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Newb Thread - 12-05-2002, 11:12 AM

this is for all u newbies.....if u never rapped beforeor battle post here an battle ppl or jus drop a line wit pll equal to ur ability...don start new threads jus drop here...il be deletin ne bullshit form newbies form now on soplease don make extrawork for me an do it up in herre...thanx alot an goodluck wit ur rymes...peace
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Lookin' for respect.... - 12-05-2002, 02:57 PM

Trying to show Philly of what See-Dee can be/
So heres my Philosophy/
If i do my geometry at the right degree, may be Philly 2D will have sum respect for me/
being a newbie, hopefully you can see i'm doing the best that i can/
cause i don't have any calibers in hand/
i'm not trying to make enemys/
but if i have to, i'll find some artillary/
y'all need to at least read my rhyming please/
cause learning is the key to victory/
i will stand tall, and i will fight till the day that i fall/
with such high expectations, the sensation of tempatation is hard to fulfill/
dude you have the skill, i wish i could pop in a philly-extacy pill/
so i ask if i can chill, and post at my own will/
i just want to end, askin' can we just be friends
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12-05-2002, 03:12 PM

its on now me and see dee on a tag team/
no matter what the topic is or the theme/
you vets got something against us, or so it seems/
walkin around tryin to crush newbie dreams/
I say we all squash this shit and band together/
show the whole world that its hip hop forever/
I may be a newbie but my rhymes still cleaver/
Me and my crew just want respect/
I'll battle anybody if thats what I'll get/
If I lose I'll learn a more valuble lesson/
so all you vets should stop stressin/
I'm sorry if my posts are floodin your board/
but if yo say Im not good enough I'll pull the cord/
say bye to hip hop, SUB-Z3RO no more..........
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hey iz this good? - 12-05-2002, 03:58 PM

Yo homie ima newbie too but im just lookin to flow it through/
with a capabale style/ everyone sez its good in deniale/
but thats o-k i read the bible to stay tribal n liable for the cowerdly acts that blast from the past which one those guyz gunna hit u in da ass/ with the verbal assasin type legislative rhymes/ that they only think of at one time/of they day/ yo /
i chill at the bay/ yo/ i dun even want fuk wit dat shit dat u blow/
in ya nose it makes u outta control with that boldly move that u just stole/ from me it was gold/ it was you who pulled it outta my hand/then u sed ur name was dan/ i thought it was koo cuz i hadda plan/to bash this foo up with this knife that was banned/
outta that state/while u find u mate on date wit somone else u can relate to me or my lyrics they just be comin outta my spirit/
so lemme hear it give it up for delta-9 from cultivated mindz
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12-05-2002, 04:06 PM

yo fuk mainstream its a fukin head beam those mutha fakes on the radio are obsence but some are tight while otherz r white like eminem hes wack he couldnt even talk or act black if he had a chance/n ja rule yo i aint fukin wit dat foo hes music suckz but doesnt mean i gotta duck for for a bullet that he shot/on the spot while cash moneyz runnin throwin there gay ass jewelry at his cuzin "lil wayne" yo that foo aint got no game on da mic hes a lil mitochrondridik that likes it with a spike n yo snoopz koo but he stop smokin cuz he aint no foo/ he wants to live life happly with a family n fine wife see/
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Delta9 - 12-05-2002, 04:30 PM

got a question, what makes you think eminem is wack.... if you knew anything bout emceein' than you'd fuckin realize he's definetly one of tha best right now....... seriously kid, you think cuz he's white or apparently is tryin to "act black" that he can't rap...... you got a lot to learn.... fine if you don't like him, but learn somethin about emceeing before you go callin him wack..... i just can't beleive you could come on here n' be so blatanly racist... man you got a lot to learn...




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nice - 12-05-2002, 05:22 PM

arrite I'm glad Blaze set the newbie form up...u bois keep showin me what u got....sorry for being one hella of a bitch yesterday....was pretty cranky and pissed so dont mind my attitude ne ways keep on rhymin show some improvment....but I am seein more into it...it's all good bois
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Re: nice - 12-05-2002, 06:34 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Philli_2_D_Caliber
sorry for being one hella of a bitch yesterday
time of month? lol just playin with ya

Big boss blaze gave me a chance
so imma give it a good long glance
pose up and ready my stance
start up my flow and have u hooked in a trance
this isn't some cheesy shit it ain't a flick about romance
this is true stuff i'm looking to enhance
right now i'm a stupid young newbie hunting to advance
i'll try to shoot up the ranks
show everyone what i'm made of
i'm gonna fill this fourm with brotherly love
helping out to solve crazy issue
looks like your crying, heres a tissue
dont get all sentimental cuz all my flows are detrimental
i'll knock down these people so fast the death rate will be monumental
btw, philli looks like he just went all out temperametal
but thats ok cuz it just might be accidental

peace.. lol, btw i'm not hatin on your philli just makin some jokes.. hope its all good lol
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12-05-2002, 06:42 PM

Tell me wot u think 2d

Im here to spit my propostuos rymeS/Spit ma super shit just one more time/
So im a newbie who idolises this game/though i kno yall will fell just the same/
I will rap eternally till i lose ma vocal chords/Become one of the greatest freestylin lords/
Coz i spit for enjoyment and thegratification of it/youll remember me for the lyrics ill of rit/
See i just open my mouth and it all comes out/I will be the warrior, there is no doubt/
Ill stroll through the blinding and terrifying light/just to get you in my sight/you up for a fight/
Abattle wit you and you think your it/Youll need a paramedic after you heard ma shit
I want all yall to listen to me on the mic/To my unsurrpassable shit, is it alright?/
So you may annilate my asre but i dont care/Ill come back and make you pull out your hair/
Im tired now im gonne go to bed/after ma bitch has given me some superb head/yes thats wot i said

2D JUST TELL ME IF YOU THINK IM OK AND TELL ME WEN I CAN CUM OFF THE NEWBIES PAGE
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Thumbs up aight. - 12-05-2002, 06:44 PM

im happier wiht this set up now..neb's do ya thing in here and repp till yall are good enough to actually organize ya shit right on here.. us "Veterans" will be in here periodically to help you guys out, answer questions or even drop a rhyme wit yall.. maybe ill say to both sides that it was a missunderstanding.. i dont really have probs with new'bs doin they thing, shit i was newb once, we, I disagreed with how yall did it.. constant threads poppin up of the same shit ( im a newb help kinda thing) was one prob, another was cats in here disrespecting our art by comin in here makin lame attempts at bullshit and acting like they dont care.. cats who are really tryin ot learn in here and rhyme i respect them, and most of those cats i let them know... the ones i dont respect and mock rap should leave straight up this place is for mc's, real mc's one and all... you cats do ya thing well be watching


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Inspire - 12-05-2002, 07:27 PM

Team of the century don't be the one to waste it
Lookin at each other how could we ever be racist
But I guess that's the times
That's how it is and gonna be
I set my vizionz and wrote a script
One man can't part the sea
But I'll do my share stay strong with words of force
Shout it loud from mountain tops where racists can't retort
Disrespectin over color
Damn how could it be this
I look deep in people's souls to find joy and happiness
Don't judge me by my skin
Although others have taken wrong paths
Judge me by my actions
Cause positivity has been my life's class
So if you're thinkin my blacks, my whites, my tans we done it
Remember we're a group and togehter we should confront it




I start to think, and then I sink
Into the paper, like I was ink
When I'm writing I'm trapped inbetween the lines
I escape, when I finish the rhyme
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I'm feelin mrtical32 - 12-05-2002, 08:26 PM

This freestyle's dedicated to all racists everywhere....




Confront it? definately/
I believe that racism is bullshit, but that's just me/
You see I know some truth and you should to/
Frontin on other races like they ya rival crew?/
C'mon dude, watcha doin with ya life? Makin bad decisions/
Fuckin this life you livin/
I got a mind I'm given/
And it's my decision, I wanna spread my words/
Freedom's an eagle, we gotta let go a this bird/
Use words and educate yourself/
You a racist? Learn the truth and leave that shit on the shelf/
Problems with mental health must be your reason/
I know more than you and I'm just startin my second season/
My bad decision's ceasin/
They simply stop and quit/
Movin back to racists, I wanna hear a legitimate/
Reason you have to hate millions of people/
You never met 'em, you must be infected with evil/
And you need to, just open your eyes/
Realize that some of the greatest people are disguised/
Under a skin color you don't recognize/
But I, I do/
RACISM NEEDS TO STOP, take a hard look, cuz YOU DO TO.



**Sorry I get a little heated when I'm thinkin about this stuff.

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12-05-2002, 09:16 PM

n-e body up for a tag team battle with me and see dee?
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12-05-2002, 10:10 PM

if i can get a partner i might, depends, yall think i am up to yall's level?
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to vraa - 12-05-2002, 10:38 PM

I'll be your partner and fuck it if you dont think your up to there level just try, its all you can do cuz if you a newb what else can you do to improve but spit what ya 9ot and take the criticism in for your on use to advance. cuz we all want to enhance and not lose when were in our fihtin stance, so ya otta take chances use em to your advanta9e. until there really is no challe9ne. Cuz even when i battle i'm mainly battlin myself more then my opponent cuz i always want my next shit to be better i always want to improve. So fuck what level you at lets battle these cats.
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