[Freshbenares]

i like it Bleh the size difference off the characters adds even more Flava to it (my opinion)

[poderoso]

keep workin on you letterin cuz the "m" looks a lil cracked out

what im doin is workin on the basic structure of a single letter over and over again till i feel as if its just right. (most of the time i do it over and over so much i see a different style i can work on in one of the letters)

keep it up

[3khmai1krazy6]

Thx Snoopy8 & Poderoso I appreciate the comments.

Poderoso, haha I duno if I'ma start colorin my pieces just yet, I'm still workin on my style, I'll let u know if I do.

[poderoso]

aww you should cuz that way while you work on your style you work on color schemes and fills.

it would kinda suck if you develop a sick ass style and you fill is dull and doesnt go with the piece.

good luck keep it up!

[3khmai1krazy6]

Yeah u got a good point there Poderoso. I'll see what I can do bout it. Thx for the tip.

[poderoso]

np man keep it up

lol im tryin to do the same thing too ya know lol

[RingerINC]

Originally Posted by 3khmai1krazy6

Thx Snoopy8 & Poderoso I appreciate the comments.

Poderoso, haha I duno if I'ma start colorin my pieces just yet, I'm still workin on my style, I'll let u know if I do.

This is a good idea. Keep churning out the good letters man. And keep them equal thickness.

[poderoso]

it says kix not B18.

i messed up on the fill it looked okay till the brite green showed up and by then it was to late!

let me know whats up

[Bleh.]

It does have someting I like it, but Im not really digging the stone pattern in it ^^ still nice though and what about some of those splatter bubble thingies on the forcefield/double outline/howeveryoucallit just a tip ^^ (its what I always do though xD)

[poderoso]

i dont think the bubbles on the outside are goin to go with this piece.

i think it might have to much goin on with so much detail on the inside idk

[snoopy8]

take of the bricks and stuff... the fill is ok i think... cant really tell cuz the bricks keep distracting me lol

[tony33]

Yo, just starting writing about 2 weeks ago, so I'm in-need of some crits on this I did.

Forget that A and E at the top
It's just a sketch so the bars are still in there, I could of made the D just a lil bigger and closer


Am I on the right track?

[Bleh.]

The "D" is pretty cool but I bet that most of the people will say.. simples. you know, like the letters on youre keyboard So yeah.. simples ^^ later you will bend the bars and stuff etc.. hope I helped

and again.. another simple one:


and one in swedish style:

[RingerINC]

is swedish code for ugly?

[Bleh.]

Could be.. I kinda like swedish style though, its alot different than.. normal style