[yertle321]

yeah i'm really new at this so bare with me

[snoopy8]

soo wats that? lol

[epik]

give it more flow

[cide1]

yeah and the shadows a bit messed up, like on the 'f' its under nd on the rest its on top,
nd uv missed the shadow off the tops of the 'r's as well

[yertle321]

i don't really understand the concept of flow, would anyone like to enlighten me?

[cide1]

hav a look in the handstyle thread bro, thers loadsa flow up in ther

[Meth0d]

go with the flow...

[snoopy8]

umm dont really joint the letters together like that.... and give ur letters flow by like.... umm idk, lol like make all the letters kinad like the same style? like dont make one like some letter NY style then the other one normal.... i think thats wat he meant... if not then idk lol

[Tuddles]

make your letters follow like... a line of motion, and keep preportion and style consistent throughout

[Meth0d]

massive arrows is the trick to a good flow most of the time...

depends how you place them tho

[cide1]

haha yeah arrows everywher, hundreds ov them.......

[yertle321]

thanks for the advice, i worked on it some more and i'll put up the revised version soon

[snoopy8]

OMG i wanna see this

[Tuddles]

man im so excited

[snoopy8]

YOU!!! wallpaper! now! lol