[Mode]

deadline - 16th
one verse
10 bar max
first to 3 votes wins.

anyone drops first

[Subject]

Check it.

Helping ya die like Dr. Kevorkian by flooding ya brain with baby scorpions
Snap ya feet so you’ll never walk again while the stings remove endorphins
Lose pain absorption while I’m drilling your temples with spinning pencils
My grinning dentals taking chunks out of your neck like gripping tentacles
Filling your ventricles with corrodin fluids and drown you in floatin sewage
A screwdiver’s poking a screw-in to leave both eyeballs grossly skewered
Your closing viewin angle withers and dims as both arms dangle on slivers of skin
Start to mangle with wood splitter n pins to break ya ankles and splinter ya shins
Drizzle ya kin in acid from batterys and squirt maggots in every cavity
Stuff your shins remains in lavatory’s while scalpels attack mental capacity
I’m on an attackin spree, usin a bluntened axe to break your back with ease
Slit your windpipe to slacken your pleas then gorge you on two blackened knees
Till attachments cease, burnt away with laser’s rays to sign my favourite name
Savour the pain as I shave your arms till the bone’s displayed with a razorblade
Splay ya frame apart with a team of oxen while i flood your spleen with toxins
Use your parent’s ribcages as a dream coffin with nails to keep you locked-in
Feel blocked in as I carve bodily sockets into shocking mockeries of crockery
Blockin these is hopeless like winning lottery as I slot you in a plot to bleed
Rock ya teeth as jewellery cause your attempts to resist are fuelling me
I'll balance out the cruel deed, by serving you up to homeless as gruel n meat.

Sub..

[Reflexion]

Twist ya head around and drive a harpoon through ya chin
Get slicin' off ya skin then shoot arrows into ya shins
Nail in ya ligaments, tear ya colon hard out ya ass
Rip ya eyebrows off then rub ya face through shards of glass
Smash ya toes flat and knock out ya hips with a bulldozer
Flood ya intestines with bleach til ya 'stomach rolls over'
Strip ya family naked, drive a stake through their chests
Barbed wired tied over fire 'til their cavities depress
Stress ya joints by stretching ya with flaming ropes
Get ya torso torched then tear ya tongue outta ya throat
Load hot lead in ya skin when my machine guns zip up
Plop a grenade in ya mouth then staple ya lips up
Lop off ya head top while dogs mash in ya brains
See ya limbs flap while I'm fucking snapping ya veins
Inject cocaine in every membrane 'til ya body's leaning
Give anthrax so ya turn green while ya body's fiending
Scream when I tie ya to a burning cross by ya insides
Get ya larynx skulding when I pour bubbling cyanide
Laugh while ya in casts and rabid rats gnaw off ya penis
As ya heart freezes when I say ya parents' in ya intraveinus

[Reflexion]

bah, nice battle sub, votes

[Mode]

ahahaha, i'll die a happy man if i never read another VV... lets vote.

Subject - real tight, flow was on point through your whole verse, came with original concepts an some painful shit.. good imagery also. VV rating 9/10

Helping ya die like Dr. Kevorkian by flooding ya brain with baby scorpions
Snap ya feet so you’ll never walk again while the stings remove endorphins
Lose pain absorption while I’m drilling your temples with spinning pencils
My grinning dentals taking chunks out of your neck like gripping tentacles
Filling your ventricles with corrodin fluids and drown you in floatin sewage
A screwdiver’s poking a screw-in to leave both eyeballs grossly skewered tight opening

reflexion - nice flow also.. good imagery an originality.. violence remained consistent. VV rating 9/10

Scream when I tie ya to a burning cross by ya insides
Get ya larynx skulding when I pour bubbling cyanide
Laugh while ya in casts and rabid rats gnaw off ya penis
As ya heart freezes when I say ya parents' in ya intraveinus sick closer

was a real close battle both came with tight complexity an concepts.. it's like we're having the final in the semi's na'mean.. but my vote is gonna have to go to subject on account of his themes.. i've seen a couple of reflexions themes before (stapling lips etc)

my vote - Subject

[ll:A.N.G.E.L:ll]

blah Fuck Verbal Violence...

I used to like reading and doing this shit now im annoyed...

but whatever

Relfex ya came real strong with violence
although so did subject,
both of ya shit was graphic and and kinda made me afraid...
cause yall some nasty people...

but anynoe aftert readin over both of yalls
I get more of a image of the violence and the gore from Sub

close battle though

VOTE: Subject

[bboyarfen]

I liked this battle...

sub...dope flow and such and your violence was fuckin sick...

Filling your ventricles with corrodin fluids and drown you in floatin sewage
A screwdiver’s poking a screw-in to leave both eyeballs grossly skewered

Slit your windpipe to slacken your pleas then gorge you on two blackened knees
Till attachments cease, burnt away with laser’s rays to sign my favourite name
Savour the pain as I shave your arms till the bone’s displayed with a razorblade

reflexion...dope flow and nice violence...a little less graphic than sub but still sick

Smash ya toes flat and knock out ya hips with a bulldozer
Flood ya intestines with bleach til ya 'stomach rolls over'
Strip ya family naked, drive a stake through their chests
Barbed wired tied over fire 'til their cavities depress

Laugh while ya in casts and rabid rats gnaw off ya penis
As ya heart freezes when I say ya parents' in ya intraveinus

I vote Subject because of more graphic violence