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Bizzare_101
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Biz vs RingerINC - 04-10-2007, 08:52 AM

1 Verse
Any Length
No Due Date n Make Sure Ya Post lol
3-0 ko or 1st to 5 Votes


you pick the topic
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04-10-2007, 11:52 AM

Same as that other one i never wrote...

You're a vampire that woke up from that sleep thing that they all do for some reason. You wake up in the modern day city of your choice, what do you do and what do you see?

Now let's hope history doesn't repeat itself.

And hooray for topical warm up rounds.




"I'm burning the vermin with terms discerning my learning..."


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04-17-2007, 12:37 PM

Wow spook, get keen. Anyways, it was kinda long... but i like it.

A word to the wise, what lies is now truly awake/
The sound of death echoes with the end of its break/

Granite lid slides, a pit of demise contained on the inside/
Bones wrapped with no soul, just a death made hide/
Eyes intense, feeling of joy in only the past tense/
A cloaked hand rises, body focused on every sense/
Movement without steps, body without a form/
The spirit from the past, in a way, reborn/

The shadowed streets hold life from this savage leech/
Every angle, a tangle of lights, broken by a sudden screech/
The alleyway, the exit, was the home of an assault/
A crime which he held to his heart, his final result/
Stalking, not walking. With an aura that should be forgotten/
Bones of rotten, like a horse of the apocalypse trotting/
His shadow was cast upon the kid and spread over/
The knife he was holdin fell to the floor, but moreover/
Total fear gripped him, followed by hands of its owner/
The kid let go of her, blood stains now shown to her/
A sense of fear and relief, conflicted by the gore/
Corpse fell to the floor, blood drained to the core/
The murdering dead approached, the same as before/
Impossible to ignore, bloodlust for even more/
He stepped chest to chest, head straight to the neck/
Bloodlines severed, bite more than just a peck/
To be correct, it was a mortal wound delivered/
Blood like a drug, he couldn’t help but shiver/

The alley he left was left with two to its tally/
The road that he met was in the centre of Cali/
It was well into the night, but light was still shining/
Like a coincidence, what was odd was the timing/
But the city lights of bright night were frightful/
Darkness was his friend and this scene was spiteful/
So he began his walk, that he’d taken years ago/
Time changed so much, but he knew the way to go/
He walked on roads, like his heart, forever black/
And cursed the fact that life he could never lack/
He wanted death and the blackness to overwhelm/
This place was not enough, he needed another realm/
“Oh well” he thought “You play the hand you’re dealt”/
And he arrived at the spot, a place so heartfelt/
It was his own grave, next to that of his late wife/
He’d give everything to give her another chance at life/
He despised the way that the world did work/
How he walked the earth and she fed the dirt/
He swore to himself he’d bring meaning through strife/
And give fear to the people with this cursed afterlife/

The night was so young and his time was plenty/
So he said to the world “I’m coming, get ready”/

Ahhh... I'm scared of my own story...
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05-28-2007, 02:27 PM

i do not know what the fuck to write.. vampires are gay.. but i'll make something up sooner or later.. plus im brown so chill
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06-19-2007, 08:42 AM

ok whatever, i'm opening this up to whoever wants to post a verse... Biz seems to have gotten disinterested in this thing...
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07-17-2007, 09:20 AM

stale battle. closing thread




Once while walking through the mall a guy came up to me and said "Hey, hows it going?". So I grabbed his arm and twisted it up behind his head and said "Now whose asking the questions?"
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