well the proportion of the letters is reasonable...but you forgot some 3d here and there..It's not bad but youre letterstructure needs some work. By keeping things simple they often come out a lot stronger.
I copied this char from Gino Fuchs...I screwed it up a lil but still came out nice and I guess..anyway check for his work if you can find it anywhere his charaters are the bomb
And a new zesy..any critz?
