Im tryna find an mc/
who can battle me/
with a dope rhyme/
that sounds like it is free/
and not a pre written/
that all these fools be spitten/
if they could stop look and listen/
then they would know i go the vision/
of excellence, so please keep your rhyme short/
dont wana be here all night/
just to read your rap retourt.
Peace!
1st off what kinda name is diamond?? And you callin me kid? yo that shit is funny fool , on the matt im gona skid round you wit a style that bin here a long while i joined in 05 and im still here yeh wit a smile!!
You tryna tell me i aint got "it" when you aint said shit, all you do is make a weak joke that puts me in a fit of laughter and thats and you and def not your comment, bet you think you real kool but brother yo im violent.
lmfao.. Menace.. you a kid with no "spunk".. you talk shit on the net.. and no one gives a flying fuck about you or your piece of shit frresyles.. i dont know if you think they all pro star n shit.. but reality check boy.. they aint.. you startin off like i did.. cept i was a little more extreme with it.. so my advice to you is shut the fuck up and just spit your raps.. read some of the guides.. they really help.. and learn to fit ya bars to flow good...
Im tryna find an mc/
who can battle me/
thats straight shit man.. nursury rhymes.. like mother goose..
try something like this kid
yo lets go, ya gettin taught by the realest kid from espo
just helpin ya out, ya know, hoppin it helps n you find flow bro
Come At Me Bitches, I'm Back, This Time With An A Game
Now im spitten with a stlye, kinda like a terrorist/
with the lyrics im an analist, puttin out words yo like an activist/
and i know im brand new and i cant get close to you/
so ima practice that is true, to hand you the tissue/
because once i mastererd this, i'll be bliss yo with the diss/
so ima rise from the abyss to co-exist and reminisce?
about the day when first sarted, got shot down and departed/
but now i battle mc's with a style yo that's uncharted!
menace - welcome to the forums, but this is not the way we do things here. please use the battle box for callouts and battles. you dont just drop a verse and expect people to battle you off the bat. and constructive criticism dude... practice a little more because your rhyme is very elementary/nursery school shit. pretty much what bizzy said but in nicer words.
Once while walking through the mall a guy came up to me and said "Hey, hows it going?". So I grabbed his arm and twisted it up behind his head and said "Now whose asking the questions?"
