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Bgurl
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critizise my set - 02-16-2009, 06:06 PM

so that i can improve..thx
 

Zulu Chibi
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02-16-2009, 06:11 PM

You don't realize how much better you are than alot of bboys on this site LOL. You have alot of flavor! The only thing I can really say is dance more (toprocks) and clean up your freezes. Where you been btw?

 

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02-16-2009, 06:14 PM

flavorr!

i only know how to sixstep
 

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02-16-2009, 06:14 PM

everything is really smooth. just need more power.

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02-16-2009, 06:15 PM

Contrary to Chibi's post, I'd say your dancing is fine. I see plenty of toprocking. But flavor, you DO have. If you just get that thread down smoothly and your air chair solid, you got yourself a dope set, Bgurl. Props.
 

Zulu Chibi
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02-16-2009, 06:22 PM

K1ng, I never said her dancing was bad, I said dance more because shes good at it.

 

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02-16-2009, 06:28 PM

-no drop
-taken time to grab your foot before the thread
-airchair crash

and i've got to disagree with these guys, you toprocked for too long. It was halfway into the entire clip before you hit the ground. Overall it was pretty good, I could feel your moves and the ideas were good to, you went up and down hitting all angles and did a variety of moves. But it could be a lot smoother and cleaner.
 

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02-16-2009, 08:23 PM

i think her toprock was fine (she timed it to end when the music picked up)

only things that need work as previously mentioned: threading, airchair

 

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02-16-2009, 08:25 PM

Moni, you suck *pushes you on to a wall*


I'd work on getting into your moves transitions

I like site, becouse is help me teach breackdanse. they not here someonne to learn me
 

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Smile 02-16-2009, 08:35 PM

Originally Posted by Chucky View Post
-no drop
-taken time to grab your foot before the thread
-airchair crash

and i've got to disagree with these guys, you toprocked for too long. It was halfway into the entire clip before you hit the ground. Overall it was pretty good, I could feel your moves and the ideas were good to, you went up and down hitting all angles and did a variety of moves. But it could be a lot smoother and cleaner.
Personally disagree with that too, haha.
I liked it actually! Just work on that freeze and
add a little more variation to your rock.
Looked good!

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Fatalz
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02-16-2009, 08:48 PM

Originally Posted by brknckgrl2010 View Post
Personally disagree with that too, haha.
I liked it actually! Just work on that freeze and
add a little more variation to your rock.
Looked good!
Do not go against the credibility of our former King!

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02-16-2009, 09:12 PM

it sucks


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is that what you were looking for?

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skysthelimit
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02-16-2009, 09:45 PM

Dayum that was NICE. umm nothing much to critisize. I liked the beginning of your toprock, where you kinda step forward, then slide your back foot up, hitting your calf. i do that alot too haha. i also saw that bboy born does it alot too. it was really good =]
 

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02-16-2009, 09:55 PM

Originally Posted by BbOyJeOpArDy View Post
it sucks


...?
is that what you were looking for?
lol jeopardy you've gotten so much more like me

"heres a tip: i like to make lots of sets. to see what flows, i just think, "Do a random toprock!" so i do that. next i go, "do a footwork!" and i try to flow well into it. next, i think, "do a _____!" and i do that, making sure it flows.
do that for awhile."-Gloves
 

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02-16-2009, 10:11 PM

lol guys
but holy fuck why didnt she sign up for KOBO lol

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