first vid had an elsewhere flavor to it....but the movmenet and transitions didnt fit with the music. You had a lot of unnecessary movement in there, where it just wasnt needed. Remember, getting abstract doesnt mean fast and crazy...It means ABSTRACT. Try some weird concepts, different movement, but make sure its still to the music. A very basic definition of abstract could be "some sort of movement or concept outside or not bounded by the rules of a style" So take a style, bend the rules all to hell, and then run with it
Second vid had the same problems the first did. You really need to make a "less is more" video, and then we could really delve into it to find something for you to take off with. Bc as it is right now, you are stuck in the fast stage, and it needs to be broken.
So if you get a chance, make a vid...small movements, basically stationary...it will feel VERY awkward, but you might be suprised with the results. If you dont like it and dont feel comfortable puttin it up on here, then hit me with an IM and ill chat with ya then....keep doin your thang homie
