[Subject]

Aight.. i know you know the deal here so i won't get too much into rules..

20 line limit
Either of us can post first, don't matter

peace..
subject

My vote - there are no battles to vote on! but i have voted in everything else..



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- edited below for formatting

[Subject]

Time to ignite this shit, check it..

First off I’ll use power drills to remove ya tooth's roots and siphon ya blood to mix with fruit juice
you see i'm so fucking ruthless i'll sever your spine just to deny your body movement
make sorry improvements as i flay your skin and slurp the strips to make beef jerky bits
grabbin hammer and chisel to sculpt bone chips into skillets to shred and fillet ya puny dick
I’m profusely sick so relaxing’s failed as I crush ya kneecaps to powder with exacting flails
Collecting blood with tampax-and-pails, I try to be different, cause most attacking’s stale
Anthrax-in-mail killing’s a crappy tale. so I can’t fail when I reveal pliars and extract ya nails
A cracking-wail escapes your throat you enter sweat as each finger’s quick is exposed and rendered next
Think the act is ended yet? I’ll expend that bet and drive slender splinters of wood into the tender flesh
Extend ya test by sewing shut ya anus, inside’s a hornets nest and searing it profanely with propane flamers
Cocaine to tame ya and sharpen ya pain binges.. open ya eyes and I stab them with pus-sy syringes
Breaking ya nose within a door’s rusty hinges by slamming it shut than follow thru with ya fucked fingers
Blood stuck so it lingers till death do us part I open ya chest cavity to put a stake thru ya heart
I’d take it apart but that kinda death would be fast and I’ve still got cravings to be making a start
I’m breaking this tart - ankles first than taking the soles off his feet I tutored satan as the scholar of heat
As a following treat I’ll I sever his throat with a pianowire collar and leash
and force him down a path of hot coals on the street
over punji holes and repeat till he’s crawling on the ground with two fuming poles of slashed meat
You understanding me speak? I educate death itself and kill clones of ya body to perfect my techniques
Make ya body a barely living set piece with a medical team on standby to prolong ya terrible dream
Fuck being sterile and clean I’m dead-vile and mean twisting poisoned arrows into ya set-on-fire spleen
You religious, fiend? - that light at the end of the tunnel you seen wasn’t god offering shelter it was me
smeltering your body down with an arc welding beam

sub.. bringing ya that "icky, sick and twisted shit"

*i might have gone over a line or two with the formatting of the html, Lyric... so its cool if you do the same

[XLyricX]

Nicely done....
my turn....


It's ill-scene, Dipped in Green acidic kerosine, Scorchin ya whole spleen,
Strangle Mean Teams, with red infared beams to torch this fiend,
Strappin C4 to a dildo and cram that fuckin shit up ya ass,
Watch ya feces blow through ya skull,
Strap a mask of Anthrax, then make you breath n gasp,
Put a leatherface to ya face to see ya brains leak out,
put ya right side up just ta see fluid leak out the mouth,
Im reachin right in through ya skin to rip rib bones,
cannon to ya dick to see ya balls set n blown,
Im at ya fingers, to pull ya nails right off,
I slicin throats to see ya blood spew as you fuckin cough,
Sticks n Stones may break ya bones, but my chainsaw will learn ya,
Words to this dude plus some poison glue, it pasted to fuckin burn ya,
Pike through this dyke, through ya cunt to get up in you,
That has rigged spikes; so to pull it back will fuckin gut you,
This slut to, tripple swords fin to dicce you,
With Seasons n Bits, serve you to dogs, its how im nice dude,
so to finish this off, dip ya in lava, then grab ya soul to choke,
and to tell everyone how ya battle went....
Just tell em you went up in Smoke...

[Subject]

Nice one bruvva.. votes please people..

[Awe-Dio]

ain't gonna drop a long ass vote.. don't think it's necessary... i think Sub took this pretty easy... he was more creative and his imagery was alot better than Angel's.... plus his shit flowed alot better too... nuttin much more to say.. Sub was nastier wit his shit...

vote: Sub

peace.

[razorbrain]

yoooo...subject damn that shit was long as hell! flow was alil off at times ..but very gorey and and graphic..but you did pat your self on the back a few times.. rmemeebr, in a VV it has nothing to do about you just your opponent..not complimenting ya self..but it was ok.. lyric - i wasnt feelin it too much the lines seemed kinda genereic and didnt really interest me.. the closer was decent though....


vote : subject...even though there were flaws, your verse was better... though may i suggest you put out less quantity and more dope shit in a shorter amount of lines..keep elevate

[Mode]

bboy.org's #1 voter is back in town..

yo i think ya'll know who won this but hey,

subject, loong but nice, flow fell off only a little at times, but was good for the most part, came real nice and vivid with your gory depictions.

angel you seemed a little rushed, had some good idea's in there though, flow was alright for the most part. i've noticed that this is your second vv in succesion, need i say that you should refrain from participating in too many battles at one time, it's what slowed you down last time.

overall my vote goes to Subject on account of more gore in his verse. and that's a V-V. good work angel, but i think you've met a worthy V-V opponent. keep elevating both of you guys.

peace.

[Subject]

Thanks for the votes guys. Razor, thanks for the good criticism, even negatives are positives! Now i know what i need to work on.. i was still figuring out the format for verbal violence, its kinda undefined. Cool battle Lyric..

[razorbrain]

subject wins by ko. closing thread