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desii · **give me critz on my style or lettering. -** 07-08-2004, 08:31 PM

i just want some opinionz on my lettering, im kinda working on make it all fit on one line. im bad at that

Freakonaleash · 07-08-2004, 10:01 PM

trying somthin new
what ya think?

Bboy Xz0sT · 07-08-2004, 11:04 PM

"itz nice....wut type of pen did u use?" i used a PENcil

desii · 07-08-2004, 11:46 PM

ohh hahah my bad i should have known better to then to ask a stupid question. how embarssing

Bboy Xz0sT · 07-09-2004, 12:14 AM

meh no prob i got nothing better to do im relly bored

Bboy Xz0sT · 07-10-2004, 12:21 AM

I need critz on this it REALLY SUCKS!!! i always do this to myselfi start doing graff and then i quit for a month and bak to where i started anyways its prettymuch block letters its not at all what i had visioned but w/e you got to start sumwhere

madwakfreek · 07-10-2004, 01:18 AM

thers the problem.. you're not into it steady enough..

just keep practiceing and keep it simple.. dont overlap for a while man.. wokr on each letter seperately for a while, then add extentions after you got structure down.. and go from there

desii · 04:08 AM

give me some critz and tipz thankz

http://www.bboy.org/forums/attachmen...&postid=448664

ohh and also i was wonder wut iom means...i seen dat a lot on this site.

madwakfreek · 07-10-2004, 01:11 PM

just work on ya letter forms man.. keep it upo, you'll get it soon

MC. SIK · 07-10-2004, 03:40 PM

i like ur choice of color desii,

also...

whats wrong with my throwie that i jus put ina battle

iomek · **Re: critz -** 07-10-2004, 03:58 PM

Originally posted by desii
give me some critz and tipz thankz

http://www.bboy.org/forums/attachmen...&postid=448664

ohh and also i was wonder wut iom means...i seen dat a lot on this site.

im iom, aka, iom one..

iomek · 07-10-2004, 03:59 PM

why?

mc sik - work on your colors, keep them minimum at first, just so you can get a good feel with what color goes with what, cause at the moment, that throwie, none of the colors work together, especially the way how you put them in together aswell..

desii · **Re: Re: critz -** 07-10-2004, 05:16 PM

Originally posted by B-boy-bomb
im iom, aka, iom one..

i still dont get wut iom means.

troche · 06:06 PM

work on the structure of your letters desii, try to stick with similiar structure in each letter and not vary so much, like with the 'A' which varies too much, nice fill and pretty good outline and forcefield.. work on outlining by taking your time and looking ahead of yourself when your outlining (look at the next curve your about to go around and imagine what motions you have to make). That piece could also use a simple 3D just take a permanent marker and go over the black outline in a single side of each letter.. blah blah blah..... good luck

P.S. you don't need to know what iom means..

germ... · **few handies... -** 07-10-2004, 11:47 PM

heres a handie i did.... tell me what u all think

the GERM is mine but the AIK is my boys...

tell us wat u think

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desii o.0 Respect: 1 Posts: 993 Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: GaRdEn GrOvE	give me critz on my style or lettering. - 07-08-2004, 08:31 PM i just want some opinionz on my lettering, im kinda working on make it all fit on one line. im bad at that
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Freakonaleash Registered User Respect: 1 Posts: 12 Join Date: May 2004 Location: Ontario	07-08-2004, 10:01 PM trying somthin new what ya think?
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Bboy Xz0sT Registered User Respect: 1 Posts: 151 Join Date: May 2003 Location: Port Moody	07-08-2004, 11:04 PM "itz nice....wut type of pen did u use?" i used a PENcil
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desii o.0 Respect: 1 Posts: 993 Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: GaRdEn GrOvE	07-08-2004, 11:46 PM ohh hahah my bad i should have known better to then to ask a stupid question. how embarssing
	N e W b B a T t L e S Griz_DbS tie bboy south- won 4 way battle. maxium,south,stitch- lost mc.sick- won newb. breaker- lost El-J- won Degs- lost TeenageTagger91- WON K.0. Max- on going degs (rematch)- tie Add Me! http://www.myspace.com/index.cfm?fus...20050624000542


Bboy Xz0sT Registered User Respect: 1 Posts: 151 Join Date: May 2003 Location: Port Moody	07-09-2004, 12:14 AM meh no prob i got nothing better to do im relly bored
	Bboy Xz0sT


Bboy Xz0sT Registered User Respect: 1 Posts: 151 Join Date: May 2003 Location: Port Moody	07-10-2004, 12:21 AM I need critz on this it REALLY SUCKS!!! i always do this to myselfi start doing graff and then i quit for a month and bak to where i started anyways its prettymuch block letters its not at all what i had visioned but w/e you got to start sumwhere
	Bboy Xz0sT


madwakfreek Member Respect: 5 Posts: 1,250 Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: NB, canada	07-10-2004, 01:18 AM thers the problem.. you're not into it steady enough.. just keep practiceing and keep it simple.. dont overlap for a while man.. wokr on each letter seperately for a while, then add extentions after you got structure down.. and go from there
	Artist by choice, Vandal by definition. NVC NON-VERBAL COMMUNICATION


desii o.0 Respect: 1 Posts: 993 Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: GaRdEn GrOvE	critz - 07-10-2004, 02:43 AM give me some critz and tipz thankz http://www.bboy.org/forums/attachmen...&postid=448664 ohh and also i was wonder wut iom means...i seen dat a lot on this site. Last edited by desii : 07-10-2004 at 04:08 AM.
	N e W b B a T t L e S Griz_DbS tie bboy south- won 4 way battle. maxium,south,stitch- lost mc.sick- won newb. breaker- lost El-J- won Degs- lost TeenageTagger91- WON K.0. Max- on going degs (rematch)- tie Add Me! http://www.myspace.com/index.cfm?fus...20050624000542


madwakfreek Member Respect: 5 Posts: 1,250 Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: NB, canada	07-10-2004, 01:11 PM just work on ya letter forms man.. keep it upo, you'll get it soon
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MC. SIK ..... Respect: 1 Posts: 616 Join Date: Apr 2004	07-10-2004, 03:40 PM i like ur choice of color desii, also... whats wrong with my throwie that i jus put ina battle
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iomek ORIGINAL BADBOY Respect: 5 Posts: 2,481 Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: UK BLUD	07-10-2004, 03:59 PM why? mc sik - work on your colors, keep them minimum at first, just so you can get a good feel with what color goes with what, cause at the moment, that throwie, none of the colors work together, especially the way how you put them in together aswell..
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troche TwoSidedTagTicklingTyrant Respect: 1 Posts: 128 Join Date: May 2004 Location: tally	07-10-2004, 06:03 PM work on the structure of your letters desii, try to stick with similiar structure in each letter and not vary so much, like with the 'A' which varies too much, nice fill and pretty good outline and forcefield.. work on outlining by taking your time and looking ahead of yourself when your outlining (look at the next curve your about to go around and imagine what motions you have to make). That piece could also use a simple 3D just take a permanent marker and go over the black outline in a single side of each letter.. blah blah blah..... good luck P.S. you don't need to know what iom means.. Last edited by troche : 07-10-2004 at 06:06 PM.
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germ... Registered User Respect: 1 Posts: 6 Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: ChucKtOWn	few handies... - 07-10-2004, 11:47 PM heres a handie i did.... tell me what u all think the GERM is mine but the AIK is my boys... tell us wat u think
	dont touch nething with some GERM on it cause u could get caught with a AIKin disease.... -304-