feedback plz

(plz excuse the gay blue shit in this piece, i kno it looks like ass )

[b-girl Loan]

JoeGam05 / casesensative - thanks.

[Waldo789]

If you did something with those little starburst thingies on the corners, it'd look pretty sweet....

[madwakfreek]

mike. you'd make a good blockbuister writer or even a good writer for hittin up freights.. keep at it.. hit some walls..

loan, dope charachter..

[StatiCBlazE79]

i jus started graffin and i wanna know what ya think, it says static...

hey yo, that's pretty good for starting. what i would do is, instead of shading, use richer colors to give it a more appealing effect. shading is always good too, but the colors dont stand out as much. prolly a bunch of u would dissagree w/ me but this is my opinion. good job static

[StatiCBlazE79]

thanks, the reason for the lighter colors was to give it an old school street type look

<---- all hail purple man

ummm your s is pretty thick now this is just my opinion but try to have it be the same size or at least close it seems like it goes from big to thing in one big jump

[StatiCBlazE79]

the 1st and last letters are always caps in my tag, but does it look fine like that, give me feedback

[StatiCBlazE79]

iight this is my newest one, i took the tip on the colors, tell me what ya think....

[StatiCBlazE79]

this is also one i recently made....i made the (s) thinner, and i think it looks better....

ja-plow this a new one i just did

[StatiCBlazE79]

woops...

static, i'm liking the colors, but instead of putting one color ontop of another, why dont u try blending the colors together so it fades from one color to another, try experimenting with that, it's what i do and the effect is really good (in my opinion).


joe, ur character structure is PHAT, nothin more i can say lol .


here's what i mean by blending the colors together, look at this piece i made a while ago (plz excuse me for posting my shit piece twice)

[StatiCBlazE79]

thank for the advise, i'll see wat i do wit it......