[poooch]

heres another vid of me i chose another slow song lol neways this is with like 5 days of progress over the other one feedback plz

http://s34.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3...R17A9PUMKHIZES

feedback plz this vid also shows a lil more aray of diff moves other one was pretty straight forward

[PoppinRice]

pretty good you were feeling the music, and you were on beat, you just had repetition (the hands)

overall, just find some extra differences in every beat and its good

[Bugeto]

i agree jus a lil repetitive at times but ur hits r pretty good plus jus move around a little more it seemed like u were jus chillin

[qJaYp]

nice hits im talkin bangin.

[FooTemps]

your hits are noticably better that's for sure. YOu've also added a little more variety, though still not enough. Have you tried extending your arms further away from your core? Like make your movements more outward than close to your body?

[K1llaCam]

lmao @ u popping 2 b2k....wow...just wow

Anyways some nice hits there. I didn't see the first video, but you are doing very well for such a short time (3 weeks?) Try not to hit on the same beat over and over, every now and then hit to the voices if there is a noticable point like when the guy goes "Gotta be Gotta be Gotta be Gotta be " real quick you cud do some uptempo moves you kno....be creative. Maybe a bit more speed cud help, because those moves mite work for the 11 seconds of dancing you see in a video, but on the dancefloor...