[Mr. Flapps]

i always wanted to make a movie about terrorist attack and stuff and killler water guns

too bad my camera broke =[

[TheMichaelDude]

Dang that sucks. Our videos are random crap. Like RANDOM random crap...

[Mr. Flapps]

u mean like a guy gettin jumped after finding a penny in the third winter in spring

[Reflexx]

FAIL!!! that wuz stupid...

[Yokee Lazy Boy]

Originally Posted by TheMichaelDude

WARNING: If you don't like random things, bad movie making, or two guys that just want to have fun then don't watch and DON'T COMMENT. We're looking for advice not disrespectful comments.

Thats basically telling everybody to not post anything at all...

coz that shit was pretty damn stupid

...lol

[[Sikk]]

Bad acting. Actually, no acting. The quality of the audio was sorta bad. The premise of the video was also retarded. In a sense, your video sucked. I didn't laugh at all, or learn anything. Try to make it actually enjoyable to watch next time. Toodles.

[TheMichaelDude]

^ Haha did I say the video was SUPPOSED to have any of the above? No... I don't think so. My friend and I are just having fun. No need to hate us for that.

[Neuro]

C'mon guys, chill out. The reason why he posted this video just because he wanted to share with us and to seek opinions. We're all from the bboy community, do you think he wants to be a retard here? Nobody would, because he is treating us as a reliable members. Like family? (maybe not?) Afterall, this is their very first video.

I know some of you're trying to be straight forward to point out all the mistakes in order for him to improve, but you don't really need to go to the extend saying "OMG THAT SHITZ IS STUPID" or something like "HOLY COW YOU WASTED MY LIFE". Also, I'm not trying to be a pussy here. I'm just telling my thought.

And to MichaelDude, your video is kinda funny. Try to be more serious next time. I mean, when your leg was kicked by your mate, you can do more facial expression and then fall down as if your leg really broke and can't even support yourself to stand up. For the hand one, try to have the camera capturing your face also, and put up some expression. Like painful etc.

[TheMichaelDude]

Oh, I wasn't the one getting kicked. I'm the one in white haha. And thank you.

[Neuro]

Originally Posted by TheMichaelDude

Oh, I wasn't the one getting kicked. I'm the one in white haha. And thank you.

My bad then. =(

Your avatar cheated me. XD

[Bboy Phenom]

Lol, you guys sound like the people that comment on youtube videos..."waste of my life", "stupid", "not funny."

I was in the laughing mood, so it was funny to me, especially where he's just running at the camera towards the guy from across the street. Lol he's screaming in pain and then he just says OW in a surprised tone. The leg break was convincing. The arm break looked fake as hell. Like some people said, add some effects to it and it should make hollywood in no time. XD

Peace.

[Mr. Flapps]

Originally Posted by Neuro

I know some of you're trying to be straight forward to point out all the mistakes in order for him to improve, but you don't really need to go to the extend saying something like "HOLY COW YOU WASTED MY LIFE".

lol i said that

[[Sikk]]

Well if you're just doing it for yourself, don't ask for others' opinions. That's the way it is. My fault if I offended you, but I thought you needed advice.

[Escape]

More plot-wise: Follow Sikk's advice, try to make it funny yet random also put a story (somehow)
good example will be: Charlie's Unicorn

More technical: Try to get some cool camera angles, refer to some soap-opera or sitcoms but I prefer anime ones especially their opening songs,
how about some background music?
I think if you look hard enough there's some free video editing programs for effects or could get a free one.

I think that's all, Hope this helped.
btw, decent cam quality