[istolicee]

ROUND 1 DEADLINES:
-Verses must be dropped by MIDNIGHT (HI time) FRIDAY 05-23.
-Voting must be completed by MIDNIGHT (HI time) SUNDAY 05-25

JUDGES:
Zodiak Stizo
RingerINC

THE RULES
-This is strictly a DISS tournament.
-One on One text battle.
-One verse (8 BAR MAX) per contestant per battle. NO FLIPPING!!!
-Strict deadlines for every battle. If you don't make the deadline it's an automatic DQ.
-Single elimination.

JUDGING
-Judges will be noted on each battle. If you battle you will be judging.
-Two Judges per battle, if resulting in a tie a randomly picked Judge will be the decider(or until Voyce comes back).
-You've got 2 chances... If you are noted as a judge and DO NOT post your vote by deadline you will 1) get a warning, 2) be DQ'ed from the rest of the competition.

NO FREEPOSTING. TAKE YOUR QUESTIONS AND COMMENTS TO THE OFFICIAL DOTY THREAD. MAKE IT A HABIT AND YOU'RE OUT OF THE COMP.

[SpellBound]

This cat's terrible man, right now I'm prepared to cook rappers
McDonald's does one thing right, makes people look phatter!*
Quit this forum soon, please, cuz this chump's best is boring
Against a retarded J Mac, but he doesn't get a success story**
You claim to be from Killer City, but you'll never brandish the heat
And congrats on your new rap name: Fake Faggots With Beats
No one will remember you EVER, we'll fast be forgettin this herb
Verb set this up March Madness style, the best against the worst
Saw that pic of you and your sis, and she hates you droppin rhymes
Cuz one listen to that wack flow of yours, and even she wants to die

*His name is Jordan Macdonald
**An abbreviation for the name is J Mac.
It was also Jason McElwain's nickname, a mentally challenged student who got airplay on ESPN for scoring twenty points in less than three minutes

[FFWB]

SpellBound is a chump and he's about to get clowned
Dude got dumped because his sexual taste was found
I can't even begin to imagine his shame," Oh no my parents can't find out"
Likes dick and don't know who's to blame, while he takes it n screams loud
His game's always the same," don't worry about fame, worry about skills"
Well who can he maim, when he can't even smell fame let alone some bills
Skills, ha, he can't touch what I'm packin', shit
Couldn't imagine it if I took it and smacked da bitch
I'm rappin' shit, but it's THE SHIT and not what he's cleaning up
Him rappin? quit, dude can't spit, except on the dick he's cleaning up
I'm sorry if y'all are thinkin' I'm going a little bit overboard
But I'm not getting gored with a dick, shakin' the head boards

[RingerINC]

Oooooooooh i get to voooooooooooooote.

Spelllllllllllbooouuuuuuuund.

You went at it decypher style again, which works quite well. Most were very set em up and knock em down lines with a semi irrelevant setup, but those setup lines were usually promo or diss and not just random filler, so that's cool. The whole verse was just punch punch punch, very consistent. nameplay on ffwb was mad funny, nothing really stood out as an "omfg that line alone won the battle" kinda line. Also could use a bit more double entendre style wordplay rather than the simple kinda ones you got going on here in the next round.

Anyways, twas a good verse.

FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFWB!

first four lines for a gay joke, not the best idea... Ummm the coherency accross there was good, but the actual punchyness and wittyness of it was non-existant. Lost the syllable count throughout it, which is a no-no. Pretty much verse was entirely filler and gay jokes. Try to get more creative with it and get more personal. Don't worry about offending him or anything lol, look up shit about him and use that to insult him. You got the whole diss approach more than some newer people here, but it still has alot of room to develop, so keep at the dissing to work it out.

Anyway vote goes to spellbound

[Elbee]

On the request by cee, since zodiak's MIA, I'll be the one submitting the second vote.

Spellbound
Your usual stuff here. Set up, punch, set up, punch. Nothing unexpected here. Plays on his name were well worded and executed perfectly. Overall, average for your standard.

FFWB
I can see you are starting to get the idea on how to construct battle verses. Unless its a creative one, gay punches are played out and non-effective. Besides, you rhymed cleaning out twice, which is basically unacceptable in a battle. A very weak verse indeed but still in improvement nonetheless.

Well, Spell, you definitely coulda done better but what you did was enough to secure you the victory. FFWB, work harder.

Spell gmv