[aznDsgraiss]

I dunno...make the G a bit thicker? The S and the P seem strange somehow...

[lazersailer]

yeah the G is too thin compared to the rest... but i really like your A

[ZuriMarie]

did anybody go to the pintura project in orlando?

[snoopy8]

try to keep the G the same size as the other letters (on thickness)

[3khmai1krazy6]

2ice, Pronounced 'twice'.
Comments and advice would be nice. Thx!

[snoopy8]

thats nice, ummm make the letters the same size and work on the 2, make it look like an actual 2, at first i thought it was a Z lol

[TASHi]

you got a good idea and it's kinda working but you needa change the 2's style like snoop said above. it's pretty clean... with what you have there.

now color it.

[TASHi]

also your handie... yea... keep working on it, you barely see the i, it mixes in with the c

[3khmai1krazy6]

Aight, thx for the advice. I'll keep it in mind.

[JRod]

everything looks sharp. like the shading. but just my opinion i would make the e look alittle more different than the c cause. they look too similare. maybe when you add color i will be able to tell more.

[Gone84]

you are leading yourself to a dead end street. hate to bring you down, but how far can something like that be developed???? simple letters first. learn structure, then style

[Meth0d]

i feel something newskool coming out of that shit

[poderoso]

tryin to keep it basic im still workin on it

other then making sure its even through out the piece what else could i do to fix it?

let me know!

[Gone84]

make the letters consistent. you have varying thicknesses and heights that make them look like they dont belong together. think like in fonts. Arial doesnt match with Times New Roman......make your letters with that in mind and it will help alot i think

[poderoso]

will do. thanks