[madwakfreek]

keep it up.. you just need to keep the same style for each letter man, and work on flow a little... i can see you gettin pretty good at this if you keep ati it

[Chance301]

once again didnt come out like i wanted it too, and i really hate the colors i used but my outlines are gettin cleaner
criticism welcome

[Pyro of xFx]

ok on this one i did somethin different...i like it better, took me longer lol

[bboy MuRo]

oops sorry about not posting this in the right spot


ive been doing graffiti for a lil while now but nothing serious


so rate this and plz give me some tips


http://www.bboy.org/gallery/showphoto.php?photo=21966

[bboy_stitch]

old letter style. i did this late at night a while back as a start to a new style, but i gave up on it cus i couldnt spawn anything new off of this. so whatcha think? i know the color is bad, but i didnt have much light and all i had to color it with were some crayola washable markers (thin tip) rate the style, not the color.

[hamish]

heres one
constructive critisicm please !!!!

[hamish]

and another

[aker88]

ooooookkkkkkkk
u need alot of work on ur peices man and next time start with pencil and outline wit the color that u want , work on ur letter style alot and try doing simple letters instead of this ugly crap (i dont like it at all) when u get used to simple letters start adding stuff like arrows 3d etc etc , so dont do 3d at all now , ok good thraeds that will help u learn step by step r "NEWBS LOOK HERE THREAD" and "MORE STUFF TO HELP NEWBS" really good stuff in there i really suggets that u read care fully and do wat these threads say, trust me it will help u alot..........

[Bboy Xz0sT]

He said constructive critz not shit on his face critz jesus aker. Alright first of all "hamish" do not ever use that color i can barly see it try adding 3d and using a pencil or pen. Post sum more in a proper pencil and i will critz it.

[madwakfreek]

first, ignore everything that aker said about your letters. he dosent know much himself anyways,

so yea there are a few threads here to help you out.. i try to post something helpful every couple of weeks.. articles and stuff like that..


personally, i like your style.. keep at it. it's good to do 3d on your peices most of the time.. it adds depth and fills gaps. also, color your peices and use a sharpie to outline them. a good marker is 'colorific' or 'laurentien' theyre both cheap but with a little practice, you can get some sweet fades.

my only advise right now, is to work on your letter structure ad keep practiceing.. and never be afraid to experiment with something new

[Chance301]

can someone please gimme criticism on the last piece i posted

[madwakfreek]

not too ban chance.. just keep it up and work on the letter structure some.. i JUST posted a big checklist.. read through it and see what you can do to help yourself.. you'd be suprised how much it'll help you.. it's all the things i learned to try to include over the past 3 years.

[hamish]

thanks madwakfreak and Xz0sTthat helped, i didnt mind wat aker88 said.But wut did u mean when u said "work on ur letter structuring"i dont get it

[lil'kiwi]

It says "denise".....was bored at work and drew it....and now suddenly i am addicted to drawing....anyway,check it out

[aker88]

Originally posted by madwakfreek first, ignore everything that aker said about your letters. he dosent know much himself anyways, so yea there are a few threads here to help you out.. i try to post something helpful every couple of weeks.. articles and stuff like that.. personally, i like your style.. keep at it. it's good to do 3d on your peices most of the time.. it adds depth and fills gaps. also, color your peices and use a sharpie to outline them. a good marker is 'colorific' or 'laurentien' theyre both cheap but with a little practice, you can get some sweet fades. my only advise right now, is to work on your letter structure ad keep practiceing.. and never be afraid to experiment with something new

man wat the hell r u saying , u teling him to keep doin that style and add 3d , let em first do simple letters and when he gets used to simple letters he can add 3d and crap and then he can get bak to that style he's doing now and improve it...why do u yall get everything im saying wrong.....