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Performing "in the zone" live (video) - 05-09-2007, 11:40 PM

Here's one of my songs from a recent show i performed here at school in elon NC



check it out and let me know what yall think




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05-10-2007, 12:26 PM

was the performance FOC?


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05-10-2007, 03:37 PM

where is the video?


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05-10-2007, 04:06 PM

I got 2 tips for the guy behind the keyboard...
1. Having 2 voices speak/sing/rap different text IS NEVER GOOD
2. Stand still
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05-10-2007, 05:08 PM

this is straight, but tell your homie to calm down haha, I mean i like his energy but he's taking all the focus off you and makes it look too goofy.
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05-10-2007, 06:27 PM

Quote:
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was the performance FOC?
huh?

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Originally Posted by B-boy Jp
I got 2 tips for the guy behind the keyboard...
1. Having 2 voices speak/sing/rap different text IS NEVER GOOD
2. Stand still
hehe.
Thanks for the feedback. now i dont think he ever really said different lines on back ups, unless maybe he said the wrong thing or somehting, idk haha. And personally i think people that stand in one spot and dont move around when they rap usually dont have much energy and its hard to vibe on their ish, na mean?

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this is straight, but tell your homie to calm down haha, I mean i like his energy but he's taking all the focus off you and makes it look too goofy.
thanks i'll let him know haha
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05-19-2007, 01:48 PM

Tyeah man this shit is hella sick, but ya hommie needs to simmer a lil bit, he takes a lot of the attention off you, sick performance though hommie. I could neva do that. lol.
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05-20-2007, 12:26 PM

Ya did ya thang man. You got good stage presence, spittin' with mad confidence. And even though ya hype man was a little on the goofy skeleton side, I give it up to him for still having that energy. You could look dumb as shit, but if you feeling the music who the fuck cares what others think about you. It's all love. Peace.




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05-25-2007, 07:20 PM

good performance man... good presence


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06-07-2007, 11:03 AM

lol... sorry, but i can't stop laughin at ya homie on the keyboard... i dont wanna sound like a dick, but he looks dumb as fuck... ur performance was straight for the most part.. only thing was it looked like u were lookin down a lot.. i dunno, maybe u weren't but it seemed that way on the video... if u were, then u gotta keep ur eyes more focused on the crowd or the direction u spittin in...

oh... and its better to have the hook playin with the beat when u perform, especially if the hook overlays with ur verse at all... but its not like this was a big show or nuthin so it didnt really matter...

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