[StylistiC-SMiLeY]

Try to make the letters the same width. If you fixed the widths on that one it would look pretty good.

[Gone84]

and there is nothing wrong with having a little spacing.

[Bleh.]

Okay ^^ thanks for the advice y'all, will work on it

[zimster]

Hey what's up everyone!
I don't post here very often, but I've been coming here for over a year
props to everyone here for teaching me alot.
anyways, i've already uploaded this in the graffiti gallery, hope it's okay to post it here too.
it's a piece i did for a friend (on paper =P).



*edit*
and yeah, i'm pretty sure the yellow streak there is just.. whack. T_T

[Gone84]

still not quite ready to go beyond simples dude. with the colour and designs thrown in, it still looks like you are trying too hard to acheive what graffiti is "supposed" to look like instead of drawing with a mastery of letters. in the end, the whole thing comes off as contrived and screams the word amateur.

work your spacing, work simpler letters until you get them for real and then try adding colour and designs that compliment the flow of your piece as opposed to adding designs just to add them. believe it or not, all that extra stuff you see in the pro's pieces are there for a reason.

[zimster]

thanks for the crit, man

i'll work on that

[Retr0]

Originally Posted by bboyZuhdi

Thanks Darrick, really appreciated

A-Shun, Dubai doesnt have many writers sadly, (1) its TOO hot and you cant spend alot of time outside to write ^^ PLUS .. If police caught you, you're dead... Dubai is flat, as in it doesnt have many alleys that you can run through to mislead police..No its either all villas or tall buildings/skyscrapers .. So no place to run :S .. And as in every country, the law against writers is pretty tough ..
Oh and can you please tell me what will learning simples teach me ?? Seriously I dont know, I would love it if you can clear that out ... Am I supposed to write letters without anything added to it ?

NinJa, I'll try my best, I hope you guys will accept me between you guys .. I came here to learn and not to start any clashes between you guys

Thanks for your reply all, I feel I can trust you guys

dude people like you are the reason dubai has a shit rep for graffiti, you dont know the first shit about anything.

theres more cats out here killin it then you ever will, with more experience under there belt then you ever will have.

Example, i have painted trains...have you? no, will you ever? i highly doubt it because your a typical kid who thinks you pull mad styles but when it comes down to it, you cant pull a simple out your ass.

we got Aybe DS from south africa here, he destroys harder then anyone here, we got frez, we got bare/fate, then we got all the whack as toys who dont know anything, yet call themself a king to your friends, claim they bomb hard, they own the city.

god damn, learn your shit befor you post on the net bro, ffs




- Retro

[Gone84]

damn!!! harsh, but likely to be true

[ezac]

Everyone has to start somewhere.

[daZ]

here'S my first one ^^

[daZ]

daZ with bboy chars

[nandiw]

yo like ive been drawwing graffiti for a lil while ya kno and i learned that its not easy but presice ya kno but when you are done with your pic it was all worth it and looks mad good

[Ninja_Bboy[IUC]]

i like the invert char, did you trace it?

as for the letters sorry man go back to simples, you arent ready for adding styles yet

[daZ]

here'S a other graf from me

[daZ]

and a char from my viper pic