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one new practice clip - 08-21-2009, 03:39 AM

another vid of me practicing. let me know what you think. thx

 

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08-25-2009, 02:02 AM

waves: at .31 try to exaggerate the shoulders and the chest to make it flow.

pops are general clean, althought i felt transitions are forced rather then felt.

hope this helps!
 

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08-25-2009, 10:28 PM

I enjoyed watching your video but I gotta say that at some places you were off beat and hitting early. Also watch your shoulders (might just be me) cuz it seems like u have them raised a lot, making your dancing look tense and forced. Also i would spend some time focusing on waves because they weren't the cleanest but like i said i enjoyed watching the clip and keep it up
 

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08-25-2009, 11:37 PM

Originally Posted by Jwills View Post
I enjoyed watching your video but I gotta say that at some places you were off beat and hitting early. Also watch your shoulders (might just be me) cuz it seems like u have them raised a lot, making your dancing look tense and forced. Also i would spend some time focusing on waves because they weren't the cleanest but like i said i enjoyed watching the clip and keep it up
thx.. im glad u liked it. nd yeah, i really do need to work on my waving nd transitions. nd i'll try to work on the shoulder thing. thx for the critique
 

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11-07-2009, 03:50 AM

pops are good
and i was really feeling the music
work on your footwork big time
and transitions
also try not to do the same thing with your arms over and over and over
creativivity is key

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