did something bad ass at the orgasm of the song like a suicide or something.. just a comment i try to make the best parts of the song pop.
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You say my name you make me chuckle.
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11-06-2009, 03:02 AM
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ROME (Rise Of Michigan Elements)
Get Ready For The Roman Empire 
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11-06-2009, 01:06 PM
wasn't fierce, but not bad. advice, same as everyone else said.
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Bboy Element -Flying Chimps-
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11-07-2009, 12:08 PM
thanks everybody, i will try to slow down a bit and try to clean some things up.
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~Bboy Chronos~
Until you value yourself, you will not value your time. Until you value your time, you will not do anything with it. -M.Scott Peck In reality, killing time is only the name for another of the multifarious ways by which Time kills us. ~Osbert Sitwell |
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11-07-2009, 12:12 PM
yeah because some parts were a tid bit sloppy but if you can get clean, quick, and still hit the beats (musicality) then that' would've been one fierce set
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11-07-2009, 01:23 PM
what do you think were some of the sloppy parts?
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~Bboy Chronos~
Until you value yourself, you will not value your time. Until you value your time, you will not do anything with it. -M.Scott Peck In reality, killing time is only the name for another of the multifarious ways by which Time kills us. ~Osbert Sitwell |
