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12-24-2008, 06:57 PM

its wack dude. what happened to simple letters?

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12-24-2008, 07:06 PM

sick dude sick

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12-25-2008, 04:15 PM

lol i love how there is sucha strong contrast in the posts.
 

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12-25-2008, 10:18 PM

Oh shit, gone is back! Happy Holidays sir!


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12-25-2008, 10:26 PM

I hate to be this harsh but the reason there's such a large difference in opinion is become some people don't have any idea what they're talking about. Gone is one of the most qualified people on this site to give criticism, at least in my opinion.

EDIT: Speaking of criticism I would appreciate some.




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12-25-2008, 11:25 PM

Youre 3d is a bit inconsitent...it changes direction quite a lot...youre tags need some work(not so much letter for letter but more in the general shap of the whole tag). Youre lettershapes on the other hand look pritty pleasing..specially the blue and the green one...and the K in the red one.

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if you do wanna bitch out tho. google search "graffiti creator" or "mr wiggles". girls think it's cool, but really it's weak as fuck and no writer will ever respect you for it.
 

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12-25-2008, 11:35 PM

Originally Posted by Grote smurf View Post
Youre 3d is a bit inconsitent...it changes direction quite a lot...youre tags need some work(not so much letter for letter but more in the general shap of the whole tag). Youre lettershapes on the other hand look pritty pleasing..specially the blue and the green one...and the K in the red one.

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Thanks! Yea my 3D kind of disappears in some spots and the angles get changed, that's me not focusing. What you said about my tag, you mean work on the arrangement of the letters not necessarily the letters themselves?

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12-26-2008, 12:23 AM

"What you said about my tag, you mean work on the arrangement of the letters not necessarily the letters themselves?"

yes...I mean you can always work on the letters offcourse.

In particular with the blue handy...you could let the letters go from big to small or make the whole go a bit diagonal for example, the spaces between letters are important aswell...no to close together so it's readable but not to far appart so it leaves gaps. I dunno hard to say what it specifically misses...what comes to mind is "flow" but thats just sutch a vage word. You could also trow some kanji's in there...most people wouldn't be able to understand it but who gives a crap! Sorry if all of this doesn't make sence...It's late and I'm gonna crash now

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if you do wanna bitch out tho. google search "graffiti creator" or "mr wiggles". girls think it's cool, but really it's weak as fuck and no writer will ever respect you for it.
 

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12-26-2008, 12:52 AM

OK I get what you're saying, thanks for the advice!

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12-26-2008, 01:07 AM

ur graff suks check this out go to myspace type chief 69 he is nice
 

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12-26-2008, 01:21 AM

the first, very first post and its graffiti is sick .

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12-26-2008, 01:45 PM

Originally Posted by BboyCHIEF View Post
ur graff suks check this out go to myspace type chief 69 he is nice
If you're talking about that http://www.myspace.com/chief69one. That stuff is not so good.

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12-30-2008, 06:51 AM

ok, heres one i did, trying to stay awake, pulling an all nighter.... lol? im pretty sure its sized right


bars...


outline.... -_-


ummm fill... was the most annoying thing ever.... omg all i had availale was a bad ball point pen for this thing :P


uhhhhh ya... could really erase the pen... =3

anyway! smiley- personaly, i think the 3D you did was awesome, especially the K!... a lot better than i could do, or even think of, lol
 

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12-30-2008, 07:02 AM

u gotta clean up ur piece man, and straighten up those bars
 

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01-04-2009, 12:32 PM

Kiss Asses....All I see is people kissing ass.
What if someone told Pablo Picasso that your lines don't make sense, or you need to clean up your piece? We wouldn't have ever moved out of the Victorian way of art into Modern art. Isn't graffiti the same kind of self expression? Now I'm not the best at it and I don't plan to be, but if I like it I'll be damned if I ask for someone's opinion again. No great artist or writer does art for the masses they do art for themselves, and for the self-fulfillment. I think we've all lost sight. Dondi wouldn't be pleased.
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