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06-28-2003, 11:38 PM

hahaha sry i'm not exactly functioning right if ne of you knwo what i mean lol but thanks my next one i'm posting now is a drip thang i guess..... i'll color it and post it again tomarow prolly

4sakn · 06-28-2003, 11:51 PM

Ya... I wanna see this coloured.... well I guess this is going to be my last post for the next two months... So I'll Check y'all later!

nebula · 06-30-2003, 07:06 PM

yeah get that coloured. i like how ur style is comin along

07-01-2003, 12:21 PM

here it is colored

qubixrube · 07-01-2003, 12:26 PM

Work on connections, alphabets, and get better colouring utensils. I just aint feelin ur peices as much anymore bro, you need to def. colour them w/ sumting better then what u have, cuz the colour job looks like shyt. Your connections are simple/non-existent, it doesnt look like it has a flow. And your alphabets are repetitive. Keep working on it. 5/10
_murda

nebula · 07-01-2003, 11:56 PM

i thought it was pretty good! what u talking bout connections being simple/non-existent...the D and the R are almost one. anyways what do u use to colour? i like the blue and the baby blue, and i really need colours like that. the greens colouring looks a little sketchy tho. overall, i like it

07-02-2003, 12:45 AM

umm yea i'm a lil iffy on murda's comments to but oh well everyone has there own opinions but as for coloring i use prisma markers/colored pencils the green bubbles/cloud effect i used the pencils for so yeah but the comp sorta brings down the quality but oh well thanks 4 the comments so far

G-Lit · 07-02-2003, 01:23 PM

Critique my peice please. It might seem big becuase of the way I scanned it. I know my tag is outta here.

Poppenjay · 07-02-2003, 04:13 PM

don't have much time, but....coloring is damn weak, use something that ur not afraid will bleed....umm the whole reflected-letter thing never really looked all too great for me, but that just may be me....ummm....work on letter structure....that's all i have time to think of now

qubixrube · 07-02-2003, 08:51 PM

K... Ill give ya sum critz

1)Your lettering is ass weak
2)Your 3d need a lot of work
3)You have no connections
4)Your colouring job is crude
5)You definitly need sum practise

Harsh, but constructive, critz. Peace
_murda

G-Lit · 07-02-2003, 09:08 PM

Ok I drew this one today. I think its pretty nice. A attempt at wildstyle. Constructive crit please.

qubixrube · 07-02-2003, 09:18 PM

Better colouring, but still lettering is crude and connetions need sum work. Sorry, would write more but w/e, peace
_murda

F Stylz · 07-02-2003, 11:32 PM

His stuff is cleaner than your shit's Murda.

qubixrube · 07-03-2003, 12:55 PM

whatcha mean by "cleaner"? I mean, I admit my lines are jagged, but thats not relly as much my fault as it is the pens; they all seem to die whenever I get to a longer line...

but w/e. And besides, if u meant what I said I never critz his latest on that, the one before though - I stick w/ it. If u didnt mean that, explain...
_murda

Spartan713 · **My first stuff -** 07-03-2003, 10:50 PM

hey im kinda new to this. i got bored in summer school and was wondering if u can give me any tips or critques or whatever. thanks alot

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Posts: n/a	06-28-2003, 11:38 PM hahaha sry i'm not exactly functioning right if ne of you knwo what i mean lol but thanks my next one i'm posting now is a drip thang i guess..... i'll color it and post it again tomarow prolly
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4sakn Why can't I post? Respect: 1 Posts: 114 Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: K-Town, Ont	06-28-2003, 11:51 PM Ya... I wanna see this coloured.... well I guess this is going to be my last post for the next two months... So I'll Check y'all later!
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nebula --nebulium Respect: 1 Posts: 87 Join Date: May 2003 Location: ontario	06-30-2003, 07:06 PM yeah get that coloured. i like how ur style is comin along


Posts: n/a	07-01-2003, 12:21 PM here it is colored
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qubixrube Current title: Respect: 1 Posts: 998 Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Port Moody	07-01-2003, 12:26 PM Work on connections, alphabets, and get better colouring utensils. I just aint feelin ur peices as much anymore bro, you need to def. colour them w/ sumting better then what u have, cuz the colour job looks like shyt. Your connections are simple/non-existent, it doesnt look like it has a flow. And your alphabets are repetitive. Keep working on it. 5/10 _murda
	aka bboymurda


nebula --nebulium Respect: 1 Posts: 87 Join Date: May 2003 Location: ontario	07-01-2003, 11:56 PM i thought it was pretty good! what u talking bout connections being simple/non-existent...the D and the R are almost one. anyways what do u use to colour? i like the blue and the baby blue, and i really need colours like that. the greens colouring looks a little sketchy tho. overall, i like it


Posts: n/a	07-02-2003, 12:45 AM umm yea i'm a lil iffy on murda's comments to but oh well everyone has there own opinions but as for coloring i use prisma markers/colored pencils the green bubbles/cloud effect i used the pencils for so yeah but the comp sorta brings down the quality but oh well thanks 4 the comments so far
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G-Lit Registered User Respect: 1 Posts: 12 Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Saginaw	07-02-2003, 01:23 PM Critique my peice please. It might seem big becuase of the way I scanned it. I know my tag is outta here.
	I mean, its only head


Poppenjay Banned Respect: 1 Posts: 23 Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Vancity	07-02-2003, 04:13 PM don't have much time, but....coloring is damn weak, use something that ur not afraid will bleed....umm the whole reflected-letter thing never really looked all too great for me, but that just may be me....ummm....work on letter structure....that's all i have time to think of now


qubixrube Current title: Respect: 1 Posts: 998 Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Port Moody	07-02-2003, 08:51 PM K... Ill give ya sum critz 1)Your lettering is ass weak 2)Your 3d need a lot of work 3)You have no connections 4)Your colouring job is crude 5)You definitly need sum practise Harsh, but constructive, critz. Peace _murda
	aka bboymurda


G-Lit Registered User Respect: 1 Posts: 12 Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Saginaw	07-02-2003, 09:08 PM Ok I drew this one today. I think its pretty nice. A attempt at wildstyle. Constructive crit please.
	I mean, its only head


qubixrube Current title: Respect: 1 Posts: 998 Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Port Moody	07-02-2003, 09:18 PM Better colouring, but still lettering is crude and connetions need sum work. Sorry, would write more but w/e, peace _murda
	aka bboymurda


F Stylz Member Respect: 1.5 Posts: 619 Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: Minneapolis	07-02-2003, 11:32 PM His stuff is cleaner than your shit's Murda.
	Once upon a time in Minneapolis, Yo, I damn near had to steal the show...


qubixrube Current title: Respect: 1 Posts: 998 Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Port Moody	07-03-2003, 12:55 PM whatcha mean by "cleaner"? I mean, I admit my lines are jagged, but thats not relly as much my fault as it is the pens; they all seem to die whenever I get to a longer line... but w/e. And besides, if u meant what I said I never critz his latest on that, the one before though - I stick w/ it. If u didnt mean that, explain... _murda
	aka bboymurda


Spartan713 Registered User Respect: 1 Posts: 1 Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: middleo'nowhere	My first stuff - 07-03-2003, 10:50 PM hey im kinda new to this. i got bored in summer school and was wondering if u can give me any tips or critques or whatever. thanks alot