[istolicee]

ROUND 1 DEADLINES:
-Verses must be dropped by MIDNIGHT (HI time) FRIDAY 05-23.
-Voting must be completed by MIDNIGHT (HI time) SUNDAY 05-25

JUDGES:
JRod
Spellbound

THE RULES
-This is strictly a DISS tournament.
-One on One text battle.
-One verse (8 BAR MAX) per contestant per battle. NO FLIPPING!!!
-Strict deadlines for every battle. If you don't make the deadline it's an automatic DQ.
-Single elimination.

JUDGING
-Judges will be noted on each battle. If you battle you will be judging.
-Two Judges per battle, if resulting in a tie a randomly picked Judge will be the decider(or until Voyce comes back).
-You've got 2 chances... If you are noted as a judge and DO NOT post your vote by deadline you will 1) get a warning, 2) be DQ'ed from the rest of the competition.

NO FREEPOSTING. TAKE YOUR QUESTIONS AND COMMENTS TO THE OFFICIAL DOTY THREAD. MAKE IT A HABIT AND YOU'RE OUT OF THE COMP.

[RingerINC]

Check his profile before you read this verse… as it was mostly based on what I found there…

When I'm smackin' this dude, I ain't Jabbin' the cool/
I'm playing wack-a-mole, and just fuckin bashing a fool/
Wanna gangsta rap? Get outta that hum-drum life/
Boarding a plane’s the only time you let them dum dums fly/
Watch this dumb cunt fry, and get blown out full of scars/
Rip the flesh off ya right arm and show how “cool” you are/
Jab ain’t famous, but been known to suck and fuck dick/
Load up the shotgun and get hella fucking buck kid*/
Couldn’t spit lines with a wire through two cheeks/
Don’t need to leave for a fortnight** to prove you too weak/ (two week)
I'm hard as fuck, so you can just stop trying/
Write how you gonna beat me and get caught lying/
You small time, I could drown this kid in my breakfast/
Didn't get the PM so now you get my message/
And it’s hella sincere, ending with this plaque quote/
“Letting ya CD’s slip, only time you drop a fiasco”/

*His profile says he can krump
**He hasn’t shown up for like 2 weeks after signing up

[Koop]

A look here this dude wanna act tough then show me what you got
cause you bout to get crushed n dissapear like the tetris blocks
spittin like you tough boy you fold up from the stress huh
this boy remind me of the crips bustin from blood pressure
my flow hot like a fever so when I spit you get a seizure
a yall this kid wack he need to get shot like the tequila
im just playin wit you cause if you think you can beat me hell no
this boy here gay he get touch by boys like tickle me elmo
i don't know why he got in his head that he can beat the MAN KOOP
guess ima have ta wash those thoughts out his head like i spit SHAMPOO
dude here gotta BROKE BACK mountain he got no SPINE so this dude
he stay bent over so gay dudes stay up in his ass like the charmin tissue
yea they call me koop but some people know me as the SHOWSTOPPER
you cocaroach rapper tryna act hard so I call my bars are ROACH STOMPERS
see didnt i tell yo ass when you battle me you better come prepared
grab a extra oxygen tank cause when i drop my verse you gon be like chris brown lookin fa air

just havin a lil fun sorry that it didnt come out straight foward had to rush so i wouldn't be elminated

[SpellBound]

Ringer
Alright opener, could've been better, wasn't that hard hitting. Second bar was amusing, wasn't really feeling the setup, but the punch was decent. Punches are startin to get more of a "what I'm gonna do to you" feel, rather than disses. Krump punch was decent, and the fortnight punch was pretty dope. Caught lying was an alright punch, more self promo than diss though, closer was alright as well. I've seen better drops from you, just need to focus more on a diss, than what you're gonna do to him.

Koop
Opener was cool, but the follow up bar I wasn't feeling, wasn't really a punch. Tequila punch was rather played, and not even that great of a delivery on it. The gay punches are all mad played, fair few are fresh. The shampoo line was nice, but the charmin line, and roach stompers weren't that good. Closer was stretched as hell, and not that good of a delivery on it.

Vote goes to Ringer, both had their strong and weak points, felt Ringer was a bit more creative.

[JRod]

Ringer
nice simple flow. good punches and i liked the way you clowned on him about his profile. liked your opener but your closer could have been better. like the fortnite line it was pretty clever vocab. some punch lines were sort of weak.

koop
open was decent. but the next rhyme had me saying why? flow was alright but choppy at times. even the gay punches are played out i thought yours were pretty creative.your last punch line would have been tight if you would have shortened down the last line.

vote: ringer