[ezac]

2 new ones.

[kdjiny]

that "A" is lookin good
but, try to practice the consistency in the thickness of ur letters and try to make straighter lines, makes it look cleaner, like fix up the Z, and the upper part of the e should be thicker, the bottom part of it is alot thicker than the upper part, which makes it look unproportional

[ezac]

Thanks i'll keep that in mind when practicing.

[LX-treme]

Originally Posted by Bboy Kam!kaz3 My english isn't too good, what are proportions?

it means "verhoudingen"

[Gone84]

i agree with kdjiny but also, just to try something, take the top line of your Z a little further and eliminate that slant a little bit. that small change will make a whole lot of difference believe it or not.

[ezac]

Just tried to follow the advice with a quick outline thing.



haha...i suck.

[kdjiny]

gj gj, that ones ALOT better than ur previous ones,
just keep practicing and get the structure down,
u'll see improvements in no time.

[ezac]

Here it is filled. Bad pic.



I shouldn't have done the bubbles but oh well.

[Bboywhiterice]

some newb shit.says oddball......or "odb"

[Flipino]

^^ i love the veins

lol look at my first try at bubbles -_-
(just started this week)

[Bboywhiterice]

thanks man.

haha work on... smashing them.. and making them flow better.

[ezac]

That's pretty good whiterice for some "newb shit".

[Bboywhiterice]

Originally Posted by ezac That's pretty good whiterice for some "newb shit".

lol i wouldnt consider myself blackbook thread material yet, so everything i do untill then is newb shit lol

thanks for the compliment tho =]

that D took me forever to get right

[Xeno-Step]

I used some water-color pencils on most of it since i wanted to show my nieces i was using stuff they had got me...my cam made the pic lose quality so it's less vibrant. Critz....shoot.

[snoopy8]

Originally Posted by ezac Here it is filled. Bad pic. I shouldn't have done the bubbles but oh well.

Its okay, try making the lines a little bit straighter, so that it doesnt look like your hand was shaking while you did that!

Originally Posted by Bboywhiterice some newb shit.says oddball......or "odb"

It looks weird.... sorry, don't like it, you've done better than that! But the veins look cool lol

Originally Posted by Flipino ^^ i love the veins lol look at my first try at bubbles -_- (just started this week)

Try thicker letters, or try to make the spaces in each letter smaller, but definitely keep working on them! Try using blocks instead of bubble letters!