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im back...trying to get back on the scene -
08-30-2009, 03:40 PM
so i need critiques...i made a decision to get back into popping seriously but idk where to begin....
i felt totally uncomfortable in this clip due to lack of space and i dont really have any music to pop to |
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I have good memories
from my childhood bitch, my favorite toy was my fuckin fire truck bitch, I used to play with that motherfucker all day long, until I learned about sex from the Sears catalog and then I played with my muthafucka all day long about 10 times a day man, all year long. |
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08-31-2009, 08:35 AM
You can pop to anything really.. as long as it has a good basic beat.
Im no pro so you can ignore me if you want. but i think you could make some of your movements a little bigger.. But ACE on your originality  Also if you dont have much space go out in the street and practice I do that if my rooms messy x] and it also boosts your confidence cause people will see you and be like " wow" or if an experianced popper walks be they can help you |
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09-04-2009, 09:11 PM
bump for justice
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I have good memories
from my childhood bitch, my favorite toy was my fuckin fire truck bitch, I used to play with that motherfucker all day long, until I learned about sex from the Sears catalog and then I played with my muthafucka all day long about 10 times a day man, all year long. |
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09-04-2009, 09:22 PM
Not bad, but could be a lot cleaner.
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09-04-2009, 09:34 PM
Dude...your good.
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09-04-2009, 10:45 PM
thanks i think? i kno it could be cleaner tho for two reasons...
1. it can always be cleaner... 2. i havent danced in 5 months lol the clip is short i kno so ill be uploading another the day i get my new orders >.< it should be sometime next week... |
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I have good memories
from my childhood bitch, my favorite toy was my fuckin fire truck bitch, I used to play with that motherfucker all day long, until I learned about sex from the Sears catalog and then I played with my muthafucka all day long about 10 times a day man, all year long. |
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09-04-2009, 11:18 PM
I wish these bboys would stop telling people what to do.
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09-05-2009, 03:57 AM
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09-05-2009, 08:01 AM
To crit crit crit...
okay, you are on beat which is good 1. You over-use the twirling concept too much (hands twirl around each other). 2. Lack of space - not good lol, i know its not part of your dance but fark 3. Make your angles more defined, and stay in them (make them stronger) I'll see your ass around, sexy nigga  |
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09-05-2009, 10:06 PM
hey
arent you in the U.S coast guard or something? hows that going? or maybe thats someone else..? anywayz all i can say is hit harder |
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Get 20% off from Karmaloop by using repcode ~> IC3 <~ at checkout!
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11-07-2009, 03:01 AM
CRITiQUE - ING
it may be my computer but i didnt see you pop once, so hit harder work on your angles...it looks very sloppy and that "twirly" thing u did wit your hands you did that too much also you need more space...shoes might be a good idea as well get popping music! its true you can pop to anything but best, when your learning, to dance to something more suited for what your doing... you probably wont hear this song at a battle... and you should battle...not cuz you think u can win, but to learn going in popping battles is the best way to learn and get better in my opinion |
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Free your ambitious mind, learn the art of dying...
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11-11-2009, 10:38 AM
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I have good memories
from my childhood bitch, my favorite toy was my fuckin fire truck bitch, I used to play with that motherfucker all day long, until I learned about sex from the Sears catalog and then I played with my muthafucka all day long about 10 times a day man, all year long. |
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11-12-2009, 10:57 AM
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I am a Waver. This is my manifesto.
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11-12-2009, 01:57 PM
haha nick, its tough to get some serious critiques these days at bboy.org.....
but that is only cause you are growing up too fast as a dancer! |
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