Official Blackbook Thread - Page 196

Grote smurf · 01-18-2009, 11:06 AM

Not really feeling the I&C but deffenetly dig the other letters, specially the F.
You still gonna post the colored version?

peace

kdjiny · 01-19-2009, 12:20 PM

thanks for the critz, ill be working on my letters
haha yeah its on my sisters camera i think ill post it up some time today.
man the coloring is not that great and it looks alot better in person than on picture.

Grote smurf · 01-19-2009, 05:08 PM

Thats what usually happens with my work aswell, it starts of decent and it reaches its peak when I put down the outlines with a black marker then it goes downhill as I color the piece...ohh well shit happens

kdjiny · 01-19-2009, 08:47 PM

haha yeah i hate it, it always happens T__T
haha well here it is...

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BigTonyGotDat · 01-21-2009, 07:25 AM

hey pretty nice could be better throw a lil more detail with your lettering and get better colors i be fukin up on my colors too...just my opinion i think the 3d effect, shadowing w/e any 1 wants to call it looks better going towards the bottom right but people got there own preferences

kdjiny · 01-29-2009, 05:46 PM

aitee thanks :]

here are some other ones i did recently.

kdjiny · 01-29-2009, 09:36 PM

ahh haha this is one i just did now

Gone84 · 01-30-2009, 12:22 AM

need more work on your letters. get back to the basics and dont worry about the effects and all that shit. your letters lack continuity. when you figure out how the letters are supposed to work, then the effects will make more sense to you and start to be easier

kdjiny · 01-30-2009, 12:30 AM

kk thanks gone.
so i need more better structure in the letters right?

Gone84 · 01-30-2009, 02:52 AM

right. its all about the letters. consistency being one of the hardest things to learn. there needs to be a balance and structure to whatever it is you are doing. otherwise the eye isnt being led anywhere. direction, focal point, these things make up FLOW. flow is what makes a piece work as a whole.

kdjiny · 01-30-2009, 02:36 PM

oh okay i got you, thanks!
ill get working on that

Elegal · 01-30-2009, 05:48 PM

random stuff..

Grote smurf · 01-31-2009, 09:50 AM

Both pieces very Nice!!

Elegal · 02-03-2009, 01:35 AM

thx

kdjiny · 02-03-2009, 05:00 PM

dam, looks sicc! really like the coloring on it, hella tightt. what markers you use??

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kdjiny Member Respect: 1 Posts: 104 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Clif	01-19-2009, 12:20 PM thanks for the critz, ill be working on my letters haha yeah its on my sisters camera i think ill post it up some time today. man the coloring is not that great and it looks alot better in person than on picture.


kdjiny Member Respect: 1 Posts: 104 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Clif	01-19-2009, 08:47 PM haha yeah i hate it, it always happens T__T haha well here it is... [IMG] [/IMG]


BigTonyGotDat TONY MONTANNA Respect: 2 Posts: 34 Join Date: Nov 2008	01-21-2009, 07:25 AM hey pretty nice could be better throw a lil more detail with your lettering and get better colors i be fukin up on my colors too...just my opinion i think the 3d effect, shadowing w/e any 1 wants to call it looks better going towards the bottom right but people got there own preferences


kdjiny Member Respect: 1 Posts: 104 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Clif	01-29-2009, 05:46 PM aitee thanks :] here are some other ones i did recently.


kdjiny Member Respect: 1 Posts: 104 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Clif	01-29-2009, 09:36 PM ahh haha this is one i just did now


Gone84 Sol Invictus Respect: 14.5 Posts: 2,390 Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Home Sweet Home(finally)	01-30-2009, 12:22 AM need more work on your letters. get back to the basics and dont worry about the effects and all that shit. your letters lack continuity. when you figure out how the letters are supposed to work, then the effects will make more sense to you and start to be easier
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kdjiny Member Respect: 1 Posts: 104 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Clif	01-30-2009, 12:30 AM kk thanks gone. so i need more better structure in the letters right?


Gone84 Sol Invictus Respect: 14.5 Posts: 2,390 Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Home Sweet Home(finally)	01-30-2009, 02:52 AM right. its all about the letters. consistency being one of the hardest things to learn. there needs to be a balance and structure to whatever it is you are doing. otherwise the eye isnt being led anywhere. direction, focal point, these things make up FLOW. flow is what makes a piece work as a whole.
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kdjiny Member Respect: 1 Posts: 104 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Clif	01-30-2009, 02:36 PM oh okay i got you, thanks! ill get working on that


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Elegal Member Respect: 1.5 Posts: 62 Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: NW Sydney	02-03-2009, 01:35 AM thx
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kdjiny Member Respect: 1 Posts: 104 Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Clif	02-03-2009, 05:00 PM dam, looks sicc! really like the coloring on it, hella tightt. what markers you use??