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12-05-2003, 11:44 AM
2 verses....unlimited bars (no essays)
normal voting rules
you drop first or me?...don't matter....i'll check this later tonight
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12-08-2003, 07:00 AM
packin heat, all you pack is lil meat/
i guess you aint heard/
your lyrics aint got no beat/
your flows could never get you all da hos dat i got/
hell you tried to breakdance couldnt even bust out the robot/ ...so sit back and listen as i destroy ya by verbal division//
dismissing you for the simple fact that ya aint any competition..
-Il Spoken ( aka my emcee name)
Battle Record+ 0-2 (shouldnt brag huh)
Lost to: Mr Boogie.
Lunatice Lines
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12-08-2003, 04:52 PM
actually did this on two dif beats, remixed 24's by T.i. and a remixed mario brothers beat....
Is-He-Lucky? , zeke tried to-Duck-Me? ? A Witty- Rookie ?..Son You Didnt-Push-Me ...
I May Be A Little-Rusty But you Replied To The Rape Shouting, "big pappi,-f*ck-me!"
~local Legends Never Die, prob thinkin He Quoted-It-Himself ? Cuz He Couldnt Write Low Punches If He Wrote-Them-On-An-Elf!
....I Said No D/R's denying-him-Help Cuz he mighta Got Banned fa Voting-For-Himself!
.........i mean this offensively, This Isn't A Lost Christmas We Jus For Got-Ya-Presents (presence)
You're Not-In-tense , Which Sex Position Makes an ugly kid Just Ask zekes parents !!//
Rip-Ya-Cuts Seen Ya put dick-in-'mutts' Watch Out 'Dog' Cuz ima Clip-Ya-Nuts
Whip-Ya-Butt Then Split-Ya-Guts Silence! Like A Concerned -Virgin- I'll Cause Ya- Lips-To-Shut- !!//
Thrown Like Lil Childen On Santa Left U Elapsed(laps Or w/) Bust Ya Caps Like Midgets Ull Have "Pride On Ur Knees"
You walking away with a "victory" is as equal as being "healthy" suffering "leprosy"//
.......Attention!...zeke's A Chain Smoker That's Why Gays Always Be Linking-Him-To-Slob
Got Fired From His Security Guard Spot At The Sperm Bank Cuz He Was Caught !!//
Drinking-On-The-Job ..............
im Known To ‘Hit-Dense’ With ‘Spits-Tense’!-zeke ‘Travels Wit Hikers’ Just To Claim He Came ‘In-Tents’!!!
Give A ‘Hip-Check’ And ‘Split-Necks’!-Leavin you ‘Raped N Broke’! and your sense of style revoked’
‘Ponder-Computers’ And ‘Respond-Wit-Sutures’! Im ‘Friendly When I Win’! Guess I Aint ‘Fond-Wit-Loosers’!!!
I ‘Check Ya Quick’ Cuz My ‘Pawns-Are-Bruisers’! – But zeke's ‘Behind My Level’! So go back-to-the-future’?!!
your turn ...
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patiently waiting -
12-12-2003, 12:00 AM
Please spit zeke.
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12-12-2003, 10:12 AM
look at this kid, he's shook when he spits and he's pathetically waiting/
you stupid fuckin dick, it's cool if your gay, but you can't fuckin date me/
the only way you get sickness is if you contract it through me/
i know your homo, it's cool tho, you can be attracted to me/
it's understandable...but i'll damage ya, and handle ya deceased unseen pieces...
you could only throw-up hot shit if you consumed my fecies/
callin that a diss, sounded like a commercial for Vidal Sassoon/
i could come out with hotter shit, sitting in the fuckin bathroom/
pray all you want but this lord isn't Forgiving/
i'll point out one thing, your name seems fitting/
on the WestCoast ya lyvin, but on the the EastSide ya dyin...
reciting excitin hype typin, devastate ya wife and leave ya moms cryin/
aiming to beat me with those "leprosy" punchlines, kid you'll die tryin/
killed ya once, we'll meet again, son ya dyin in heaven/
leave ya family in a sadder state than NY after Nine-Eleven/
this Giants a Legend, crack backs and rippin out spinals...
you probly don't know, but in college, we got finals
.....my bad dude....got finals all this week and next.....i'll try to be quicker with my last verse but no promises
your up...
Last edited by Zeke1 : 12-18-2003 at 05:43 PM.
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12-18-2003, 05:47 PM
ummmm....i guess if this isn't hit up with another verse by this weekend then anyone can vote on these verse....cuz after friday i won't be back until after christmas....
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*edited my verse above just a minute ago to take out a space....not typos or word changes...just a space
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12-21-2003, 09:57 AM
westcoastlyvin - had to read it twice to get the grips with your flow, have nice wordplay an some funny/good punches in there but you tended to repeat your themes a little an some i didn't quite get. picked up after the first 'segment'. some multies seemed forced. flow was pretty good.
.........i mean this offensively, This Isn't A Lost Christmas We Jus For Got-Ya-Presents (presence)
You're Not-In-tense , Which Sex Position Makes an ugly kid Just Ask zekes parents !!//
You walking away with a "victory" is as equal as being "healthy" suffering "leprosy"//
Zeke1 - your getting alot better flow-wise, i like the way you bring funny/original concepts to battles. flow was good, some good punches/wordplay, again like lyvin, you repeated some concepts throughout your spit.
look at this kid, he's shook when he spits and he's pathetically waiting/
you stupid fuckin dick, it's cool if your gay, but you can't fuckin date me/
it's understandable...but i'll damage ya, and handle ya deceased unseen pieces...
you could only throw-up hot shit if you consumed my fecies/
overall my vote goes to Zeke1 on account of a smoother/harder drop.
peace.
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12-22-2003, 10:12 PM
Definitely needed more. Too bad you guys didn't finish it up with a second round......
WestCoast You definitley had some nice multis, but I thought your concentration on how it was typed took away from the flow of it. It was smooth in the beginning but started falling off toward the end.
Best disses:
You're Not-In-tense , Which Sex Position Makes an ugly kid Just Ask zekes parents !!//
Rip-Ya-Cuts Seen Ya put dick-in-'mutts' Watch Out 'Dog' Cuz ima Clip-Ya-Nuts
~local Legends Never Die, prob thinkin He Quoted-It-Himself ? Cuz He Couldnt Write Low Punches If He Wrote-Them-On-An-Elf!
Good disses, needed more personals and the flow was mediocre.
Zeke The flow was on point, not alotta personals. Good start, but the ending left me hanging.
it's understandable...but i'll damage ya, and handle ya deceased unseen pieces...
you could only throw-up hot shit if you consumed my fecies/<----nice diss
I thought this was pretty tight
callin that a diss, sounded like a commercial for Vidal Sassoon/
i could come out with hotter shit, sitting in the fuckin bathroom/
pray all you want but this lord isn't Forgiving/
i'll point out one thing, your name seems fitting/
on the WestCoast ya lyvin, but on the the EastSide ya dyin...
reciting excitin hype typin, devastate ya wife and leave ya moms cryin/
but you ran away with the dying line after that...kind of repetitive here:
aiming to beat me with those "leprosy" punchlines, kid you'll die tryin/
killed ya once, we'll meet again, son ya dyin in heaven/
Vote: Zeke on account of flow and concision.
I mean honestly, it really needed more on both ends.
One life one tribe one love one blood
Too much has been shed its time to rise above
You don’t have to understand it and you dont have to like it
But were much more powerful when we're UNITED
Ignorance fight it Knowledge embrace it
Have sympathy for people who too scared to change shit
Dont talk it just live it
Enjoy life absorb every minute
Quit placing the blame
Put your mind towards change
Hold the torch, light the flame, make a difference
One love one nation lets get uplifted
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12-23-2003, 10:02 AM
thanx aura....i totally agree....i wanted to drop another but i just had the feeling dude wouldn't be back for a while....and i was right....it's been a week since i posted my verse....thats good enough to get a DQ, but i didn't want to win like that....but thanx for the votes.....
2-0 me......one and done...or more....
VOTES!!
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12-24-2003, 04:01 AM
well.... Westcoast, man it's damn hard to follow ya verse.. ya flow was hella weird.. some shit didn't rhyme to well at all.. and i really didn't feel any punches you were throwin.. no personals, and really, i jus couldn't follow ya.. i dunno duke.. but that was kinda weak in my eyes..
Zeke.. flow was good.. not really any personals either, but ya opener was a nice flip on what he said.. and tho ya punches didn't stand out too much, they were alot better than your opponents... i definitely vibed to your verse alot more..
Votel: Zeke by a nautical mile..
peace.
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12-24-2003, 08:11 PM
zeke wins 3-0 KO
merry christmas..
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