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Talking Neo! TECHINIQUEz...3RD ROUND - 12-23-2003, 03:13 AM

YO HEREz DA THIRD ROUND PIECE, YO MADWAK MAH BAD FO DA DECADE THAT PASSED BUT A KAT BUSY...LOLz...

I DID THIS WHOLE THING IN ONE SITTING TODAY, I SCRAPPED THE LAST ONE CAUSE I FUKEDEDED IT UP OUTLINEING IT..BUT WHATEVA

THIS PIECE DEFINATELY GOTTA GIVE THANKz TO MANILA AND KING RENS ,LOOKIN AT THERE BATTLE TOTALY MADE ME REMEMBA WHAT I AM CAPABLE OF, IT ALSO INSPIRED THE SHIT OUT OF ME, BOTH OF U ARE GODz IN MAH BLACKBOOK, AND IF U READIN THIS MANILA... PM ME FOO...BUT YEA TOOK ME OUTTA MY BLOCK REAL QUICK!!

OH YEA IF U WONDERING WHY THE COLORING IMPROVEMENT, WELL I FOUND A 48 SET OF PRIZMA BURIED IN THE CLEARANCE SECTION AT THE SOMEWHAT STORE HEA, GOT DEM FO $50 AT LIKE 65% OFF OR SOME SHIT...SWEET ASS DEAL....NO MO SHITTY SHARPIES FO DIS RICAN...

BUT ANYWAYz HOPE YA ENJOY THE PIC

LET THE VOTING COMMENCE AFTA A MILLENIUM...LMAO

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12-23-2003, 03:31 AM

man some ill dopeness stuf there nero aswell I zoomed in and fuck is that detail peace_
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12-23-2003, 08:03 AM

Aight yo, this was very very close...

First round
Neo
Im not sure about this one, i kinda liked the character face thing.. I think mabye if the letters were spread out more from each other it would of helped the piece alot, as you could tell mabye what the letters read, 3D would of also helped it, as it would of struck out more.. i dunno, but i do think you can do better..

Rangi
A bit simple and pretty plain.. i say plain by the coloring, i know you have other markers then just green, so use them! lol, you could of done somin really simple like ading a background or some ish, just would of helped the piece stand out more..

Overal - Draw Both didnt really stand out to much, both equal in skill thru out different things..

Second round
Neo
Im lovin this piece, i like the bright colors makes it really stand out.. the character is cool too, but i dont like the kinda red and orangey yello ball on his head.. but i didnt really notice that until i looked harder.. Its a dope piece and im feelin it alot..

Rangi
I like this piece alot too, but i think you could of tryed to make the letters easyer to read, just looks like you put lines randomly in.. I like the colorin on this one too, didnt look like you used much colors in it but im still feelin it..

Overal - Neo Neo's was alot brighter and stood out more then Rangi's, i prefered the colors too..

Third round
Neo
Youve put in close detail on this piece, the colors are not as bright as the last piece so im not feelin it as much.. i think it should have 3d, thats a thing it lacks.. i know not all pieces have 3D but i just think that it looks better with it.. and you could of colored in the 3d in brighter colors so would of standed out more and looked not as dull..

Rangi
I can read this one better then the other one, i like the color scheme but you could of done somin with other colors on the main piece, be more adventurous.. its almost like a solid fill, what i dont really like, but its up to you.. The blue makes it stand out alot, i dunno why, but it does..

Overal - Rangi It lacked in detail like Neo's, but the colors were brighter and not as dull as Neo's..


Ok so there is the low down.. So in this battle, i was definatly fellin Neo's 2nd round piece, i absoultly loved it.. The 1st and last both lacked 3D and were both pretty dull.. If Neo had added 3d and colored it brightly on the last piece, Neo would of wont this battle.. But rangi's first piece was simple and lacked colorin detail, but i felt it more then Neo's first.. I didnt no which piece of Madwaks was for the 2nd round, but either way, Neo took it.. And for the last round, Madwak's stood out more especialy with the Bright 3D, And neo's could of too, but it didnt have the 3D..



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12-24-2003, 12:51 AM

YO BOMB NOW THATz A FUKIN VOTE...IMMA START VOTIN LIKE THAT...WELL EARLIER I DID LMAO...YEA I COULD HAVE DONE THE 3D...JUS GOT LAZY...LOLz...THANKz FO VOTIN...WELL ANY MORE VOTEz???!!!!???
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12-31-2003, 02:00 AM

I KNOW YALL READIN THIS THREAD...DROP A VOTE!! IT AINT HARD...LOLz
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12-31-2003, 11:51 AM

Ok then
First round-Madwak
Mad-I dont really like the style, especially when you only use one color like that. I think there is a way you can better tie the letters to gether to make the style look better, but the way you did it was so-so

Neo-Too cramped for the letters, and am I the only one that thinks the faces should be anatomicly correct when you try to draw them correct? So if anything it takes away from the piece because what should have been cool is so-so when you draw the face weird.

Second round-Neo.
Mad- I definatly like the style, but I think there are some other things you could have added to it, maybe a background or something to make it more then just the block sitting there. More color too. Otherwise I liked it. What I might try is doing some kind of piece like that, but leaving the color inside white, and doing another really light piece on the inside running up and down or something like that. I'v seen it done before in BB and it looked pretty good.

Neo-Good job overall, I like the use of colors and effects better then madwaks piece, which is why you got the vote.

Final round-Madwak
Mad-I like the style, although doing it 2 rounds in a row is kind of repetative. Its a good thing you got the style down then Again, try to add something more like a background to it.

Neo- Im not sure what happened ehre, but it a step backwards. The letter forms are really weird, and the knot thing in the middle doesnt seem to go with the rest of the piece. Overall it just look bad because it doesnt flow, as well as the colors being drab. The little thing in the lower left is cool though

Overall, the goes to madwak.

Something to think about: Every piece doesnt need 3D, but what it needs is something to fill the eye when you look at it. The eye is naturally attracted to look at white or empty spots, so if your peice has one huge white spot out of the entire thing right in the middle, the person looking at it is going to look more towards that. To prevent that, you can do things like 3D or glow, or add a background. That why I bet you if you look at a huge ass piece on a wall, it rarly has a blank spot where you can see bare wall right in the middle of the piece. It gives the eye something to look at all over the entire thing, and makes it look better. The same thing also happens when you add color contrast to it.




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12-31-2003, 09:54 PM

IM LIKIN THE THE DTAILED VOTES.....COME ON YA WE NEED AT LEAST 3 MO...WELL IM HOPIN....SO CLICK THE REPLY BUTTON AND VOTE PEOPLEz
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Ok not good with deatiled votes.... - 12-31-2003, 11:43 PM

1st Round Goes to Mad ....
mad-I just love what you have done with the letters and they way you just made them form but in colour wise yo should of used diff shit and some more detail involed but it is nice and clean

Too Nero If you have used colour and formed your letters well more and made the face appear better would of had my vote but this round was close like the whole battle...

2nd Round Well I liked both of your works so I cant realy decide so I guess that round was a draw both well done with letters appaering vade and shit and colour being outstanding etc sorry but i say a draw
ROUND 2 ..:rAw::..

For round 3 The vote Goes too Nero(but you should of lost some of the red stains)anyway

Too Ner0-Man some of the shit in that graff is outstanding they way you have usewd it to your advantge works well and gives greater depth into you work some of the sploges are goof but some of the small ones would of been nice with out and would have made our work morew cleaner and shit ,I love the rope around your letters i found that dope and your letters are in the right poation(proation how ever you say it) and make it feel more visable and with colour the same greatn colours shown in your highle deatailed work .....I worte too much lol

too_mad-you lost that round becuase of the style you choose I anit saying its crap but you leters and shit are outta line and stuff but you need too use diff colours instead of yellow ,green and shit but you do use others in there the only thing i liked in round 3 is that you attepmt a style you could have done better with props to that anyway Inice 3dUse with nero could of used more J/p so
ROUND 3 t00 NEr0

sO I guess it is a Draw too I realy couldnt decide on Round 2 soo Its Draw and a fine battle you must battle again but wall ok props to all peace_
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01-02-2004, 09:57 AM

THANKz TO EVERYBODY WHO VOTED SO FAR... 2 MO VOTE AND ILL BE DONE WIT DA QUEST...SO I KNOW U READIN THIS... SO TAKE SOME TIME OUT AND VOTE!
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01-02-2004, 11:36 AM

aw cmon, dont do draws, thats gay. Pick one over the other if it is close just give reasons why, since unless they do the same word with the same style there is no such thing as a draw.
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01-02-2004, 11:44 AM

haha, i do not know who won, i jus think that i fell in love with neos second piece, 1st pieces were both the same and 3rd piece madwak prob jus took it.. so it is a draw, period.
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01-02-2004, 11:58 AM

I'd just rather see a vote on someone, instead of a draw and not explain why it is a draw (which you did) because they are too lazy to type some. O well.
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01-03-2004, 01:06 AM

damn graffmachine making me do ahuge vote I cant help it if its a draw .....Ok Ill say mad one happy machine
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01-03-2004, 01:12 AM

No, thats fine, but if you call a draw on one round give some feedback on why! There has to be a reason why 2 people doing different pieces with different styles end up doing the same quality piece. Otherwise if you say draw then it seems like you are too lazy to think about who did a better quality piece.
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01-04-2004, 08:07 PM

LOLz I KINDA DO AGREE WIT GEM, BUT EVERYONE HAS THERE OWN OPINION AND I RESPECT THAT
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