[4sakn]

Damn... thats really nice... Props to that! nothing wrong I can really find with that... Very nice work... 9.5/10

hahaha sry i'm not exactly functioning right if ne of you knwo what i mean lol but thanks my next one i'm posting now is a drip thang i guess..... i'll color it and post it again tomarow prolly

[4sakn]

Ya... I wanna see this coloured.... well I guess this is going to be my last post for the next two months... So I'll Check y'all later!

[nebula]

yeah get that coloured. i like how ur style is comin along

here it is colored

[qubixrube]

Work on connections, alphabets, and get better colouring utensils. I just aint feelin ur peices as much anymore bro, you need to def. colour them w/ sumting better then what u have, cuz the colour job looks like shyt. Your connections are simple/non-existent, it doesnt look like it has a flow. And your alphabets are repetitive. Keep working on it. 5/10
_murda

[nebula]

i thought it was pretty good! what u talking bout connections being simple/non-existent...the D and the R are almost one. anyways what do u use to colour? i like the blue and the baby blue, and i really need colours like that. the greens colouring looks a little sketchy tho. overall, i like it

umm yea i'm a lil iffy on murda's comments to but oh well everyone has there own opinions but as for coloring i use prisma markers/colored pencils the green bubbles/cloud effect i used the pencils for so yeah but the comp sorta brings down the quality but oh well thanks 4 the comments so far

[G-Lit]

Critique my peice please. It might seem big becuase of the way I scanned it. I know my tag is outta here.

[Poppenjay]

don't have much time, but....coloring is damn weak, use something that ur not afraid will bleed....umm the whole reflected-letter thing never really looked all too great for me, but that just may be me....ummm....work on letter structure....that's all i have time to think of now

[qubixrube]

K... Ill give ya sum critz

1)Your lettering is ass weak
2)Your 3d need a lot of work
3)You have no connections
4)Your colouring job is crude
5)You definitly need sum practise

Harsh, but constructive, critz. Peace
_murda

[G-Lit]

Ok I drew this one today. I think its pretty nice. A attempt at wildstyle. Constructive crit please.

[qubixrube]

Better colouring, but still lettering is crude and connetions need sum work. Sorry, would write more but w/e, peace
_murda

[F Stylz]

His stuff is cleaner than your shit's Murda.

[qubixrube]

whatcha mean by "cleaner"? I mean, I admit my lines are jagged, but thats not relly as much my fault as it is the pens; they all seem to die whenever I get to a longer line... but w/e. And besides, if u meant what I said I never critz his latest on that, the one before though - I stick w/ it. If u didnt mean that, explain...
_murda