[snoopy8]

Originally Posted by Xeno-Step I used some water-color pencils on most of it since i wanted to show my nieces i was using stuff they had got me...my cam made the pic lose quality so it's less vibrant. Critz....shoot.

Reminds me of me when I first started lol

[Bboywhiterice]

looks weird? ahh okay.you have to admit that D looks decent tho..

[Xeno-Step]

Originally Posted by snoopy8 Reminds me of me when I first started lol

erm is that a good thing or bad thing? Should i take that as (dis/en)couraging, a compliment, or a "work harder"?
But uh thanks either way.

[Proof]

okay so I did 2.. and some guide said I should work on colloring them..
these 2 are my first, so go easy on me haha








this one was supposed to be green and had blue dots/squares in it but
the quality of my webcam just sucks. next time i'll take the pics with my phone




so..?

[Gone84]

Originally Posted by Bboywhiterice some newb shit.says oddball......or "odb"

Not the worst I've seen as new work. Actually, alot can be done with what you have started there. I would work a little bit more on uniformity as the B is a little bit off. But compositionwise, the letters are set up nicely. The colour could definitely use help. But the simplicity of the thing, if developed could work really well. I am not even going to address the handstyle because it just doesnt work. Handstyles are just like anything else. There has to be a flow. Start simple, work from there. Plain and simple.

[Bboywhiterice]

Originally Posted by Gone84 Not the worst I've seen as new work. Actually, alot can be done with what you have started there. I would work a little bit more on uniformity as the B is a little bit off. But compositionwise, the letters are set up nicely. The colour could definitely use help. But the simplicity of the thing, if developed could work really well. I am not even going to address the handstyle because it just doesnt work. Handstyles are just like anything else. There has to be a flow. Start simple, work from there. Plain and simple.

ok kwl thanks for the tips man, ill deff work on it. have i shown any progression since you last saw me?

[snoopy8]

Originally Posted by Xeno-Step erm is that a good thing or bad thing? Should i take that as (dis/en)couraging, a compliment, or a "work harder"? But uh thanks either way.

Oh, no way it can be a compliment lol sorry, yeah, work harder! Try using much more simple looking letters instead of the fancy or bubble stuff! Get used to the shape and forms of the normal letters, and do them as blocks and stuff.

Originally Posted by Proof okay so I did 2.. and some guide said I should work on colloring them.. these 2 are my first, so go easy on me haha this one was supposed to be green and had blue dots/squares in it but the quality of my webcam just sucks. next time i'll take the pics with my phone so..?

So.... yeah.... lol jk, keep working on them, follow my last comment of the other dude!

[Bboy Kam!kaz3]

Here's a one liner I came up with ^^:

[snoopy8]

Originally Posted by Bboywhiterice ok kwl thanks for the tips man, ill deff work on it. have i shown any progression since you last saw me?

He sounded so nice with you... I think he doesn't know that you changed your user name lol

[Bboywhiterice]

Originally Posted by snoopy8 He sounded so nice with you... I think he doesn't know that you changed your user name lol

lol he does. weve talked before in pm. were cool now. ive matured considerably since then.

Originally Posted by LulZ Third day in doing graffiti. Any critique is welcomed. Tell me how I'm doing on technique and such and what I can improve on.

Its pretty the way it is. Express yourself and ignore the people who "hate" very nice

[ezac]

Lose all the extensions for now and do simples and try to use bars.

[snoopy8]

Originally Posted by wznpersuasion Its pretty the way it is. Express yourself and ignore the people who "hate" very nice

Eww, express what? Express that he's a toy...?

[ezac]

Express the mess!

[LulZ]

I've read most/all of your advice and now I'm going to practice bars and forget about arrows, extensions etc..., but I'm not sure if I'm doing it right.
Once again, any criticism is welcomed.