so i wrote this song over the summer regarding a girl <3. well, it's originally by Less Than Jake --great music, but i took the melody and wrote my own lyrics to it. i realized i happened to use a lot of the same rhymes and actually totally ripped one line off completely, but i couldn't find a way to reword it or say it better...
so oh well...XD
here's the original song
and here are my lyrics:
I couldn't sleep the last few days
Staring at the empty sky
I thought of you all day and night
And I... saw your face there in the clouds
With a smile, you looked at me
And for a second I could see
And I... All the times -I watched you go
It was the only thing I felt I could do
Every night -I'd lose all hope
I don't think I could ever tell you the truth
I'm gonna love you the rest of my life
A man without you is not really alive
A lot of times I feel
There's nothing else that's real
I'm gonna love you for the rest of my life
Remember way back when
We used to talk to each other
We're always laughing together
I'd do it all again
Everytime I think of you
I wish we could just start anew
Every night -I'd lose all hope
I don't think I could ever tell you the truth
I'm gonna love you the rest of my life
A man without you is not really alive
A lot of times I feel
There's nothing else that's real
I will remember you for the rest of my life
When I look into your eyes
There's something there I can't describe
I can still see your face -everywhere
It keeps me going on
And I wish we could be
It's like I'm missing part of my life
I want to be with you the rest of my life
A man without you is not really alive
A lot of times I feel
There's nothing else that's real
I'm gonna love you for the rest of my life
the whole plan was to sing this to the girl....but my voice sucks and i don't have the balls to do it anyway so =/. anyway...what do you guys think?
