[madwakfreek]

if he works on that style and developes it, it will get better. and 3d effects almost always make a peice look much better. and his style is already sorta basic.. just needs work.

[Bboy Xz0sT]

Lil kiwi or w/e your name is he is sum constructive critz

try and make letters slightly the same size like dont have one relly small and one HUGE until you get better. dont try and do lots of fancy shit to start use blok letters and try 3d and coloring until you get the basics work or the style of your letters make them your own but as i said keep it simple for now so pretty much just practice

[lil'kiwi]

Comments noted.Thanks for now.

[madwakfreek]

i'd go with simple letters to start with.. not block lettersm but basically a bigger verion of the origional, then do a little something with it.. bend em to the left or stretch em sideways maybe?

[smooth640]

I agree wiv MADWAKFREEK about the bending and stretching. Anywayz heres anuva piece from me. The colourin really suks but i fink my leta structure is gettin beta. P.S DO NOT ASK Y I DID TYRE.

[Bb0y s0uTh]

Hey yeah this is my first graffide of my name. It says SoUTh.

http://www.bboy.org/gallery/showphoto.php?photo=22076

[bboy aero]

hey guyz i've been doin graff bout a year now on my own jus wanna kno how i'm coming along with constructive criticism.........thanxe

[bboy aero]

did thise a while ago

[bboy aero]

my first sort of mural piece...

[qubixrube]

You say youve been writing for a year ?

1) You shulda learned somthing bout letter structure. yours was incredibly choppy and ill suited to what youd probably like.

2) Width - it varys so much id compare it to mixing spaghetti with macaroni and hoping somthing comes out. Seriously, look for consistency

3) Connection and their non existence. Either your connections are attempting to be too compicated or they dont exist at all.

4) Your colors were either not there or horribly done. A quick tip: black does not go with blue.

5) Your perspective drwaing sucks as well, try keeping everything at one angle.

I could butcher your pictures longer (and its all true), but im running outta comp time so im gonna write up the 101 quick

------------------Graffiti Tips and tricks----------------
Coloring:

the first and most important rule of coloring is that shuld you have black or white in your picture you dont want something thatll compare to it but rather contrast. "Natural" tones (green, tan, brown, grey, etc) almost always go together quite well. Primary colors almost always look awful together. Refran from using extra bright colors (highlighter shades). However, with All this in mind the worst thing you can do is bleed your markers. Do not concentrate your color to one area or go over a place too often or itll look inconsistent

I would write more but my times running out. Hope that helps. Peace
_murda

[desii]

tell me what you think, its pritty shity so yah

[madwakfreek]

work on letter structure guys.. keep it simple for now, then add complexity.. but for now keep it simple.. i promise, use my tips and you'll get better.. if you dont beleive me, go to the first page of "official blackbook post" and check out my old stuff.. i started simple..

simple but effective.. it's the best way to start off.. and easier to paint

[Dotes]

thats burner

that file says my tag (Dotes) but its done on some web site which you can create the style and colour and all, but its my tag, ok peace out all, laterz -SNM- DoTeS - DyNaMiK -

heres a freestyle: i dont freestyle like in 8 mile, but when my rhymes hit it will take ya a while, to remember who you be, and all you will see, is me..MC Legacy

[MC. SIK]

ok i donno, did u make that in the internet?

[Bboy Xz0sT]

Wow bboy murda finaly posted here again its been awhile if i remember correctly what ever happened with you getting busted murda?