a tag usually consists of only a few letters and as few lines as possible. try taking 3 or 4 letters and writing them as fast as you can without picking the pen up off the paper(do it in one hit).
also, work on your letterforms or use different ones. your capital S and lower case e are tight, but your capital D, lower case n, k and r are wack... but thats just a matter of opinion i suppose
