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MC [S]Lay Bull
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Infinite vs Zodiak Stylz -
10-22-2003, 05:31 PM
Zodiak Stlyz vs Infinite
2 verses
i dont have to say ne thing more cuz u kno ur shit na mean[like no bitin, time blah blah blah....that shit]
cool man, this should b goood
u drop first
roll the red mat....i am broke so i dont have a carpet, i have a mat 
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the beautiful struggle
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10-23-2003, 02:41 AM
aight, quick key..
This dunce trying hard for months with his flow, but still nobody feels though
Self proclaimed 'king of iron spits' when it's really 'sucking metal dildos'
I'll be real yo, your young ass spits like ya old and senile
Still lacking originality... even if your name has added 'stylez'*
Viciously vial: my skill to yours can only be equated in miles
But ya verses are about a tenth my level.. that's when I'm bustin out keystyles
He's always ridin' me bringing shit writs, but his audio drops are worse
Shit, If I mad a dissin track against him, he'd probably add a verse!
"Straight" up? This dyke's pretending, like movie endings, I'll make his screens turn black
Just like going through his battles taking out "momma", "faggot" and "wack"**
Crack ya brain and it's levers, ya battles always be taking forever ya cheat
Cuz soon as ya lines are dropped, ya instantly adding the 'week'***
'Served' u enough, thought he'd be at a cessation but he still be in starvation
Next verse'll be another cremation, shit, this kid must believe in reincarnation..
*changed his name from 'stizo' to 'stylz'
**ie it would be a blank post which in here, is a black screen
***= weak also; dual meaning.
any other q's, ask,
-Ie
edit: added/fixed explanations
Last edited by Reflexion : 10-23-2003 at 10:39 AM.
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MC [S]Lay Bull
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10-23-2003, 04:29 AM
u bite a bit, hump guys' dicks, suck like shit//
yea inf. a fag fo life, n thatsa a fact to life//[facts of life -diplomats]
switchin here
this canadien fag tryin to be wanksta wearin a bandana from atlanta//
when he opens his mouth all his dick riders go bananas//
my verbal assault break more bones than u break sweats//
my verbal violence so gory i got satan anticipatin [my] death//
u like the matrix cuz ur numerical value ranges from '0' to '1'//
multiply that to calculate ur skill level, u aint got none//
ima 'driver' and ima bang 'bus' u all over the 'system'//
dildos is a played out punch but this fag dont learn or listen//
get some skills before you come here n start to "brag"//
if dazzle is "b"ad then i will leave ur shit in "rags"//
replace the "r" and i got u locked tight in ziplock body "bags"//
think u hard as hell but ur shit just sound like "gags"//
"r"emove the "bs" to fuck u over cuz u already a "fag"//
cut off ur scarlp and use it as a durag//
got u leavin the battle arena in a hospital cab//
since i filt ur father's shoes u must have filled yo momma's panties//
since she was a bitch n dyke i guess dat makes u the family pansy//
maple leafs got u wish u could fill my pants//
but it is like michael jackson growin real balls, there aint no chance//
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MC [S]Lay Bull
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10-23-2003, 04:43 AM
explanations:
1 and 0 r part of pc language
buses and drivers r part of wut makes a pc functional
wordplay from brag...dat should b it
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the beautiful struggle
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10-29-2003, 08:16 PM
ahah forgot about this, but here's anotha key:
Playin' into my prediction, after schoolin' ya, your still a dunce
Can't say ya played though..no one would drop that shitty more than once
I will open my mouth to knock this queer out with my punches
Fuck, if my 'dickriders go bananas' then Stizo must be dealing the bunches
Ya flow's all over, punches are wack and ya wordplay's the worst
You've become the bunting wack battler, cuz ya never reach 'first'*
Ya votes? Simply zero..even dickeriders wouldn't wanna
Though ya shit was 'tight as FUCK'..like between Howard Stern** and Madonna
No one forgets--People sleep on ya battles cuz ya bore 'em
But ya boost newb confidence..you're the guaranteed win in this forum
If he's not in shitty battles, he's holding 'biggest BS thread writer'
When his name's under 'last post'***, he could be talking smack or dropping cyphers
Ya similes are weak and ya user rating shows what ya got in store
Never battled higher than a 3 star emcee, but now ya 'met-a-four'
Put lead to whores 'til breath stops, leave ya toothless in mug shots
Make sure the next verses you spit be coming with blood clots..
*first as in winning the battle and bunters (In baseball) usually don't make it there
**howard stern infamously has a small penis (according to him)
**in the B.S. thread
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10-31-2003, 11:04 AM
flobo since u repect this homo, tell him to rap on this topic[al]//
i kno i bring the heat, but inf. stop suckin my dick like this was the tropics//
infinite wonders y they call him 2 figure eight balls//
cuz everytime i gave him the dick this fag just ate balls//
fuck a punch, ima get a nine and let eight fly by//
now 4****[star] mc's knocked out like the 'soul train' [just] passed by//
u tried bitin ppl's rhymes but they slit through ur intestines//
that is y i gave u my stomach so u could injest mine//
mc walkin in a dress talkin his skills make him my master//
but the fag so lame even his flo cant count as a factor//
wid sperical lyricals i eat inf like an imperial raptor//
so it's a rap hore, u aint a mc just lacking actor//
i dont need to rap more to make u bleed crap gore//
when i could get a fag like u @ a 50 cent rap store//
my dick so big when i nut in ur mouf i got blood clots//
now we all kno u 'spit' dope 'shit' but dawg, u missed a spot//
but wut other way was there for u to b half of the legendary Jacques[-Claude]//
uppin for votes
bury goooodd baattttlllleeee magne
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the beautiful struggle
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10-31-2003, 04:26 PM
VOTES
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atomic element
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10-31-2003, 05:33 PM
!nfinitE_ - 1st - good drop, nice flow some hard/funny punches. lol at your opener. nice closer also.
This dunce trying hard for months with his flow, but still nobody feels though
Self proclaimed 'king of iron spits' when it's really 'sucking metal dildos'
"Straight" up? This dyke's pretending, like movie endings, I'll make his screens turn black
Just like going through his battles taking out "momma", "faggot" and "wack"**
2nd - about the same, punches were'nt as hard as the first in my opinion. good flowage.
Playin' into my prediction, after schoolin' ya, your still a dunce
Can't say ya played though..no one would drop that shitty more than once
I will open my mouth to knock this queer out with my punches
Fuck, if my 'dickriders go bananas' then Stizo must be dealing the bunches
Ya similes are weak and ya user rating shows what ya got in store
Never battled higher than a 3 star emcee, but now ya 'met-a-four'
zodiak - 1st - good to start, but about half way it fell off for me, one of your best drops to date though i think. flow was alright, some good punches.
u like the matrix cuz ur numerical value ranges from '0' to '1'//
multiply that to calculate ur skill level, u aint got none//
2nd - again good drop, same as the first really, 'cept i feel you made a mistake on some punches.
u tried bitin ppl's rhymes but they slit through ur intestines//
that is y i gave u my stomach so u could injest mine//
here's where i thought you made mistakes...
when i could get a fag like u @ a 50 cent rap store// - why would you want to buy a fag?
now we all kno u 'spit' dope 'shit' but dawg, u missed a spot// - you say he's dope.. not really a diss..
after what was a pretty decent battle though, my vote will have to go with !nfinitE_ for better punches/flow. but your improving zodiak, keep it up.
peace.
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10-31-2003, 06:38 PM
lol, Mode I thought they were self explanatory but here:
get a fag like u = battle a fag like u
u 'spit' dope 'shit'......= after i just said i nut in his mouth

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10-31-2003, 06:39 PM
thankz for the vote too
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11-03-2003, 03:46 PM
uppin
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11-04-2003, 11:27 AM
Alright, good battle, but honestly in my opinion and I'm sure others think so too....the gay, queer, faggot lines are so played. Even more personals would be nice imo. More research on a person's character might add more style to people's flow.
!nfinitE-
1st verse: Short, sweet and right to the point. Good battle intro. Nice punches and personals.
This dunce trying hard for months with his flow, but still nobody feels though/
Self proclaimed 'king of iron spits' when it's really 'sucking metal dildos'
The first line needs to be revised. If you say it out loud it doesn't make complete sense, BUT nice diss in the second line of the bar!
Viciously vial: my skill to yours can only be equated in miles <---dope line
2nd verse: Even better punches, had me laughing.
I will open my mouth to knock this queer out with my punches/
Fuck, if my 'dickriders go bananas' then Stizo must be dealing the bunches//
Ya flow's all over, punches are wack and ya wordplay's the worst
You've become the bunting wack battler, cuz ya never reach 'first'*
Good job on disecting & reflecting then nailing it with the punch...lmao!
Put lead to whores 'til breath stops, leave ya toothless in mug shots
Make sure the next verses you spit be coming with blood clots..
Nasty verbal violence....good imagery
Zodiak-
1st verse:
if dazzle is "b"ad then i will leave ur shit in "rags"//
replace the "r" and i got u locked tight in ziplock body "bags"//
think u hard as hell but ur shit just sound like "gags"//
"r"emove the "bs" to fuck u over cuz u already a "fag"//
cut off ur scarlp and use it as a durag//
alright, I understood this but had to read it twice to make sure it all added up...ya know what I mean? Like when I read a verse, I try to envision the battle actually being spit face to face and the audience's reaction. So text wise it might work, but on stage it wouldn't flow. Too hectic on the listener and the ryhme scheme is way played by the 4th hit....brag-rags-bags-gags-fag-durag-cab too much, too much.
2nd verse:
Overall a lot better then the first. . The punches still lacked, but the flow definitely came steadily compared to the first.
infinite wonders y they call him 2 figure eight balls//
cuz everytime i gave him the dick this fag just ate balls// <---didn't work
best line:
wid sperical lyricals i eat inf like an imperial raptor// <---good style
vote: !nfinitE_ *on account of better personals, punches and concision.*
One life one tribe one love one blood
Too much has been shed its time to rise above
You don’t have to understand it and you dont have to like it
But were much more powerful when we're UNITED
Ignorance fight it Knowledge embrace it
Have sympathy for people who too scared to change shit
Dont talk it just live it
Enjoy life absorb every minute
Quit placing the blame
Put your mind towards change
Hold the torch, light the flame, make a difference
One love one nation lets get uplifted
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votin -
11-06-2003, 07:50 PM
sup.... nice battle ta both a ya....
Inf. - ya shit was tight... lovin tha flow and really feelin ya punches in both verses. ya really ripped the shit...
i liked ....
I will open my mouth to knock this queer out with my punches
Fuck, if my 'dickriders go bananas' then Stizo must be dealing the bunches
haha... shit had my rollin....
overall good verses.
Zod. - was feelin ya first verse more than ya second.... flow was aight... some of ya punches seemed choppy ta me... felt the beginning of ya verses more too .... seemed like tha heat died out afta a while.... no beef jus givin crits.... anyway...
i liked....
u like the matrix cuz ur numerical value ranges from '0' to '1'//
multiply that to calculate ur skill level, u aint got none//
pretty nice word play... gettin personal...
overall ya had some hott punches and some good flow but ya verses lacked tha hott shit throughout...
Vote... Inf.
peace
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