Well, first of all, he's moving way to fast...there's nothing to really see when you're moving that fast...nothing can stand out when it's too rapid. That, and he's not extending his legs enough...he's got long legs and he isn't using them. That, and WHAT arm movement? They're just kinda...hanging there O_o. All in all, way too rushed. Just chill out with it a bit more.
"What doesn't kill you makes you stronger...and in the worst cases, crippled."
