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COOL STORY in Honor of Lemon: Don't Delete Moderators, Not Hate! - 08-30-2006, 02:42 AM

Hey everybody, I decided I wanted to write a bboy story for everyone and bboy lemonhead in honor of his confidence, bravery and show I respect him. No strings attached for those of you who know my style it's just all in good fun as I'm not a true competitor for obvious reasons. This is a simulation of what would happen, stay tuned it's interesting and pay attention it's entertaining, it's like reading a short story by me. I'm not in school so haven't written any papers or reports so I want to do this just bare with it. The setting is me at age 23 at an exclusives only party at ASU in an apartment. Yes I have already done all this, I am only changing my age to my current age for realism purposes. Exclusives as in only alite athletes in their sport who have proven themselves in battle and have something impressive to show for it. My old roommate Tyler is the #1 center in the state of az for football '02, Danny Shrapple (secret bboy) 3rd boys singles tennis at state '01, Andrew Italian ex. gymnast and pro jetskier, 2 College Varsity Basketball players, one black one white, a rich scary white thug, a really big fat bald 30 year old white man surrounded by 20 serority girls, and Jordan an adopbted 5ft2 rich asian upcoming drugdeale/thug on the scene seeing how he just moved to arizona is watching TV. For fantasy purposes Ronnie Ruen is here too just to make me happy, and to have a real real bboy here. I am sitting at a table with Tyler, Andrew the scary white guy and we are smoking. The two basketball players are in the kitchen talking. I notice one of the serority girls keeps giving me this funny smile, and it makes me uncomfortable. Ruen is sitting in a chair being a good boy like a ghost. He ain't ever going to change. We receive word that a 14 year old japanese kid who lives in Waterloo, Belgium and calls himself Bboy Lemon is coming to the party, reason undisclosed to us. Ruen chuckles to himself when he hears of this news. I roll my eyes at Ruen. Nobody else cares except a couple girls prepare for his arrival after hearing the news. Shortly afterwards there is a knock at the door, one of the girls opens the door and greets the young Japanese Belgain man. The rest of the girls start to get fussy and the bald white man with ten girls on each side just sits there. THey start eyeing the japanese visitor sending him mixed messages. Shrapple is just sitting at the table smoking, oblivioius to who just came in. The girl who greeted the young man asks him what his name is. He introduces himself as B-Boy Lemon. Ruen looks up from his chair, but bboy lemon doesn't even notice because he is being charmed by a rich pretty american serority girl. She responds "OH! Okay, how long have you been dancing?" Surprised she even knew what a bboy was, Bboy Lemon responds "I've been b-boying 8 months." politely. Lets name the girl Shari. Shari is slightly started and says politely back, "Oh! Okay," she then begins to maneuver her hand towards the table and she points at me and says "see that guy, he's been dancing for 7 years." You grow a small smirk on the right side of your face as I subtly raise my hand in acknowledgement. The basketball players are both well over 6ft tall and they bring some alcohol to our table. You notice and handsome hispanic man sitting on the side queitly and sense that he is a very bad man. He looks b ack at you then gets up from his chair as you remember you're having a conversation with Shari. Shari asks you where are you from? and you respond Belgium proudly as you were. Ruen joins us at the table. Shari responds "Oh, Okay" while losing interest in the conversation you notice Jordan the small asian boy sitting on the floor to your right watching a movie being a good boy. He snowboards. The hispanic man seems to bemaking a commotion over at the table grabbing your attention. He looks familiar and so does the half asian kid at the table, but you can't quite put your finger on where you've seen them before. Ruen takes a little drink. You want to ask Shari who that man is but are scared to be rude. Shari catches your interest in the man and answers your question as if she knew what you were thinking, She says with a shaky voice, "That's Ronnie Ruen, he's a B-Boy too!" Ronnie completely ignores everyone and just focuses on whatever his task at hand is. B-Boy Lemon points at me and asks who is that? Shari says kindly "Oh that's just shrapple." You realize you know who I am and think back to all the comments you've written in my videos and WordUp and an inner hatred begins to compile at the Rock Bottom of your stomache. You stare at me for a few seconds thinking he seems like a totally different person in person. I again slightly raise my hand acknowleding your presence. Shari interrupts you staring at me because I'm such a little cutie *kidding* and says "They're both from L.A." Ruen gets up from the table and moves back to his chair with a drink and watches the movie from a distance. Shrapple is just sitting there with bad posture nice and entoxicated. Bboy Lemon wants to battle shrapple to expose him for the fraued of a bboy that he is so he simply waits to incorporate the question "can I battle him" into the conversation. Shari senses bboy lemons great competitive spirit and the gears are in motion for a 1 on 1 battle against shrapple the Half Thai, Half English, small part German young man. Your confidence level sky rockets as you are a well-rounded breakdancer and can massacre my west coast style toprock to any breakbeat. You think to all the clips you've seen of me but don't feel threatened as the consensus is shrapple is just a powerhead and has not style or feel for the dance. Shari calls out shrapple "shrapple! come here, now! I want you to meet someone." I very slowly because I am psychomotor retarded get up from my chair and begin walking towards you two. Shari says "This is B-Boy Lemon" I say Hi, I'm Dan, nice to meet you." You shake my hand as I extend it as that is a costum in American when meeting someone for the first time. You say "Sup", there is an awkward pause and then I start a conversation with you by saying "So you can breakdance! That's soo cool, so can I! You look pretty good!" You say modestly that you're more than pretty good for the time-length you've been b-boying. I say Whoa, cool! We can put on a battle for these kind people for fun if you want, I know it's on carpet but that's never stopped me before! You are ore than happy to battle me to put me in my place and show me up once and for all. After all I am only an insect! Ruen is watching Wedding Crashers starring the Frat Pack. Shari says "Okay Great! I'll go get some music" You become concerned that it won't be the true authentic breakbeats you are accustomed to dancing to, as you should be! Shari is just a commoner, she hasn't been exposed to the harsh rugged world of real B-Boys. Ruen yells out "Put on some Tupac!" I say "Yeea! Tupac! I like Tupac, do you like Tupac?" You shrug your shoulders to warm them up at the same time answering my question with the gesture. To you a battle is a battle, the music won't matter as long as you come out victorious. No one is aware that a breakdance battle is about to commence until Shari returns with a Tupac CD. Shari announces to the party that Bboy Lemon and shrapple are going to dance for us! and to clear the floor and find a seat. I pat you on your shoulder lightly and say Alright, have fun man. You acknowledge it with a flare of style as I go to sit on the floor next to Ruens side. Ruen demands bboy lemon go first because he is the guest and considerably younger then everyone at the exclusive party. You've been thinking about your plan of attack. 10 Rotations headspin is out of the question seeing how you didn't bring your helmet and it's on carpet, which is much slower. Your not satisfied with your flares yet as they will scrape because of the carpet. You can throw 3 rotations deadmans out the window too b ecause of the darn carpet. So decide you will not this as a power battle and stick to what your best at and concentrated most on, your lethal footwork, style, and complex yet amazing toprocking skills. You think back to everything you've learned these past 8 months from your trainer in Belgium and fellow Belgain bboys. Your confidence sky rockets, yet nearly simotaneously you realize the crowd you are performing in front of. A bunch of elite athletes with more experience, money, and education than you. You fear they will not be able to comprehend the subtle yet complete techs in your downrock and worse yet your toprock! What good is putting all those hours of training into toprock and downrock sets if there is no one with the complex B-Boy knowledge, that only you and your Belgain B-Boy crew, it takes to fully appreciate the Genius that is B-Boy Lemon. You decide you will have to turn it down a notch for the audiences sake. You will also be dancing to unknown music by Tupac. The whole situation is just very frustrating because you can't show them everything you want to show them. Ruen yells across to your side, remember it's just for fun! Shrapple is sitting on the floot to his left side waiting for the music to come on. You fear the worst, that shrapple willonly do power sets to "WOW" the known bboy crowd as that is the majority of my clips on bboy.org, power. You remember how stupid and cocky he is and that he wouldn't do any footwork sets and his toprock sucks, he can't dance period. This battle is in the bag, only no one is judging, the battle is to entertain the nice people at the party, not to put people down, and remember it's just for fun! So a winner will not be announced, only a handshake and a goodjob will be awared to both dancers. There is no money or physical prize on the line. *Cliff Hanger... That is Episode 1 of my tribute to Bboy Lemon, If I get positive responses I will finish the story in a fair and entertaining manner.
 

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08-30-2006, 02:48 AM

Snapple I love you,

you fill my life with much meaningless information that is irrelevant to anything that is present in this world.
 

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08-30-2006, 03:02 AM

I'M AN ENTERTAINER! I AM HERE TO ENTERTAIN, you can like it or love it, in yoru case you love it, would you like me to finish the story?
 

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08-30-2006, 04:43 AM

i stopped reading when i read the word alite...

how could you ever spell it that way? thats like saying avil... or saa...

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08-30-2006, 05:23 AM

sorry it's not perfect, but it's still worth a read if you like reading stories and have 5 minutes!
 

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08-30-2006, 05:33 AM

wow, this is long ass story, lemme describe YOU in word word...retardddddd

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08-30-2006, 05:40 AM

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08-30-2006, 05:47 AM

I hope you're proud of yourself now... This is PROOF, PROOF I TELL YOU!!! This shows that you're a pathetic little bitch in your little dark room. YOU, shrapple, HAVE NO LIFE

PS I didn't read the story, only the first 2 sentences or something

Originally Posted by fukaihoton View Post
Bboy.org Combat Log:
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ROFL

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08-30-2006, 05:58 AM

I read the whole story. Shrapple is a posuer. What a waste. Fukaihoton, my thoughts exactly.

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08-30-2006, 06:01 AM

omg, lol, i think its about me xD
so i was gonna read the hole thing but just read the start too long..^^
anyway if its about insults on me do what u want, ur reputation will never go higher than 0 now

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08-30-2006, 06:32 AM

Well it's not insults, as stated in as the topic it is in honor of the Genius that is B-Boy Lemon. It's just a bboy story guys, lighten up.
 

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08-30-2006, 06:38 AM

BTW in regards to DNA, I know you're going to like the fact that I acknowledged you by your comment, as you look up to me in your own sick way, but you've been registered on this site less than a year and have over 200 more posts than I do. I registered 2003 and just today got 1,000 posts because I am less talk and more action. In 2004 I was the only person on bboy.org to fill up their entire 50 meg limit account, shortly afterwards the admins of bboy.org changed it to unlimited. Also the file size limit in 2004 was 6 megs or less, so I had about 15 pages of 20-30 seconds clips each one about 2-6 megs. Just shows I am less talk and more breakdance, how do I know this because bboy.org provides everyone with the priceless information of your date of registry and #posts. Enter zinger here.
 

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08-30-2006, 07:20 AM

lmao
wtf are u? can u just shut up and go practise plz?

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08-30-2006, 07:20 AM

I have no idea what you guys have against shrapple, but htat story was horrid, just plain horrid.

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Unlike you I don't need to claim to be ghetto, i'll just f*cking stab you while you are talking about stabbing me or whatever you spoiled little wannabe hoe's are talking about doing to people these days.
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08-30-2006, 07:49 AM

I already practiced three times today since my hand is getting better, I ripped my 90's spot open extremely bad about a week and half ago. The story is based off actualy events, at least 75% which includes the setting, the people there, and what we were doing, it isn't all fictional.
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