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06-16-2004, 12:56 AM
yea...i was checking out some old shit from my friend...and i read manila's "last" post for the year apperently...and king rens...shit i haven't seen him post in the longest time...but yes...i agree with you...their shit was some of the best ive ever seen in the forum
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06-16-2004, 07:40 AM
can anyone give me some criticism (constructive) on my piece?? its a few pages back..
heck i might as well just post it again.. |
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06-16-2004, 09:42 AM
wat the hell mitch
first its axel now its u plz resize ur fukin pics man  |
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06-16-2004, 12:17 PM
yo aker i no wat u mean man but remember its a newbie thread.
mitch - yo its bad il b honest but all u got to do is get rid of the colour for starters get your letter structore (fukin cant spell u no wat i mean thou) down and then start workin on colour and get some nice colours too no crappy ones that look wack. peace |
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06-16-2004, 03:40 PM
mitch - its not bad for starters - i think u eneda work on ur colors and ur letter structure - ur 3d isnt too bad but it still all needs work - just keep at it
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06-16-2004, 06:12 PM
i think a newb should be told bout letter structure later on whe he gets more experienced in graff, its no use telling him from now
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06-17-2004, 07:31 AM
aight cool..sorry about the size guys..what do you mean work on the lettering? what do i have to do?..and whats wrong with the colours?
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06-17-2004, 09:02 PM
hey I just got a digital camera so im gonna start posting up on here... i think im kinda noobish so ill start off in this thread... i write dib and craze... some critz would be appreciated... thanks... peace
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06-17-2004, 09:07 PM
more...
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06-17-2004, 09:11 PM
hey im gonna keep posting but does anyone have any suggestions on getting rid of the blur?... im usin ACDsee to edit my photos but it doesn't seem to work... but im not gonna blame my camera on my graff...
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06-17-2004, 09:11 PM
this is the first crap i put out. The quality is super horrible cos its from my phone and I dont have another camera. Ummm if you can see it, any constructive criticism would be cool. I started like a month ago so dont be too harsh. Thanks, peeace.
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06-17-2004, 09:13 PM
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06-17-2004, 09:25 PM
last one for now...
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06-18-2004, 09:54 PM
You are all so negative mitch it isnt bad man you need work but so does every1 the coloring is fine for a start not matter how good stuff is it can always need work just keep drawing you get a 3/10 (dont feel bad thats the best i have ever got)
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06-18-2004, 10:59 PM
Im sorry freelancerapper i was the one being negative there its pretty good for a beginner i dunno how to help you much so im just gonna leave it at that
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