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03-16-2003, 09:49 PM

Very nice and you put it together nice too. A+ all the way. very pleasing to read

electron · 03-17-2003, 08:28 AM

bali , first off , i'm totally flattered and thank you for the mention - i feel famous now!

i also learned some about the history by reading your essay - i guess i've been more focused on the history of breaking than the history of hip hop , so you expanded my horizons . NOw i can go off and sound a little more intelligent.

Your essay structure wasn't the one i was taught in school though , so i had a little bit of a hard time following the thread through ( used to theis , development , summary ) but it's all good , if you got an A + then you did what your teacher asked you for AND did it in your own style . If you ever want help proofreading anything , i love to do it no matter what the topic is so feel free to email me if that's ever needed .

GOod job.

03-17-2003, 08:32 AM

nice job, much much better then any essay i ever wrote, also, i learnt sum more stuff about hip hop

B-Girl BaLi · 03-17-2003, 08:19 PM

ok thanks all yall..
yes i kno afrika is spelt with a K but it took time to edit it an my computer kept changin it to c...

second.. No doubt electron.. im still lookin 4 some more sox... an as 4 the rest... ill be sure to hit u up if i need some help proof reading.. *i was taught the same way about the essay thing.. but it gets borring after a while... so i flipped the skript*

third... i didnt write it 4 IB.. but if i was in IB *whchi they dont have at my school* it would have been the topic for my "extended essay"

finally go read my buddisim essay.. its good shit!

B-Girl BaLi · 07-30-2003, 01:17 PM

uppin 4 noobies

Watashi · 10-02-2003, 08:50 PM

this is a good essay, so i think this deserves a bump, and perhapes a sticky (moderaters note this

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Bboy_EzZa · 10-02-2003, 09:17 PM

great essay bali A+++

Mrboogie23 · 10-02-2003, 10:07 PM

hey, thats a good essay Bali.

I got one thing to say tho, if ya'll keep bumpin it up for newbs to read, then make sure all the info is correct.

when you say "toasting" was when people would use their DJ systems and compete. thats wrong.

Toasting was actually when Jamaican DJ's, and peeps from the carribean would have backyard parties, and the DJ's would start speaking over the beat. Its just talking, and braggin on yourself. this started in the Carribean. thats what toasting is.

Also, old school bboys will tell you that they never even heard of Capoeira. Capoeira did not influence bboying.

member · 11:42 PM

is this an essay for freshmen/sophomore highschool english?

this is a serious question.

PhillyBBoy88 · 10-03-2003, 02:01 AM

i think its for college cause i dont think bali's in high school no more... good essay took me like an hour to read it cause im slow like that haha... a bit long for most newbs to read cause they would fear the >200 words like i did O.O

member · 10-03-2003, 03:56 PM

are you sure it's a college paper?

bali, did you edit some things out? introduction, conclusion, etc, ?

B-Girl BaLi · 10-22-2003, 03:57 AM

HEre ya go

Xero0197 · 10-22-2003, 01:22 PM

Aw thats ill

young_uprock04 · **a'ight -** 10-22-2003, 02:39 PM

good essay with slight grammatical errors, thesis could've been clearer. Overall very well done, informative, and good insight.

Mowicz · 10-24-2003, 12:56 AM

Lol.....are like half of the people here goin' into writing? Cuz I mean......I'm a more math oriented student.......meaning I can spit tangent-chord properties at you like there's no tomorrow......But I have no clue in hell what a subordinate clause is, or what a gerund is (Ok......well, not THAT bad. I know sentence structures. I jus don't read in depth and note the author's writing style, and such).

As for the actual essay, really made me think........and these thoughts involve a sandwich.....lol Seriously though, it was good. Tons of info.

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Posts: n/a	03-16-2003, 09:49 PM Very nice and you put it together nice too. A+ all the way. very pleasing to read
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electron heavy rotation Respect: 2 Posts: 1,546 Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: coming soon to an airport near you ...	03-17-2003, 08:28 AM bali , first off , i'm totally flattered and thank you for the mention - i feel famous now! i also learned some about the history by reading your essay - i guess i've been more focused on the history of breaking than the history of hip hop , so you expanded my horizons . NOw i can go off and sound a little more intelligent. Your essay structure wasn't the one i was taught in school though , so i had a little bit of a hard time following the thread through ( used to theis , development , summary ) but it's all good , if you got an A + then you did what your teacher asked you for AND did it in your own style . If you ever want help proofreading anything , i love to do it no matter what the topic is so feel free to email me if that's ever needed . GOod job.
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Posts: n/a	03-17-2003, 08:32 AM nice job, much much better then any essay i ever wrote, also, i learnt sum more stuff about hip hop
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B-Girl BaLi Word Warrior Respect: 1 Posts: 1,239 Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: Atlanta, Hampton, Norfolk, VA Beach, Harrisburg	03-17-2003, 08:19 PM ok thanks all yall.. yes i kno afrika is spelt with a K but it took time to edit it an my computer kept changin it to c... second.. No doubt electron.. im still lookin 4 some more sox... an as 4 the rest... ill be sure to hit u up if i need some help proof reading.. i was taught the same way about the essay thing.. but it gets borring after a while... so i flipped the skript third... i didnt write it 4 IB.. but if i was in IB whchi they dont have at my school it would have been the topic for my "extended essay" finally go read my buddisim essay.. its good shit!
	THE femcee Holdin it down on bd.com Emceeing... the outlet for those who love music but cant sing for shit... now if u can sing and Emcee.. THEN Your talented- Twenty6 aim= Gotricesweetie website= My Space ~MyXANGA ~ My MESSAGE BOARDS and X rated Forum THOUGHTS ON BALI Originally posted by RapmastaF-fresh B-Girl BaLi, the word warrior princess of b-boy.org Originally posted by B-Boy Alloy -B-girl bali-godmother of breakdance.com Originally posted by Mode -Bgirl BaLi, spam princess of bboy.org Originally posted by DTACK -Bali the Verbal Cornerstone of bboy.org Originally posted by B-boy-bomb -Bali - the coolest Bgirl... "B-boying is the bastard child of hip hop.Graffiti is the black sheep.DJing is the obedient child that always does what it's told.And rap is the spoiled brat that is actually the youngest of the four." -CRAZY LEGS


B-Girl BaLi Word Warrior Respect: 1 Posts: 1,239 Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: Atlanta, Hampton, Norfolk, VA Beach, Harrisburg	07-30-2003, 01:17 PM uppin 4 noobies
	THE femcee Holdin it down on bd.com Emceeing... the outlet for those who love music but cant sing for shit... now if u can sing and Emcee.. THEN Your talented- Twenty6 aim= Gotricesweetie website= My Space ~MyXANGA ~ My MESSAGE BOARDS and X rated Forum THOUGHTS ON BALI Originally posted by RapmastaF-fresh B-Girl BaLi, the word warrior princess of b-boy.org Originally posted by B-Boy Alloy -B-girl bali-godmother of breakdance.com Originally posted by Mode -Bgirl BaLi, spam princess of bboy.org Originally posted by DTACK -Bali the Verbal Cornerstone of bboy.org Originally posted by B-boy-bomb -Bali - the coolest Bgirl... "B-boying is the bastard child of hip hop.Graffiti is the black sheep.DJing is the obedient child that always does what it's told.And rap is the spoiled brat that is actually the youngest of the four." -CRAZY LEGS


Watashi Registered User Respect: 1.5 Posts: 829 Join Date: Jun 2003	10-02-2003, 08:50 PM this is a good essay, so i think this deserves a bump, and perhapes a sticky (moderaters note this )


Mrboogie23 Rarrrrrrrrrrrrrr! Respect: 1 Posts: 568 Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: home is a state of mind	10-02-2003, 10:07 PM hey, thats a good essay Bali. I got one thing to say tho, if ya'll keep bumpin it up for newbs to read, then make sure all the info is correct. when you say "toasting" was when people would use their DJ systems and compete. thats wrong. Toasting was actually when Jamaican DJ's, and peeps from the carribean would have backyard parties, and the DJ's would start speaking over the beat. Its just talking, and braggin on yourself. this started in the Carribean. thats what toasting is. Also, old school bboys will tell you that they never even heard of Capoeira. Capoeira did not influence bboying.
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member Registered User Respect: 1 Posts: 84 Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: wa	10-02-2003, 11:40 PM is this an essay for freshmen/sophomore highschool english? this is a serious question. Last edited by member : 10-02-2003 at 11:42 PM.
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PhillyBBoy88 Wolverine like Healing Respect: 1 Posts: 314 Join Date: May 2003 Location: Philly	10-03-2003, 02:01 AM i think its for college cause i dont think bali's in high school no more... good essay took me like an hour to read it cause im slow like that haha... a bit long for most newbs to read cause they would fear the >200 words like i did O.O
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member Registered User Respect: 1 Posts: 84 Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: wa	10-03-2003, 03:56 PM are you sure it's a college paper? bali, did you edit some things out? introduction, conclusion, etc, ?
	this is who i am, this is what i do... if i go in a circle and i automatically start tumbling... it may not be a dance to you, but it's my dance... -ivan


B-Girl BaLi Word Warrior Respect: 1 Posts: 1,239 Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: Atlanta, Hampton, Norfolk, VA Beach, Harrisburg	10-22-2003, 03:57 AM HEre ya go
	THE femcee Holdin it down on bd.com Emceeing... the outlet for those who love music but cant sing for shit... now if u can sing and Emcee.. THEN Your talented- Twenty6 aim= Gotricesweetie website= My Space ~MyXANGA ~ My MESSAGE BOARDS and X rated Forum THOUGHTS ON BALI Originally posted by RapmastaF-fresh B-Girl BaLi, the word warrior princess of b-boy.org Originally posted by B-Boy Alloy -B-girl bali-godmother of breakdance.com Originally posted by Mode -Bgirl BaLi, spam princess of bboy.org Originally posted by DTACK -Bali the Verbal Cornerstone of bboy.org Originally posted by B-boy-bomb -Bali - the coolest Bgirl... "B-boying is the bastard child of hip hop.Graffiti is the black sheep.DJing is the obedient child that always does what it's told.And rap is the spoiled brat that is actually the youngest of the four." -CRAZY LEGS


Xero0197 Wrath of Heaven Respect: 1 Posts: 410 Join Date: May 2003	10-22-2003, 01:22 PM Aw thats ill
	Drifter...the final project Breaking can be whatever you want it to be. If you want it to be the original, structured dance that it was 20 years ago, then it can be that for you. If you want it to be your own limitless form of expression, it can be that for you. The world will never agree on what exactly Breaking is... and if the world ever does agree, then I guess I won't be Breaking anymore. -Kujo, Soul Control


young_uprock04 Member Respect: 1.5 Posts: 217 Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Beltsville	a'ight - 10-22-2003, 02:39 PM good essay with slight grammatical errors, thesis could've been clearer. Overall very well done, informative, and good insight.