[dope2be]

No problem.

http://www.bboy.org/gallery/showphot...cat=502&page=1

RENK in color let me know what ya think.

peace

[xxbriggs]

I like the STYLE, but i'm not really liking the letter. Coloring goods, except the force field type thing, kinda looks dirty, which doesn't fit the feel of the other letters.

[Vash]

work on that handstyle.

[xxbriggs]

Heres some new stuff I did today, including a new handstyle or two. I'm still not set on a certain word.

[xxbriggs]

more

[xxbriggs]

lil more

[xxbriggs]

last

[dope2be]

Thanx for the feedback people. I did the force field thing with goldcolored pen, it looks pritty dope but the scanner makes it look like some sort of dirty brown(Yes I'm blaiming it on the scanner). I still find it hard to be creatif with my handstyle, well just keep trying.

xxbriggs- youre first one looks dope coloring and style, but I think it would look better with a closed outline.
I don't know but I really like youre handstyles, remind me of kanji in some weird way. The last one is really clean and I like the drips and coloring but not really feeling the lettering there, and the buildings could get a lil fix up to.

peace

[xxbriggs]

yeah, it's annoying how much is lost between what you have in your hand, and what you show on the net. I'll try and scan mine next time instead of taking pics. They end up lookin' blurry, and the colors are off.

Thanks for the feedback! I think that first one (with the red drips) needs to be drawn a few more times to get the letters just right. I agree with you about the buildings. I shouldnt have half-assed them, cause it kinda takes away from the clean look of the top one. What do you mean by closed outline? Like, instead of the little black lines to show the basic outline? Yeah, i wasn't sure if I should do it, and since it was permanent i went the safer route. I'm gonna try another later and try it the way you suggested. And thanks for the bit about my handstyle, I wanted it to look arabic almost, but kanji is cool too! It's probably because ive been using a brush-pen they use for calligraphy which gives it that paintbrush look.

Hopefully I'll have time tomorrow to draw at least one thing. I'm still looking for one word I really like so I can start taggin'. Raid is cool, but i'm afraid it might get boring to work with, and Wolf has a lot of letters I dont like. who knows ::shrug::

later

p.s. what do you use for your coloring? Your colors are dope! Are they prismacolors?

[dope2be]

I was wondering where you did youre handstyle with. Yeah the outline I men't is how you discribe it, don't know if it's better but it was just a taught. I know about the word thing, every one I made is a differend word, I had Explore, Fake1,skill, dutch,stuck,curve and I now I'm thinking of RENK or RENEK. It's hard to find a word you like.

Ohh and about the coloring, it's kinda hard to discribe, because in Holland whe use differend name's for the markers then in America. I'll look on the internet if I can find a similar marker so I'll know the English name.


peace

[xxbriggs]

Holland, sweet.

Right now I have to use whatever i can find because I have no money for stuff other than school. That's why I'm using highlighters, and sharpies. What do you use for your handstyle? Just a thick black marker?

[dope2be]

Yeah, I love Holland(most of the time), but I bet there's a lot more to do in Chicago then in Holland.

I think my markers are the same as sharpy's. And a cd marker for the black line's. And my handstyle is just with a big black marker. Are highliters the fluory yellow,orange,pink,green one's, I use those to, I only have what I could rip from my mom .
Just trying a new handstyle, so here it is:

http://www.bboy.org/gallery/showphot...cat=502&page=1

Ok, hint's, tips,critics let me know.

peace

[xo !kayla! ox]

i personally dont love it.

but i havnt been here in a longggg time, but ive been practicing a lot!!! i did all of these at school. tell me what you think:

number 1
number 2
number 3

i have more but they're really bad.

tell me what you think, good and bad comments

[dope2be]

Didn't think you would be back, you have improved that's what matters.

I like the shape of the first one but it could have bin cleaner. Drips can be a lil better 2.
The second one I like better, clean and the style is ok.
the 3d one I like qua style the most but I think It would have looked better if you gave it a outline. that will make it look cleaner.

Ohh and here is my bubblish RENK
http://www.bboy.org/gallery/showphot...cat=502&page=1
let me know if you got any advice,hint's.

peace

[xxbriggs]

Kayla-

I agree with what dope said. The first one could be a lot cleaner, I like the second one. the last one looks a bit sloppy, and the flow is kinda weird. Id be curious to see what it looks like with black outline to accentuate the letters.


dope-

Your handstyle is ait, but too choppy and premeditated. It doesn't look like you could do it quickly or with flow. Try something that you can write like cursive.

I'm really likin' the coloring on that bubbly stuff. Your good at making your stuff look clean. The letters E and K could use a little work, other than that, props.

Now heres one of mine, critiques welcome.