[poderoso]

yup need to fix the middle of A and like the O and the Z haha so basicly the whole thing!

yeah.. it would look as bad if the Z was a lil thicker but i see what you sayin.

yeah i re did it with a little bit more sizin.



thanks

[bboy-taza]

i actually didnt notice a problem with the middle of the A but if you want to fix it your choice.

[Darrick]

overall this pic iz pretty sweet regardless of its few flaws

[lazersailer]

as far as sizing, I think the thinness of the Z looks cool, but maybe trim teh left side of the O? Gone's right about it being too big and "O"s tend to stop lines in my experience unless you write serriffs leading the same way.
Like why not write the serriff going right instead of back into the piece?
Then the eye follows the whole line, and it'll flow a bit more?

[-bboy-Jazz-]

heres some more stuff......drew it in geometry and english class.

[Meth0d]

seen?

[-bboy-Jazz-]

no? seec

The will to seec

oh and was wandering, i know im not ready for it yet, but are there any basic guidlines to follow for a wildstyle? as far as shaping or perspective, or anything more then a point-3D..not like the letters are the actual design..but like..guide marks i should make..just curious.

[lazersailer]

I like it. only comment is make the first E just a tiny bit bigger so it matches the second and the C

[-bboy-Jazz-]

ok ill try that when i sketch it out again thanks.

[snoopy8]

i think he meant as in that style looks a lot like seen's

[-bboy-Jazz-]

oh? well seen did alot of different styles, but i guess i see what you mean..well all i did was do my hand work real big and pretty much outlined it, so its 100% me what do you think?

[snoopy8]

i like it, its not bad

[Darrick]

i really like how the new pic turned out tho but the two e's look like they r being overtakin by the s

[-bboy-Jazz-]

ok thanks..heres another one i did..

[lazersailer]

yeah, the S is kinda taking over the first E. and the face is a bit too big i think.