Newbie Pics - Page 13

Poppenjay · 05-19-2003, 01:40 AM

for the camel throwie......the throwup itself needs some tweakin, and drips in my book ain't so hot

qubixrube · 05-19-2003, 03:57 AM

I gonna give quick critic for y'all cause I dun got much time. So this is for the current pg.

Bomb - You got a creative style that seems to make u stand apart then most writer of this time. Add some effects and work on others, give them some colour and youd be set. Your 3d though is kinda wack. Put a point on the paper somewhere, anywhere, and draw all your lines toward it. Then try and conform the shape of the outline to the shape of the letter. For putting it through, only draw the side ud see visible but still make sure it points 2 the perspective point. Also, try givin ur stuff some outlines and alphabets should be a concern for ya too. Avg score - 6.5/10

Azn - Bro, how could ya 4get to the letters? I mean come on... lol, not that big a deal. Hell, its creative spellin now! Asn and Mokey jus might catch on sumtime... lol. I see ur style developing but I think u need to make ur alphabets a bit smoother, specially on that asn peice. Sorry, but thats jus really sloppy, and the 3 lines in the back jus make it confusing.... The bomb tag though was pretty dope and the 4 thing seems like it could us a bit o extra letters.... lol. either or though, u got sumthing developing that with a bit of practise will prolly flourish... as lame as that sounds. avg 7.3/10

AnTiK · 05-19-2003, 05:48 AM

well u certainly manipulated that piece bomb... work on ya 3d now ... like bboymurda said use the dot perspective very handy .. all u need is a ruller and u can make it come from ne where which is the best part about it.

Im gonna open up my dust black book tonight and post a piece, tommorow maybe.

oh yeah bboymurda lol some of that stuff u wrote was a lil confusing, i had to go back and read it twice to make sence of it

all good though i got ya. good advise

iomek · **ok -** 05-19-2003, 01:22 PM

i will try out the perspective dot thing!

B-Girl BaLi · 05-19-2003, 05:36 PM

some shit i did...

B-Girl BaLi · 05-19-2003, 05:37 PM

my girl Katy's ish... i dunno she isnt finsihed but i love this ish

Xeph0n · 05-19-2003, 05:48 PM

Totally solid ones ya got there, Zee! Good colored and Katy's "ish" is very good... and so is yours!

I wish i got color-pens, sharpies, markers or whatever......

AnTiK · 05-19-2003, 06:42 PM

wow ... u did that paint 1 with markers?

i gotta get me some

extreamly good colouring bali

B-Girl BaLi · 05-19-2003, 09:03 PM

its not done ... i did it with whiteout.. sharpies.. colored pencils *to do the shadowing in the letters* and these weird paint pens for the silver stuff...

katy isnt a graff artist.. but i liked her shit.. we got ppl to guess wat teh vines up top say...

wat do YOU think it says?

www.bboy.org/ · 05-19-2003, 10:09 PM

heres one any comments?

F Stylz · 05-19-2003, 10:11 PM

I like the H but the rest of the letters seem to be not as tight. Work on those last couple letters. I like the 3-D though. Looking a lot better Joe.

AnTiK · 05-19-2003, 11:58 PM

it says sumthin .. i thought it was just all flowers and fairies..... show me like in paint or sumthin where it says sumthin

qubixrube · 05-20-2003, 11:07 AM

More ratings for y'all

Bali - The lettering itself is pretty simplistic and the 3d is very skinny, there are barely a flow between the letters and the letters, jus wack (sorry). Work on makin them thicker and smoother, not rounded lines nessecarily, but smoother. The colour job though was pretty good, and the roller w/ paint looks well drawn. Overall though, I think u can do better. 5.5/10

Katy - Woh this is some abstract ish! There are so many different purty colours... lol. What id suggest is loosen up on the pencil! SOme of the lines are too jagged compared to the rest of the pic... and learn the aspect of shading. Other then that, great. But Im not really one to judge art, as no1 is. 7.3/10

Joe - Your style is definitly progressive bro. Check back on here and see what u were writing only months ago and look at this... that is if f styles didnt delete it 1st. Your alphabets seem better then mine overall and unlike f said I think u kept it tight the entire ways through. Your 3d looks good but as a thing is still wack. Once again, use a focal point to give it realism. and also, a bit of a thing I discovered, if 1 thing overlaps the other it looks better if the 3d does too. Like near the end with the e and the arrow, the arrow should go over, ya dig? Still, colour it and would be one the dopest peices Ive seen of ya yet. 8.7/10

Peace y'all
_murda

iomek · **yeah -** 05-20-2003, 12:12 PM

i think there all good so far! i like yours joe, look beta in color, well most pieces do!

hmm, i want some more sharpies, i have blue black green and red, do you know any websites where you can order them from? i will check on ebay later.

peace

cranigra · 05-20-2003, 01:57 PM

i like the hydra piece. .. i like the the way it looks.. it kind of has that style to it that i've seen before.. .its hard to explain it; its trashy, kind of jagged but the jags are more exagerated, and it really doesn't look good untill you take a good look at it.. no offense all of the things i mentioned are supposed to be good. ..yes that means the trashy style is a good thing.. ..

keep it up.. ..