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Respect: 1
Posts: 62 Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: winnipeg
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new vid of me 5+ days of progress -
03-03-2005, 04:11 PM
heres another vid of me i chose another slow song lol neways this is with like 5 days of progress over the other one feedback plz
http://s34.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3...R17A9PUMKHIZES feedback plz this vid also shows a lil more aray of diff moves other one was pretty straight forward |
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Respect: 5
Posts: 2,593 Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Seattle, Washington right now.
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03-03-2005, 06:13 PM
pretty good
you were feeling the music, and you were on beat, you just had repetition (the hands)overall, just find some extra differences in every beat and its good |
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Respect: 3
Posts: 1,678 Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Chicago
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yo -
03-03-2005, 06:45 PM
i agree jus a lil repetitive at times but ur hits r pretty good plus jus move around a little more it seemed like u were jus chillin
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I have good memories
from my childhood bitch, my favorite toy was my fuckin fire truck bitch, I used to play with that motherfucker all day long, until I learned about sex from the Sears catalog and then I played with my muthafucka all day long about 10 times a day man, all year long. |
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Respect: 1
Posts: 34 Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: chesapeake
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03-03-2005, 09:57 PM
nice hits im talkin bangin.
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=-StYle IS not SoMThinG thaT CaN Be StoLen Or RippeD, iF So Than It isent STyle, StylE is Who You ARe puT Into WhaT YOu Do-=
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Respect: 1
Posts: 17 Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: Sea-town
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03-05-2005, 03:17 AM
your hits are noticably better that's for sure. YOu've also added a little more variety, though still not enough. Have you tried extending your arms further away from your core? Like make your movements more outward than close to your body?
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Respect: 1.5
Posts: 506 Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Bermuda/Canada
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03-05-2005, 03:22 AM
lmao @ u popping 2 b2k....wow...just wow
Anyways some nice hits there. I didn't see the first video, but you are doing very well for such a short time (3 weeks?) Try not to hit on the same beat over and over, every now and then hit to the voices if there is a noticable point like when the guy goes "Gotta be Gotta be Gotta be Gotta be " real quick you cud do some uptempo moves you kno....be creative. Maybe a bit more speed cud help, because those moves mite work for the 11 seconds of dancing you see in a video, but on the dancefloor... |