[istolicee]

Championship Round Deadlines
-Verses must be dropped by MIDNIGHT (HI time) Sunday 07-06 (Monday 07-07 8pm for Ringer)
-Voting must be completed by whenever. ASAP would be preferred

JUDGES:
any of those who made it to ROUND 2
First to 5 or 3-0 KO

THE RULES
-This is strictly a DISS tournament.
-One on One text battle.
-One verse (8 BAR MAX) per contestant per battle. NO FLIPPING!!!

JUDGING
-Judges will be noted on each battle. If you battle you will be judging.
-Two Judges per battle, if resulting in a tie a randomly picked Judge will be the decider(or until Voyce comes back).

NO FREEPOSTING.

[RingerINC]

I spit at ya flash point, you catching flames from each words sound/
I coulda ended you like ya wife’s tourney, at the first round/
So you switch and reversed down, but now you set up and dying/
I’m like ya local pizza place, I serve the best fucking Hawaiians/
And you ain’t looking that good, so best luck if you tryin/
But you ain’t got the balls, like you tried breast fucking a lion/
And you fat man, I believe you eat heal-thy when I see hell freeze/
Check the brackets motherfucker, you’ve already taken the L B/
So with a track record like that, I fucking wouldn’t be boasting/
Ya wife barely ever use your account, but it’s always C posting/
And I’m the A grade, and you ain’t that good with rhymed jokes/
While whatever I wrote, blowing fucking minds like suicide notes/
You stupid, ain’t up with my lines must be reading sentences slow/
Verbs name got a lot of action, so he’s expected to blow/
Sound like a fucking Mexican Asian tryin to be down with this shit/
So you Beaner dog eater, the reason that you sound real bitch/ (been a dog eater)


I think most lines are self explanatory with basic knowledge about Verb and cee and if you've listened to a few of his audios.

[VerbTech]

ok

I’ll beat this aborigine cuz im an emcee that could slay GOD/
the champion was already crowned after my battle with J ROC/
i spray shots at this gay cock, always down under with bruised knees/
named Bleach to remove the stains from the taint that you leave/
ironically Steve, my punches penetrate your chest like a sting ray/
just to kill ya mate, I’ll bomb your country, im starting from Brisbane/
niques gets insane, pillage and burn villages like rude Vikings/
can’t take this kid seriously when his country is ruled by Queens/
and if this was the Olympics this American is winning gold/
who am I kidding yo, it aint fair to team Verb against Mini Mode/
your pitiful rhymes the predictable kind, INCorporated wackness/
the fakest faggot, even your cultures stolen like that british accent/
yo its tragic since you’re a dead ringer to the meaning of hopeless/
you could try but Bleach will never conceal Niques tested dopeness/
my punches from both fists even has Sydney quite often shook/
just look how ringer is useless since Niques is already off the hook/

[Elbee]

Since nobody's voting first, I will.

RingerINC
Well, that opener.. did cee host a tourney? As far as I recall, I dont think so. Might look it up on it later but it would have been just okay if I got it. A few average lines like that breast fuck a lion one and the suicide notes one. The Hawaiian one was pretty dope and the C posting one coulda been worded better to magnify the effect. The expected to blow punch was not bad and the close was just mehh. Overall, an average drop from you. Coulda done better.

VerbTech
Pretty decent opener though it was more on the self promo tip. Practically ever bar was packed with an above average punch. Really liked that Steve Irwin reference. I dont feel like breaking down every punch so imma just skip the the end. The closer was rather hard hitting and was a good way to wrap it up.

The win goes to VerbTech for better punches overall whereas Ringer was coming off a little weak imho. Good finals though.

[SpellBound]

Ringer

I spit at ya flash point, you catching flames from each words sound/
I coulda ended you like ya wife’s tourney, at the first round/
^ Eh decent opener, but it wasn't really her tourney

So you switch and reversed down, but now you set up and dying/
I’m like ya local pizza place, I serve the best fucking Hawaiians/
^ Hahaha, loved this

And you ain’t looking that good, so best luck if you tryin/
But you ain’t got the balls, like you tried breast fucking a lion/
^ This was funny, good punch

And you fat man, I believe you eat heal-thy when I see hell freeze/
Check the brackets motherfucker, you’ve already taken the L B/
^ Not that great of a line

So with a track record like that, I fucking wouldn’t be boasting/
Ya wife barely ever use your account, but it’s always C posting/
^ Decent, but could've been reworded and would've been better

And I’m the A grade, and you ain’t that good with rhymed jokes/
While whatever I wrote, blowing fucking minds like suicide notes/
^ More of a promo line than a punch

You stupid, ain’t up with my lines must be reading sentences slow/
Verbs name got a lot of action, so he’s expected to blow/
^ Eh, decent, but kind of a played concept

Sound like a fucking Mexican Asian tryin to be down with this shit/
So you Beaner dog eater, the reason that you sound real bitch/ (been a dog
eater)
^ hahaha, I liked this a lot, good closer

Verb

I’ll beat this aborigine cuz im an emcee that could slay GOD/
the champion was already crowned after my battle with J ROC/
^ Not really a punch, more of a promo line

i spray shots at this gay cock, always down under with bruised knees/
named Bleach to remove the stains from the taint that you leave/
^ Eh, wasn't really feeling it, could've been worded better

ironically Steve, my punches penetrate your chest like a sting ray/
just to kill ya mate, I’ll bomb your country, im starting from Brisbane/
^ No real punch here, just two setup lines

niques gets insane, pillage and burn villages like rude Vikings/
can’t take this kid seriously when his country is ruled by Queens/
^ Don't really get it tbh

and if this was the Olympics this American is winning gold/
who am I kidding yo, it aint fair to team Verb against Mini Mode/
^ LOL, really liked that line

your pitiful rhymes the predictable kind, INCorporated wackness/
the fakest faggot, even your cultures stolen like that british accent/
^ Kind of missed here, wasn't feelin it

yo its tragic since you’re a dead ringer to the meaning of hopeless/
you could try but Bleach will never conceal Niques tested dopeness/
^ Decent punch

my punches from both fists even has Sydney quite often shook/
just look how ringer is useless since Niques is already off the hook/
^ It's a dope line, but it's not a punch more of a promo line

Vote goes to Ringer, felt he brought better lines. Good verses from both

[JRod]

Ringer

I spit at ya flash point, you catching flames from each words sound/
I coulda ended you like ya wife’s tourney, at the first round/
even though you said the wife tourney line, it was still a decent opener.

So you switch and reversed down, but now you set up and dying/
I’m like ya local pizza place, I serve the best fucking Hawaiians/
best part of your verse in my opinion. a really good punch.

And you ain’t looking that good, so best luck if you tryin/
But you ain’t got the balls, like you tried breast fucking a lion/
it was funny and well worded

And you fat man, I believe you eat heal-thy when I see hell freeze/
Check the brackets motherfucker, you’ve already taken the L B/
probably could have been worded better to make the message more clear

So with a track record like that, I fucking wouldn’t be boasting/
Ya wife barely ever use your account, but it’s always C posting/
not really that good of a punch. needs rewording

And I’m the A grade, and you ain’t that good with rhymed jokes/
While whatever I wrote, blowing fucking minds like suicide notes/
more of a promo than a punch. it was still a good punch. probably should have
been like the first bar of your verse, if any part of your verse

You stupid, ain’t up with my lines must be reading sentences slow/
Verbs name got a lot of action, so he’s expected to blow/
its alright . i like the first part of it better than the last.

Sound like a fucking Mexican Asian tryin to be down with this shit/
So you Beaner dog eater, the reason that you sound real bitch/ (been a dog
eater)
nice closer. funny and insulting at the same time


Verb

I’ll beat this aborigine cuz im an emcee that could slay GOD/
the champion was already crowned after my battle with J ROC/
no punch, a good promo line

i spray shots at this gay cock, always down under with bruised knees/
named Bleach to remove the stains from the taint that you leave/
not that good. needs rewording

ironically Steve, my punches penetrate your chest like a sting ray/
just to kill ya mate, I’ll bomb your country, im starting from Brisbane/
really good punch. playing on the australian factor.

niques gets insane, pillage and burn villages like rude Vikings/
can’t take this kid seriously when his country is ruled by Queens/
good ending punch, but the first line is sort of played out

and if this was the Olympics this American is winning gold/
who am I kidding yo, it aint fair to team Verb against Mini Mode/
funny stuff. that was the best bar in your verse in my opinion

your pitiful rhymes the predictable kind, INCorporated wackness/
the fakest faggot, even your cultures stolen like that british accent/
good solid bar, the punch line was decent.

yo its tragic since you’re a dead ringer to the meaning of hopeless/
you could try but Bleach will never conceal Niques tested dopeness/
wasnt really felling it, probably couldve been worded better

my punches from both fists even has Sydney quite often shook/
just look how ringer is useless since Niques is already off the hook/
a good promo, not really a punch

this was a tough one, you both came with it...........im gonna go with verb for having an all around better verse

[Khaled]

Ringer: Had a nice idea, punched alot at different places but when i read it it didn't flow as good as I hoped. I liked that hawaiin punchline nice way to start it out, got a lil weaker as you progressed. best 2 bars i liked were: "So you switch and reversed down, but now you set up and dying/
I’m like ya local pizza place, I serve the best fucking Hawaiians/
And you ain’t looking that good, so best luck if you tryin/
But you ain’t got the balls, like you tried breast fucking a lion/". wordplay wasn't too much. Just an normal drop by you.

Verb: Didn't really get the beggining two bars but you got better progressing. The flow was very good made the rap sound alot better. I loved these two bars:
"and if this was the Olympics this American is winning gold/
who am I kidding yo, it aint fair to team Verb against Mini Mode/
your pitiful rhymes the predictable kind, INCorporated wackness/
the fakest faggot, even your cultures stolen like that british accent/" Kinda hit him very hard with those. Then you fell off a bit towards the end but kept flowing. Weaker then other shit ive seen you do though.


My Vote: Verb for overall better structured and flow

[VicValSwift]

Ringer:

I liked your overall flow better than Verb's, some punches were on point, and had me really laughing like:

So you switch and reversed down, but now you set up and dying/
I’m like ya local pizza place, I serve the best fucking Hawaiians/

I think though, when I read the last line it didn't really flow too well with the line before it but it was still dope. Overall, it felt like you started off strong and sort of declined as you went. But then the last lines really made me laugh despite the odd flow, props haha.

Verb:

I liked your punches, IMHO they hit hard especially:

our pitiful rhymes the predictable kind, INCorporated wackness/
the fakest faggot, even your cultures stolen like that british accent/

That was dope haha. Some lines seemed iffy and a few on the self promo tip but the punches you had hit hard. Closing was nice and the Steve irwin line was dope haha, good personal imo.

Overall, vote goes to Verb for slightly better punches. Good battle y'all.

[61!/V9]

I spit at ya flash point, you catching flames from each words sound/
I coulda ended you like ya wife’s tourney, at the first round/

She hosted a tourney? Either way not that great a punch.


So you switch and reversed down, but now you set up and dying/
I’m like ya local pizza place, I serve the best fucking Hawaiians/

Pretty good punch.


And you ain’t looking that good, so best luck if you tryin/
But you ain’t got the balls, like you tried breast fucking a lion/

Eh...


And you fat man, I believe you eat heal-thy when I see hell freeze/
Check the brackets motherfucker, you’ve already taken the L B/

Good play on words. Makes for a nice punch.


So with a track record like that, I fucking wouldn’t be boasting/
Ya wife barely ever use your account, but it’s always C posting/

That was pretty stupid.


And I’m the A grade, and you ain’t that good with rhymed jokes/
While whatever I wrote, blowing fucking minds like suicide notes/

Pretty good, but it's a self promo instead of a diss.


You stupid, ain’t up with my lines must be reading sentences slow/
Verbs name got a lot of action, so he’s expected to blow/

Stupid.


Sound like a fucking Mexican Asian tryin to be down with this shit/
So you Beaner dog eater, the reason that you sound real bitch/ (been a dog eater)

Good play on words. Good way to close it.





I’ll beat this aborigine cuz im an emcee that could slay GOD/
the champion was already crowned after my battle with J ROC/

Self Promo, but still good.


i spray shots at this gay cock, always down under with bruised knees/
named Bleach to remove the stains from the taint that you leave/

Eh...


ironically Steve, my punches penetrate your chest like a sting ray/
just to kill ya mate, I’ll bomb your country, im starting from Brisbane/

Decent. Nothing special.


niques gets insane, pillage and burn villages like rude Vikings/
can’t take this kid seriously when his country is ruled by Queens/

Okay. Could've been better though.


and if this was the Olympics this American is winning gold/
who am I kidding yo, it aint fair to team Verb against Mini Mode/

hahahahah, favorite line of the whole fucking battle.


your pitiful rhymes the predictable kind, INCorporated wackness/
the fakest faggot, even your cultures stolen like that british accent/

Good punch.


yo its tragic since you’re a dead ringer to the meaning of hopeless/
you could try but Bleach will never conceal Niques tested dopeness/

Pretty good.


my punches from both fists even has Sydney quite often shook/
just look how ringer is useless since Niques is already off the hook/

Weak closer.



Overall, you both could've done better. Self promos were abundant in both verses but Ringer's were better. Word play and inners were great from both sides. Definately not the best I've seen from either of you, but not bad.

I'm gonna have to give it to RingerINC cuz his punches hit harder. He had the concept of the battle down better and delivered with more sting.

[FFWB]

Jmac's Voting Process.

Bar-by-bar

Ringer

I spit at ya flash point, you catching flames from each words sound/
I coulda ended you like ya wife’s tourney, at the first round/
I didn't know Cee was in this thing. Alright punch, but seemed like you just looked for a rhyme but was a good concept.

So you switch and reversed down, but now you set up and dying/
I’m like ya local pizza place, I serve the best fucking Hawaiians/
Haha, this one made me laugh, kind of hungry now that I read it. Good punch, alright set-up, and okay scheme.

And you ain’t looking that good, so best luck if you tryin/
But you ain’t got the balls, like you tried breast fucking a lion/
Good attempt, seemed irrelevant because the punch was in the first part of the last bar, but it hit okay and the wordplay was quotable.

And you fat man, I believe you eat heal-thy when I see hell freeze/
Check the brackets motherfucker, you’ve already taken the L B/
HAHA, nice play on words, good punch, solid scheme. This one was good.

So with a track record like that, I fucking wouldn’t be boasting/
Ya wife barely ever use your account, but it’s always C posting/
Nice rhyme scheme, alright punch, okay concept just didn't seem to hit too hard. Almost a filler. Like a filler-punch... yeah.

And I’m the A grade, and you ain’t that good with rhymed jokes/
While whatever I wrote, blowing fucking minds like suicide notes/
Self-promo, only hitting type thing was in the first bar. Mediocre at best.

You stupid, ain’t up with my lines must be reading sentences slow/
Verbs name got a lot of action, so he’s expected to blow/
Started with a punch again, but didn't end with much. Pretty good wordplay, but looked like you just added blow to rhyme with slow.

Sound like a fucking Mexican Asian tryin to be down with this shit/
So you Beaner dog eater, the reason that you sound real bitch/ (been a dog eater)
Lol. Funny closer. Saved his audios for last instead of throughout, which came hard. Good wordplay, punch, but you still could've gotten more out of it. Good line overall.

Verb

I’ll beat this aborigine cuz im an emcee that could slay GOD/
the champion was already crowned after my battle with J ROC/
Okay opening part. Ended first line with self-promo. Good concept, and it was a slant rhyme that worked as a multi. Okay opener.

i spray shots at this gay cock, always down under with bruised knees/
named Bleach to remove the stains from the taint that you leave/
Haha, pretty funny first line. Good punchline too.

ironically Steve, my punches penetrate your chest like a sting ray/
just to kill ya mate, I’ll bomb your country, im starting from Brisbane/
He's from Sydney... so the wordplay wasn't relevant. The first part was pretty fucking funny though. Good first line, but second line drowned it a bit when you analyze it. Kinda good punch.

niques gets insane, pillage and burn villages like rude Vikings/
can’t take this kid seriously when his country is ruled by Queens/
Going off on his fucking country haha, ish is coming hard too. Self-promo a little too much on the first line. But alright punch. Okay bar.

and if this was the Olympics this American is winning gold/
who am I kidding yo, it aint fair to team Verb against Mini Mode/
Wow... this was a killer line. Nice scheme, good wordplay, and good punch. Mini Mode.. I lol'd. HAHA.

your pitiful rhymes the predictable kind, INCorporated wackness/
the fakest faggot, even your cultures stolen like that british accent/
Wow.. hit hard again... coming hard in this one with the country jokes. Okay wordplay on his name, but scheme flowed and sounded great. Good bar.

yo its tragic since you’re a dead ringer to the meaning of hopeless/
you could try but Bleach will never conceal Niques tested dopeness/
Delving into the flow-cabulary I see... pretty good punch, good (repeated) wordplay, alright scheme. First line threw me off at first. Okay bar.

my punches from both fists even has Sydney quite often shook/
just look how ringer is useless since Niques is already off the hook/
Not really any punch that I see.. looks like a wordplay and maybe I'm just not understanding it.. but yeah.. mediocre closer.

Thought Process

Both openers were just alright. Seemed like y'all got your best out in the middle while disregarding the opening and closing. With Ringer coming harder at the end and beginning of his... I'd take his, but then Verb came with like 4 good bars with punches on his country and his name wordplay and shit. So here it is as a breakdown, because with my thought process it was a tie... so I had to see what both came with and do what's up.

Breakdown

Ringer

Opener - Okay, good concept.

Notable bars - 2, 3, 4,

Closer - Good, lol'd status, with good wordplay, acceptable flow, and a good scheme.


Verb

Opener - Just alright. Good concept, more self-promo than anything though.

Notable Bars - 2, 3, 5, 6

Closer - Mediocre. Not much sense to be made of it, alright scheme and wordplay, but didn't see the punch. Wasn't clear enough I suppose.

Final Verdict

So Ringer, with the opener and closer beating Verb's overall came with 5 good bars out of 8.

And Verb, with the 4 lol bars, surpassing his notable bars, came with 4 good bars out of 8.

Ringer had about every other bar making me laugh or snicker or think," Hey that was pretty good."

Verb had me cracking up in the middle but it started slow and ended with not much bang.

So for an overall effort. Through reading two verses, breaking bar-by-bar down, my thought process, further breakdown, and laying out what I was thinking throughout both's verses. I have to say if I were to read it as one battle verse it would go to Ringer. If I could take the 4 best bars, Verb would have it hands down, but it is the whole 8 bars that counts.. so I'm going with the best overall. It goes to Ringer for keeping me into his verse throughout and strategically placing, or not... good bars within okay bars. Both came hard. Good battle, was real enjoyable to read.

[VerbTech]

two votes at the most.........zak, mode, dobb, enkore? wanna drop a quick vote

just need some educated votes, no breakdown necessary..........i think the previous voters done that already........thanks

[xRambox]

Ringer - Pretty good flow, I dont think I was completly blown away, but it worked. I think it would have made more sense if I knew more about this Verb dude, but I still thought it was pretty good.. Fave Bars were - 3 and 7

Verb - I liked the punches better here, like I said before, I'm not taking anything away from RInger, but I didn't get the personals that he was spittin. Overall I think you had a good flow, a couple bars I wasn't really feelin.
Also, I know alot of people are talkin about alot of "self-promo" lines, but on the real, when you're battling someone you dont know and there's no flipping, I think the "self-promo" lines are the best, not to mention freestyle, off the top is hard to really get at someone unless they're standin in front of you....with that said...

I'm gonna have to go with VerbTech for better overall flow and punches

[Anaktix]

ringer:

flow was aight, some decent wordplay, decent punches.......nuttin really blew me away tho.....headed into this battle in my mind i thought you'd take it but the verse just left suttin to be desired, didn't really hit hard, kept waitin for a big punch but never really got one.....


verb:

verse was decent, first 3 lines were good set up, was expectin the 4th to hit hard but the taint that you leave joint aint really hit........there were some decent lines throughout, the mini mode line i thought was the best in this battle.....quickly wanted to say i wasnt feeling how you colored those words red, detracted from your verse.......but overall a decent effort, i've seen you come harder but it was aight.....


well to be honest comparin this to the old text tourneys we used to have, both these verses woulda been smoked in like round 2 or suttin, thought it was a good matchup but neither of yall brought it as hard as i was expectin.......either way, it is what it is 'n i thought verb brought it harder.....

hahaha well lookin thru and tallyin votes looks like verb already had 5 without my vote haha........

DOTY 2008 winner is VerbTech! hollerrrr........

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