[snoopy8]

ohh... ok, i guess thats a lil less toyish.... still, like grote said, sketch a lot more before u go out bombing again... i mean, honestly, the only good ones u did was the BMX one and the yellow and red TRIPZ

[Grote smurf]

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simple for my grandparents....Yes I know I'm hardcore..


Zesy...still have to do something with tha coloring just don't know what yet..any Ideas..or critz?

[TRIPZ]

Originally Posted by Grote smurf

tripz...youre cancontrole looks pritty decent..not much wrong with that, only advice I have is wait a while before you go out painting again untill youre sketches get better. That way I can garentee(??) youre painted work will come out much stronger.

peace

yer cheerz i need to try with chalk templates/skeches aswell, those were off the top, also i need to figure out the best sequence to put down, coz all them were done
outline
letter fill
3d
then id have to do the outline again in spots,

but using chalk first id assume ya do the fills first then the outlines???

[spetcnaz]

couldnt sleep so i found i bunch of markers and drew this shit..again i know its shit but what the heck..and to top it all off the cam made it orange..it was red..well, injoy!
brings me back to the old days ^^

http://img153.imageshack.us/my.php?i...ture0024ju.jpg

oh and forgot to say, my cam REALLY sucks..damn thing's blurry as hell

[Phat.uae]

that zesy looks dope ,try fillin it in with complete black with yellow spots inside the letters ...

[Grote smurf]

thanx phat. to be honoust I don't really get what you mean by the complete black and yellow spots fill..I would loose the outlines wouldn't I, maby I don't get it cause I'm only awake for like 5 minutes or something. Couls you explain a lil more...thanx.

and tripz tats the right order, outline...fill over first outline, then 3d, then final(letter) outline, then highlights and and maby bubbles and stuff, then outline around piece...thats how I work I dunno if its the correct way

[Phat.uae]

yeah lol what meant was fill it with black but ur right ud lose the outilne seeing as u also colored the cloud behind the letters with black so now id actually say ,orange would look nice for a fill in

[Grote smurf]

so grey with orange cool thanx....I'll hope my cheapy markers will go over the current fill without changing...I hope, anyway thanx man

[Kombo]

One of the first sketches that came out half decent.

[snoopy8]

pretty nice kombo... but work on ur R, well the lower part of the R, i think if u keep the top part of it, and fix the lower part, its gonna look pretty dope. also fix ur E a lil bit too. cuz most of ur letters, like the Z, look like if they were just gonna be straight looking letters, and wit that E the way it is, idk, it doesnt combine, i guess thats how u say it lol.... and where do u live at? wheres T.O. at?

[Kombo]

Originally Posted by snoopy8

pretty nice kombo... but work on ur R, well the lower part of the R, i think if u keep the top part of it, and fix the lower part, its gonna look pretty dope. also fix ur E a lil bit too. cuz most of ur letters, like the Z, look like if they were just gonna be straight looking letters, and wit that E the way it is, idk, it doesnt combine, i guess thats how u say it lol.... and where do u live at? wheres T.O. at?

Appreciate the crits.
T.O. = Toronto Ontario

[Gone84]

dude. grote, that zesy looks really good.

[Grote smurf]

thanx gone I was happy with it myself...glad you like it. Just kinda shitty for putting on walls but yeah screw it glad something finally came out nice.

peace

[Gone84]

i think it would look nice on a wall actually

[Grote smurf]

yeah, guess youre right but I'm not that tall...maby if I have a ladder