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Fisdj · 08-21-2004, 05:39 PM

good stuff - ur getting better since last i saw ur stuff - - -

couple things tho - work ur letter structure and try to make them look a bit better . also the graffiti bubbles as an inside color will get old rele quickly - try coloring . other then that ur 3d is pretty good and so r ur forcefields - keep it up

aker88 · 08-21-2004, 08:46 PM

Originally posted by Newb.Breaker
i need critz on these pieces from my battle with desii

too much bubbles man.....u need to forget bout these bubbles....but i like ur letter style....and u have good 3d but still needs more practice....also work on ur structure...and add more colors to ur peices....these drips look nice....but work on em more and make more drips around the peice....

uti · **Heres my 1st 3-d attemt -** 08-23-2004, 10:44 PM

wot u think, peace

aker88 · 08-23-2004, 11:13 PM

thats pretty good uti....its nice and clean ....u have good shading...clean inking....ur handstyle getting better...u messed up on some places but its aight...did u forget a letter??....cus all i see here is S T E D Y...i think u fortgot the A....anyways....keep on practicin.....

uti · **Coo -** 08-24-2004, 08:09 AM

lol, ano bout the spelling, i wa gonna put steady but i did it to big so i had to put 'stey', well any way fanx for the tips aker, peace

uti · **First 3-d style attempt -** 08-24-2004, 09:02 PM

this is my first try so the lines are a bit dody, but anyway, tips? peace

MC. SIK · 08-25-2004, 10:51 PM

and i gotta new throwie, my first time workin on shadows

CtrlAltDestroy · **first attempt -** 08-25-2004, 10:58 PM

this anywhere close to looking decent? i think the 3D is right...

Watashi · 08-26-2004, 02:41 AM

aight, im back, hopefully i have gotten better letter structer (sp?) on this one than some of mine in the past (check out my past battles......

). Im trying to get better with it all, but keep the same style, which is kinda hard....but hopefully i can pull it off.

and how the crap do you get a good hand style down? cuz as you can tell mine sucks. Is it in that huge look here thread? cuz i dont think i have ever made it all the way through that thing yet.

smooth640 · **nice -** 08-26-2004, 08:52 AM

i dunno wot it is about that fun piece but i like it. watashi i think it would still be a good idea to read that guide. it could help you a lot.

PoPpNgRlDaBs · 08-26-2004, 08:50 PM

ummm im a newbie to taggin/bombs/graff......so heres a couple of what i got down so far....

PoPpNgRlDaBs · 08-26-2004, 08:51 PM

another....

PoPpNgRlDaBs · 08-26-2004, 08:52 PM

last one...

aker88 · 08-26-2004, 10:08 PM

PoPpNgRlDaBs: the first pic and the last pic...both have very good letter structure and both nice and clean....the second pic is wack....i sugest u work on a different style....or keep working on the same style of ur first pic....go look in the newbs look here thread if u want help wit flow,letter structure , or 3d.....keep em comin....

watashi: yea i think u improved alot more than before....to get ur handstyle lookin better....first write ur name normally...and then start tilting ur letters a lil and add curves and arrows and crap....go look at other ppls tags and get some ideas....

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Newb.Breaker Registered User Respect: 1 Posts: 122 Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Toronto	08-21-2004, 04:00 PM and


Fisdj Stylist Respect: 2 Posts: 488 Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: RALEIGH	08-21-2004, 05:39 PM good stuff - ur getting better since last i saw ur stuff - - - couple things tho - work ur letter structure and try to make them look a bit better . also the graffiti bubbles as an inside color will get old rele quickly - try coloring . other then that ur 3d is pretty good and so r ur forcefields - keep it up
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uti ! Respect: 1 Posts: 451 Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: disney land	Heres my 1st 3-d attemt - 08-23-2004, 10:44 PM wot u think, peace


aker88 <-Banned-> Respect: 1 Posts: 1,169 Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: CHI-TIZZLE/ PALESTINE !	08-23-2004, 11:13 PM thats pretty good uti....its nice and clean ....u have good shading...clean inking....ur handstyle getting better...u messed up on some places but its aight...did u forget a letter??....cus all i see here is S T E D Y...i think u fortgot the A....anyways....keep on practicin.....
	EROK


uti ! Respect: 1 Posts: 451 Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: disney land	Coo - 08-24-2004, 08:09 AM lol, ano bout the spelling, i wa gonna put steady but i did it to big so i had to put 'stey', well any way fanx for the tips aker, peace


uti ! Respect: 1 Posts: 451 Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: disney land	First 3-d style attempt - 08-24-2004, 09:02 PM this is my first try so the lines are a bit dody, but anyway, tips? peace


MC. SIK ..... Respect: 1 Posts: 616 Join Date: Apr 2004	08-25-2004, 10:51 PM and i gotta new throwie, my first time workin on shadows
MC. SIK ..... Respect: 1 Posts: 616 Join Date: Apr 2004


CtrlAltDestroy Registered User Respect: 1 Posts: 9 Join Date: Aug 2004	first attempt - 08-25-2004, 10:58 PM this anywhere close to looking decent? i think the 3D is right...


Watashi Registered User Respect: 1.5 Posts: 829 Join Date: Jun 2003	08-26-2004, 02:41 AM aight, im back, hopefully i have gotten better letter structer (sp?) on this one than some of mine in the past (check out my past battles...... ). Im trying to get better with it all, but keep the same style, which is kinda hard....but hopefully i can pull it off. and how the crap do you get a good hand style down? cuz as you can tell mine sucks. Is it in that huge look here thread? cuz i dont think i have ever made it all the way through that thing yet.
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smooth640 R0835 Respect: 1 Posts: 95 Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: ALL OVER	nice - 08-26-2004, 08:52 AM i dunno wot it is about that fun piece but i like it. watashi i think it would still be a good idea to read that guide. it could help you a lot.
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PoPpNgRlDaBs Registered User Respect: 1 Posts: 36 Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: SATx	08-26-2004, 08:50 PM ummm im a newbie to taggin/bombs/graff......so heres a couple of what i got down so far....
	----->dabs<----- _hAtEd By MaNy, BuT i DoNt GiVe A fUcK_


PoPpNgRlDaBs Registered User Respect: 1 Posts: 36 Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: SATx	08-26-2004, 08:51 PM another....
	----->dabs<----- _hAtEd By MaNy, BuT i DoNt GiVe A fUcK_


PoPpNgRlDaBs Registered User Respect: 1 Posts: 36 Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: SATx	08-26-2004, 08:52 PM last one...
	----->dabs<----- _hAtEd By MaNy, BuT i DoNt GiVe A fUcK_


aker88 <-Banned-> Respect: 1 Posts: 1,169 Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: CHI-TIZZLE/ PALESTINE !	08-26-2004, 10:08 PM PoPpNgRlDaBs: the first pic and the last pic...both have very good letter structure and both nice and clean....the second pic is wack....i sugest u work on a different style....or keep working on the same style of ur first pic....go look in the newbs look here thread if u want help wit flow,letter structure , or 3d.....keep em comin.... watashi: yea i think u improved alot more than before....to get ur handstyle lookin better....first write ur name normally...and then start tilting ur letters a lil and add curves and arrows and crap....go look at other ppls tags and get some ideas....
	EROK