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Chek dis out.. need advices... - 10-10-2008, 09:31 AM

Dis piece dunt look gud for me but i need advices to improve it so critique!!!!!!!!!
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10-10-2008, 05:22 PM

i dont like how the letters go from small to big...whats it say?




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10-11-2008, 01:53 AM

its says TwikZ.... my tag name...
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10-12-2008, 01:40 AM

if it doesnt look good to you, then work on one that does...then ask for criticism. you wont improve if you get advice on things you know are shit. the only criticism that can help you improve is on the things that are your best.

does that make any sense?>>????

if you have to start your post with "i know this sucks but" then you probably should work on something worth posting instead.




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Talking 10-12-2008, 03:18 AM

YES, SIR! I will Report Back in a MIN, SIR!!! Thanks for da advice though
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10-13-2008, 02:53 PM


how bout this??
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11-01-2008, 04:23 AM

Twikz, for now, ur letters arent that strong....i suggest u remove all your decoration and connections so the letters will be more ledgible and people will find it easier to read it. one more Important thing though, is that make sure the "bars" or block parts of ur letters are even and consistant....itll mak ur piece way better. and aim on making ur graff clean aight
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11-08-2008, 05:29 PM

looks nice...missed a little with the 3d on the bottom arrows(the 2 big ones in the middle)....you where supposed to draw a line down where the 2 arrows cross...that's why they don't connect in the middle but instead overlap.

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11-17-2008, 07:38 PM

First peice.
Smite me with constructive critique





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11-18-2008, 12:37 PM

Whats up this is babygirl45 and my friend said that you where cuite so.
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11-18-2008, 01:18 PM

Me?
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11-20-2008, 10:14 PM

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First peice.
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OMG

simple letters dood...

straight off the keyboard..
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11-20-2008, 10:15 PM

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kwl.. but its not consistent. your letter thickness varies too much
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11-20-2008, 11:47 PM

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OMG

simple letters dood...

straight off the keyboard..
Will do.
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