ill comment to beh nyce, yur footwork needah lil wrk, its okay, buh needah wrk on it and geht it faster. i dnt noe wha freeze yu were attempting aftrr the worm, was that a planche? well nyce job anyway (:
it needs more style, but style will come with time - for now, some personality would be good to throw in (u seem to have the same blank expression the whole time) a little personality wud make it more intense.
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the only thing i liked was the last thing you did (balansing on your hand.. your footwork was good but work it .. you shoud REALY learn some uprocks ..
your uprock tells a lot about your style and how good you are the same do your freezes