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05-28-2008, 05:53 AM
IMO Lose the 'the'. It'll sound more catchy
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05-28-2008, 06:06 AM
they call themself mostly S.OT.A. without the 'the' it 'll be not verry good name I think
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05-28-2008, 06:13 AM
I think either drop the arrows around the bboy or go more nuts with them. Right now they seem a bit tacked on.
Oh and just wondering, where will this be used? |
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05-28-2008, 06:16 AM
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HE WHO TRAInS, HE GAINS
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05-28-2008, 10:29 AM
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Dont you wish your boyfriend hit beats like me?
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Location: Atlanta
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05-28-2008, 11:18 AM
for a LOGO? traditionally? too busy... and "state of the art" gets lost. I would arrange the pieces differently - are these layered in a file where you can adjust them? There are a # of ways you can make it stand out better or work better as a LOGO, vs just a graphic lockup.
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05-28-2008, 12:31 PM
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05-28-2008, 01:02 PM
i agree with my blue friend. on a t shirt this would be a tight pic but as a logo no.
it is way to busy. be like lupe and dumb it down. |
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05-28-2008, 01:32 PM
as i said... it's terminology: are you trying to do a "logo" or a "lockup"?
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05-28-2008, 06:18 PM
well i dont know what a lock up means , i'm a little nOOb
but its for on a t shirt a sort of yeah picture that represents our crew .. not really logo but yeah .. just everybody in the crew will wear this t shirt with this picture and behind on back, you'll see the name of the dancer |
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05-28-2008, 06:22 PM
I like it
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