nothing against your 90's man, just your link doesn't work for me and that may be why you are getting no responses....
Not that I would know anything about them anyways cuz I'm a newB and I'm learning them too
-Peace
the problem may be that ur doin um on GRASS. don't do um on GRASS. hehe i'm sorry. But it seems good. Also don't wear restricting clothing such as huge jackets, nobody breaks in huge jackets(that i know of). But other then that it looks very good, can't complain
ah i think i know what ur doing wrong. when you start spinning, if you'r doing it counter-clockwise like the way you are, then you're suppose to spin on your left hand. you're doing everything right, just after your right hand goes down, transfer your weight to your left hand and spin, everything else looks pretty good. (since u spin on ur right hand thats why u get tangled up i think)